|Fear, Torment and Loathing|Virman Story Ch6 Pg 38 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
I'm so shocked. I can't believe that she gets raped almost every night by her step dad and bullied by Virat 😡. I feel soo sad for her. I stqrted hating Virat first but when i saw the last part i felt happy. Plxxx continue soon, I have a feeling that your story will be a HIT 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is so interesting!! Bt cn her cheap dad get any SICK!? Really looking forward to reading it! Plz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter-1❤️
(Toleration)


|Manvi's POV|

As I entered my college all I could hear was people calling me names. I don't understand why they hate me so much. What have I even done to them to deserve such a respect from them? As far as I know I have never even harmed a mosquito in my entire life. "Hey s**t! Wow you look more s**tty today!" I heard someone say. Wondering whom they are addressing to? Well simple it's Me! " Wow I never imagined in the wildest of my dreams that a "Bitch" like you can walk" I heard someone else say. Well I am pretty much used to all this stuff and nonsense. Maybe the first few times when I was bullied I cried not for one day but 6 freaking months. But soon even the tears gave up. I want to cry but tears refuse to come out anymore. I ignored all their comments and made my way to my classroom. As I was passing through the corridor I bumped into a tall figure. "Hey Shorty!!" That voice whisper-shouted and I immediately knew who it was. I didn't reply to his comment and started walking away but he caught hold of my wrist and pulled me back with such a force that I crashed directly into his chest. I looked up to see him staring into my eyes with a murderous look. "Where do you think you are going huh?" he asked. "To the classroom"? I replied but it came out more like a question. "Well well you can't just go like that shorty without meeting me" He smirked evily. I opened my mouth to answer but no words came out. This scared I was of him. "I..I thought you were absent or something.." I stuttered. He came close to me our faces just a few centimeters away. I could feel his hot breathe on my ear. I felt a little ticklish. "Just remember that you are a Bitch and nothing more and you better stay away from my girlfriend or else you will regret your entire life." He said in a husky tone. He patted my cheek and left running to Shellby or his so called 'Girlfriend'. I Hate You so much Mr.Virat Singh Vadhera!

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I was standing in front of my house. I had a very horrible day at college as usual. It would be very surprising to me if I had a good day or even a better day. I am happy with the only fact that I didn't have to encounter Virat or his Girlfriend again. But right now I am feeling scared to enter my house. What if my step-dad is here? I saw his car in the garage and understood the fact that he is back from work. Now if he spots me? Maybe I can use the pipe upto my room and get in without he even noticing me? Yes I can do it! So I climbed the pipe and got into my room but unfortunately I lost my balance and fell with a thud! I heard footsteps coming and I got scared I din't know where to hide but it was too late and my step-dad came in. "Oh well look who do we have here" He said in a fake-proud tone. "Aw why did my baby have to get into her room through the balcony when we have such a huge door at the entrance!?" He asked coming closer to me with a pouting face which made me feel like puke. I tried pushing him and going past him but as soon as I did it I was tackled to the ground. "Leave me" I shouted. "Oh yea sure I will leave you but not after giving you your punishment" He grinned evilly. And I knew what it was. He forced himself on me like any other day and I lay there like a lifeless body. I was screaming and crying loud inside my heart. And after sometime he left my room. Leaving me to cry for my fate. Maybe this is how is my life and I doubt the fact that anybody can even change it!

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Manvi's Dress :)

Okay so this is just to show how Manvi's life is like. Thanks for your comments and likes. They mean a lot to me. :)

And sorry i couldn't send pm's to all who asked me caz i dont know how to buddy you guys. I would be happy if you people send me requests or teach me how to buddy! :)

Warning: Not Proofread! X


This is Shellby- Virat's girlfriend! ;)

PLEASE DON'T COPY OR STEAL OR SHARE MY WORKS

Edited by Eleanor.Audrey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Res
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unres...

Sorry galti se post reply ho gaya...
Bt same here dear... Fab writing...
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
Eleanor.Audrey thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
hey khushi check ur scrap BTW!
Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Go to their profile nd u can find option buddy +... Near pm option then u can send...
Or
go to ur friend or buddy list nd type name of person which u want to be friend nd then search ... As u find same name send request...
Hope its work...
Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Chalo ab update padhte hai..
Comment bhi to unres karna hai..
Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

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unres...
Awesome one dear...
Liked it...
Hate hate hate hate both virat nd her step-father here...
Bt ur writing was fab...
Nd
i m first... Yes yes yes...
Like..
Again... Its fab... Continue soon...
Like to see some soft nd happy moments also in it..
Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Eleanor.Audrey

hey khushi check ur scrap BTW!


just going to check..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Hey guys i edited Manvi's dress and even posted Shellby's picture pls have a look! :)

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