|Fear, Torment and Loathing|Virman Story Ch6 Pg 38

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

very well written ..no doubt yu are an amazing writer [:-)]
reading manvi's life story its hell man gosh i soo hate that man and mr vadhera wats his prbs why will manvi go to his gf is he insane ...sorry but cant help help going mad on them ...
update next part soon

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sha19

@sha19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Very interesting start
Feeling very sad for Maanvi
Plz continue soon
Good luck 😃

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FlowerHater

@FlowerHater

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

ohh!!!! I was so sad reading this upd8! Manvi is such poor soul! but a strong girl ! why her mom is not supporting her doesnt she know what her husband doing with her daughter????? My god plzz upd8 soon! eagerly w8ing!

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keerthana

@keerthu27

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

hey fab update dear.i hate virat in this and manvi step dad that

plz continue soon and add me in ur buddy list😉

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Nikethana Taran

@..nikki_vijay..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Wow what an awesome story...your writing is just perfect...manvi Omg she has to suffer so much...hate virat and her stepdad...urgh...shellby is ndgative or positive?? Eager to know how the story unfolds...cntinue soon and if possible pm me.,... :)

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garimaksgian

@garimaksgian

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Hey its great do pm me whn u cont. N I hav send u buddy request. Waiting for nxt part.

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Awesome update audrey.. 👏 👏 ...brilliantly written ⭐️ ⭐️ ..feel really bad for her 😭 😭 ...i m ju hating virat n the step father arrg 😡 ...really eager to read more...will be waiting...plz pm if possible...take care audrey 😊

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Puru-luv-khushi

@Puru-luv-khushi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Awesome...
Hate both guys...
Loved ur concept...
Thanks khushi for pm...
Otherwise i missed this fab work...
Add me in ur buddy list...
Nd
pm me.. I try to be regular...
Again...
Fab...

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Heni

@Heniluvnia

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Superb...
Thanks for pm k...
This was fan writing of piece audrey...
Liked to be u friend nd get pms..
Send me a buddy request plz..
Nd continue soon...

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Hi Audrey!! Welcome to the forum!! I am lil late :(.. Loved the concept.. Very interesting.. Poor Manvi.. She is facing a lot of problems in her life.. I just hate her dad 😡.. Whats wrong with her mom?? Is she blind or something!! As of now Im hating Virat too.. Why is he bullying her?? Shellby is some witch I guess :P.. Loved the update <3.. Im sending you a buddy request.. Please accept it.. And do pm me for your future updates please :D.. Take care :)