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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update. But I want u to continue and give it a happy ending even it is fake
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Posted: 11 years ago
sry to say this...bt d ending is too depressing dear
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
A heart touching one...yes, arnav should not deserve to be forgiven for whivh he has done to khushi...

But, really feel like it should a season 2 where arnav should repend his mistake,sin before khushi and try to get her back...
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Posted: 11 years ago
i am sad ending sucker
i really like tis ending very mmuch because it ha realistic approach
it is the best ending
but i want to see khushi move on with someonelse so that would be arnav 's real punishment so want a sequel
Edited by zariya123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome

wld luv to read the story if u will cont.
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Posted: 11 years ago
What an ending.
Its good Arnav is repenting a lot.
He's suffering day in day out.
And Khushi, she knows he's repenting... but she's not looking back.
Why should she in fact... he's the reason for her pain.
Her father died... he caused her so much pain too.

I don't think you should continue the story, reason being.. not every story has to have a happy ending and you wrote it based on a true story.. so i think you should stick to the real story.

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Posted: 11 years ago
I liked the way you concluded the story ,I feel she can never forgive him as he destroyed her dreams and knowingly harmed her in the result she lost her baby .he wasp not innocent ,so you can do a story in them future if you feel like ,where he has paid for what he made her go through but I like this ending
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Posted: 11 years ago
So that was unexpected, I had no idea that this was based on a true story and a very sad one at that. The emotions where so deep in your chapters i can't even begin to imagine what this person must have been through but strength of the person is very commendable.
As for your writing as someone who dabbles in the odd pieces of writing I know that your heart and mind will have both subconsciously already decided if they want to continue or not so listen to them .
I for one would love to see a reel continuation of this story as you call it for doesn't every story..whether reality or fiction deserve a happy ending?
I'll leave you with that thought, thank you for providing some astounding chapters..I would certainly consider reading something new by you.
Jagruti
Edited by jagrutid - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
[B]Awesome story...

Pls cont this ss..
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Posted: 11 years ago
NIce update .
But,
I want arshi together.
Plz.

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