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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for continuing your work sonia... Very emotional update... So arnav is reading her diary in guesthouse and here in raizada mansion khushk left him forever... Arnav is feeling guilty now... Well guess it's too late... Felt bad for khushi.. She have gone through alot... Continue soon... Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
wat the hell here khushi left him and there he is reading that diary😡
gosh is he having any test next day.soo much engrossed in readiing that
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

oh arnav she has left you
you went to read her diary
and there she made sure she left you
well there was nothign for her to stay back for
husband doesnt love her
already has someone else for him
well more than one person as well
and she lost her baby which was the reason why she stayed
now its over
but where is she going
not to her dad please
any where but there man that will be bad
cheers for pm
sad what he did to her is coming back to haunt him now
and thats karma and fate for you



so true karma does come back and I believe that if anyone does anything wrong to the other person then it will come back to you and then you have own med.
thanks for the long comment like always:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
god arnav plz stop her
save her
nice update
waiting fr next...!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jagrutid

Hello!!!

The intro caught me and i've finally had the chance to give it a read, to be honest, i've read the first few chapters a few times ...then go through a busy transition period, find free time and i have to start all over again because my memory is so bad!!

Arnav is quite a ruthless character to start off with, I was really surprised by the darkness to his character if you can call it that to him to begin with. Total revenge on his side , and not a care in the world for how he is treating his wife. The first and second chapter really bought out how tuff he was on Khushi pretty much looking for an excuse to punish her and in a very harsh way indeed. A mix of lust and hatred is what i would say but that segment with Arnav purposely making sure that glass is broken by Khushi and then reacting in such a way was so powerful, leaves me haunted even now.

So as well as her husband inflicting abuse upon her she looks to have been neglected by her farther too or treated as badly. She has been through the worst of times but Arnavs realization, the change in him after such a big ordeal..and crime by him for the death of there unborn child is obviously going to be a huge thing.

He is trying his best...really felt that Arnavs strenght and indurance to face up to his mis-deads is commendable and Khushi is a hell of a character to put up with two very torturous men in her life.

The fact that she would write.or still writes letters to her farther who treated her so badly shows how she craves for love even if it from someone like him. I did pick up on the way Khushi addresses Arnav as Mr Raizada was that the type of relationship she shared with him or just a formailtity used in her writing?
Her early letters. convey .her conviction to her marriage, her devotion stands out in her early writings to her farther thats for sure

. Even though Khushi was of no relevance to Arnav it would be lovely to know about what Khushis feelings were for him. Was it just obligation, respect for the relation he had to her or did she fall in love with him ? (Even after Arnav misused khushi..what was khushis behaviour towards him like ..Khushis point of view her feeling about their marriage and relationship would be amazing to read upon.)

Love the idea of Arnav finding Khushis diary.. it reminds me a little of my own SS and I think thats why I like this even more :)
Looking forward to seeing how things shape up..will Khushi leave him? Will there be a lot more disclosed in her diary...? Looking forward to the next update.

Thank you.. - Jagruti



Hey, well frist I am glad that you have liked the story and have given such a long comment and I will try to answer to your question:
Why Khushi addresses Arnav as Mr. Raizada, well that is something you will find out on the next update of the story to why Khushi addresses Arnav as Mr. Raizada.
about Khushi writing the letters to her father is her way to express herself as like in the show Khushi likes to keep things inside her and she does not tell to someone who she really feels. same thing here on the story but here she writes. Yes, Arnav here is dark but he has understood his mistakes and wants to make things better for him and for Khushi. that is why he is reading her diary as to understand her pain but also what she has been when he has not with her. this SS will make you cry and I am glad that this SS reminds of your SS, it makes me happy:)
thanks for reading:)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothim78

So...khushi decided to go out of Arnavs life n get a life for herself...

Did Arnav again fight with khushi before leaving for guest house calling her gold digger...or was it in past...?
Looks like Arnav doesn't know about her leaving him and going away...
Waiting for next update...



Hi
this whole update was on parts where Arnav and Khushi goes on the past and remembers it. So, yes Arnav calling Khushi a gold digger was on the past
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RockDiya21

Hi! I'm a new reader of this FF.. I'm speechless to describe how much this FF touched My Heart.. Khushi suffered so much but again she thought about Arnav's happiness above her.. Arnav on the other hand, repenting of all his mistakes... He loves her but for her sake he couldn't tell her.. And I really hate Khushi's father... How could a Father be Cruel with his Own Daughter??? When Khushi needed most he left her into a hell.. It's would be better if Khushi's father died instead of her mother.. Khushi left Arnav and moving on in her life.. Hope Arnav soon aware of it.. Waiting for next..



Hi

I am happy that you are my new reader and you like the story:)
well, yes Khushi has suffer alot and Arnav is now repenting his mistakes...
well, I have to tell you that in this wrold there are people here who dont have any heart and can be cruel to their own family.
this SS will make you cry, this is just the start.
thanks for reading:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
yes go Khushi
kickout that Arnav
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ---Sonia---



Hi

I am happy that you are my new reader and you like the story:)
well, yes Khushi has suffer alot and Arnav is now repenting his mistakes...
well, I have to tell you that in this wrold there are people here who dont have any heart and can be cruel to their own family.
this SS will make you cry, this is just the start.
thanks for reading:)



Hi,
Thanks for replying :)... You are right, from outside the world looks happy and beautiful is actully hell.. And ofcourse it'll make me cry , but I'm ready with tissu box😉...

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