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vtan

@vtan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Came across your FF today, and loved the mystery surrounding them, though I had an inkling that both Amar and Arnav were one. Can't wait to read about Khushi's reaction.

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bhoomigowda

@bhoomigowda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Just caught up with the story, read all the chapters and I loved it. Lavanya and khushi share a deep bond which goes beyond friendship and it could be sensed with little things they do for each other. You have build up a bit of suspense around amar in the initial chapters and all along I had thought it was a different character but never expected it to be arnav. Khushi's emotions were well penned in first chapter. Hoping to read more of it and I totally enjoyed reading it so far.

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

its simply amazing update, especially lavanya and khushi father scene

so Amar is arnav why he lied with her

and khushi father he should know about all this,

so confusion

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Maggie...so glad to see you updating again. the moment between Khushi's dad and Lavanya was beautifully poignant.

As for the last googly...well i expected it ...but still had goosebumps when he announced that he Arnav Amarjeet Sign Raizada!

Yoohooo... Let the party begin! I hope Khushi makes him sweat a little for not letting the cat out of the bag for so long 😉😆

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Mermaid1

@Mermaid1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

OMG, my heart was thudding as painfully as Khushi's when I heard " I am Arnav Amarjeet Singh Raizada". So glad for Khushi. This is once heck of a story you have spun.

It has a magical, private and warm and feel good sense to it. Eagerly awaiting the next update.

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bookadict303

@bookadict303

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Perrrfect! :) greeeat update :)

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

So my guess was right 👍🏼 Arnav is Amar 👏 Oh God poor Khushi, she must be shell shocked 😲 and angry? Here she is thinking, her boss is out of reach to even dream and he turnsout to be her father's best friend's son? and a proposal? Hope he is the one and not his brother 😕

This is still all confusing AthenaA, will have to wait for your next update, hopefully you won't take that long to update right? 😉

I had to re-read the first para a few times to figure out who the person was. First I thought it was Arnav and then when it said "memories" I was like "What The" what happened to Khushi. Then re-read again and figured it was Khushi's dad.

Lavanya is such a sweetheart. Hope Saran will get the cue soon.

Thanks for the update AthenaA!

Cheers

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Loved the conversation between Lavanya and khishi's dad- yes she deserves to be loved for herself and I hope she is too, she is such a lovely person.

And phew, thank god! he is Amar, what a relief!

Thank you for the pm

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golpokobita

@golpokobita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

As much as I am happy that you updated finally and the first part of the update is amazingly beautiful, i am hell confused at the turn of events at the end!

What is happening here? Arnav himself is Amar? Then who was the guy khushi talked to over phone?

Is arnav is the guy who was her prospective groom? Arnav is Suraj uncle's son?

Anyways, my peace is gone until I read the next update..