We will get you back kria. Reyam os Updated Pg 5

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I know mujhe meri stories update karni chahiye lekin yeh os meine goa mein likha tha abhi completed nahi hain second part parso ya kal tak dungi , Hope u like it!

We will get you back kria

I walked alone in the cold weather , on an endless road. I just thought about my life , 3years back everything seemed as a dream come true , i had great friends , my own dance team , a great boyfriend . But dreams do have their end and here i was all alone , with no one there to wipe my tears , with no one there to cover me with a jacket or shawl . They had gone too far to even remember that a person like me ever existed in their life . I wanted to shout i wanted to cry , but i could not i was tired of that , killing myself was never an option , i don't know why but i never had the courage to kill myself , i wanted someone to come and strangle me to death , i saw a car zooming from the road .

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"GUYS!!"

The car stopped.

"Kya hua vicky?"

Asked a very annoyed rey.

"I saw a girl there!"

"What!"

Rinni got scared , swayam looked outside and saw the girl walking .

"Ya there is a girl so what vicky!"

"Dude its 1 am , what the hell is a girl doing here alone , i guess she is a ghost!"

"Vicky chal dekh kar aate hain!"

"Nooo rey!"

"Swayam baith"

They reversed the car and reached the girl , swayam came out .

"Excuse me!"

The girl stopped , she turned and swayam went numb .

"K kr kria?"

Kria looked at him and rubbed her eyes once confirming it was swayam , she replied .

"What?"

"Gosh its really you!"

He came forward to hug her but kria moved back .

"You remember me? Surprising!"

"Who is that girl swayam? Has she disappeared or something cause vicky is getting scared!"

Kria heard rey's voice , she was numb , but it did not affect her anymore.

"So you are here with your group? Great! I better leave!"

She turned to leave .

"I never forgot you!"

"Stop kidding!"

Rey came out annoyed .

"Swayam dude! Who is that girl ? Hey you girl , what are you doing here at this time? "

"Only boys are not allowed to roam at night!"

"Baatcutter!"

Was all rey could say , how would he forget her voice, she was his love , his life . He moved ahead and turned her , pain was clearly visible in her eyes , she was hurt , her face was pale , her hair grown a little longer , he looked at her , she moved away .

"I hate you reyaansh! You are a jerk!"

Rey woke with a shock . He was sweating .

"Kria? Why did she come in my dream after two years? Why was she alone? Gosh! Stop thinking about her rey , she never loved you and you have moved on! "

At that time wind blew and a box fell down from the top of his cupboard , he got up and picked up the box , he opened it and was numb . The box contained kria's scarf , her mask , the address paper which he had asked from the librarian , her pin , and a dead orchid .

"Yeh kya ho raha hain? Why did i dream about kria? And now this? That to when i need to break up with taani ? "

He kept the things again and sat on his bed , he heard a voice as if someone was laughing , he turned around but saw no one , he listened to it more clearly and heard kria's laugh , which soon turned into sobs . He closed his ears , but the voice was in his head .

"Stop it!"

He knew who to call , he took his phone and dialled swayam's number . He picked it up after 2 ' 3 calls .

"What's the matter? Itni raat ko call?"

"Dude , kria!"

Swayam got up from his bed .

"Even you got that dream?"

"Tujhe bhi aaya?"

"Yes , kria said she hates me , when i went to call her! "

"Mujhe bhi wahi bola! Lekin achanak se!"

"I don't know dude!"

"She seriously hates me?"

"How would i know rey? Maybe cause you forgot her soon and you have moved on so easily when you so clearly told her that your heart belongs to her!"

Rey went numb .

"You mean to say that i never loved her and she was just an attraction for me?"

"Ask yourself rey , if she was not an attraction than taani was!"

"I don't know dude!"

"Then find your answer!"

"How?"

"Let's just find kria!"

"What if she really hates us?"

"Kria wont hate anyone without any reason , if she hates us , we need to find the reason! "

"Your correct dude!"

"Chal bye it is to late now , we will discuss tomorrow!"

"Ya!"

Rey lied down in his bed , he closed his eyes , and thought what to do about taani , he wished kria was there with him , as before being a lover she was his friend , he held his face with his hands.

"Can i ever get you back kria!"

Rey cried , he opened his eyes and saw kria standing there , he got up and ran to her but she disappeared , he saw taani and went to her , she also disappeared . He threw a vase down in anger . He was not angry about the fact that taani disappeared , what angered him more was the pain he felt when kria disappeared was not there when taani disappeared .

"Do i still love kria? Is taani really an attraction?"

These questions rang in his mind the whole night . The next day rey came to the college for the rehearsals . All smiled at him , he faked a smile . Taani came with swayam .

"Guys me and rey have some very important work to do , so hum aaj ke baad seedha parso se rehearsals karenge!"

"What is the important work?"

"Uhh ' Sharon , personal! "

"Kaunsa personal kaam rey?"

"Not important for you taani!"

"Guys let's just practise!"

They finished their practises , and reyam stayed in the rehearsal hall . Taani came in .

"Rey i need to talk to you!"

"Taani , voh baad mein baat kar lega!"

"Bhai aap beech mein mat aao!"

"Taani please! It is important for me , i'll talk to you later!"

"Mujhse zyaada important kaam hain?"

"Haan hain!"

"Rey?"

She was in tears .

"Har ek baat ka solution rona nahi hota taani!"

Taani went away from there.

At that time swayam's phone rang , he picked it up .

"Hello?"

"K kr kria? Is that you?"

His phone fell down , rey ran there and picked it up . He took the phone and heard her voice , but she was crying .

"Baatcutter!"

"Rey please mujhe idhar se le jao!"

"Kaha ho tum?"

"Mumbai mein , some farm house , shivam"

And the phone got disconnected.

Reyam look at each other and went to the police .

"Kria? Naam sunna sunna lag raha hain! Oh haan Kria ghai ! She went missing two years back! Usski mom ne likhwayi thi , the case was closed as we got a letter from her saying she ran away from home as she hated her mom ."

The police man said .

"What! Do saal pehle , humein aaj call aaya usska!"

"Number tracking par rakhte hain and we will inform her mom!"

Swayam ka pov next update mein hoga...So sorry for that...😭


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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was really shocked ... that jerk shivam is very really go to paid for his bad deed...
continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys just forgot 2 say dt i wnt b updating for awhile as i fell down on my back yesterday and mere neck mein bahot dard hain so its hard 2 sit nd write...also i noticed ki likes and comments r getting lesser day by day...so just wanted 2 ask are my stories getting un-intresting or very bad?..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting... Do pm me I liked it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey your works are very nice and interesting please take care of your health dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kriyaanshfreva


Guys just forgot 2 say dt i wnt b updating for awhile as i fell down on my back yesterday and mere neck mein bahot dard hain so its hard 2 sit nd write...also i noticed ki likes and comments r getting lesser day by day...so just wanted 2 ask are my stories getting un-intresting or very bad?..

first f all sorry to hear abt ur mini accident...i hope u get well soon nd secondly r u mad...who says ur stories r boring...they r just mind blowing...reason fr less likes nd comments may b due to exam...so stop thinking tht ur story r boring...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was amazing update

Reyam got same dream at night nd they they scared.
Swayam recvd call from kriya nd they found out her add

now they need to find her
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesum Os dear..👏

loved d first part..👍🏼

ragerly waiting for d next one..

but firstly u take care of ur health..

its impt..
updates toh hote rehte hai..

Get well soon...🤗

thnks 4 d pm..

n plz plz do pm me wenevr u update...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update.. it was scary.. rey n swayam had d same dream n rey s confused abt his feelings for kria n taani s angry coz he felt more pain wen kria disappeared n not wen taani.. loved d way reyam spoke to tani wen she was questing rey.. kria called swayam to save her from shivam... that shivam 🤬... he kidnappedkria two yrs back n she s struck with that jerk al thses days.. poor her.. soon update next part waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awosm

bas jldi say next update
m can't wait 😭😭

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