ARHI FF: TRUE LOVE : ASR FELL IN LUV WITH A BLIND KHUSHI *COMPLETED* - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Fantastic update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I Loved it.
Absence makes the heart grow fonder.
I think Arnav will surprise Khushi very soon.
I am looking forward to reading more.
Thanks.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
i loved this lovely story...continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

joe4joe,

Love the story so far.
Everything about ASR is grand.
He does things grandly, he falls in love grandly.
Sorry for late comment.
wanted to catch up entire story before commenting.
I wonder what the surprise it.
Is Arnav going to come home early.
I am so looking forward to next update.
Edited by gopijimodi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Sweet story
I hope he gives a surprise
please pm me
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
awesome dear
you have updated allready so many parts
need some time to read

i am right now busy
but i give you soon one long comment

promise😃



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AFTER THEIR SECOND WEDDING (ongoing FF)
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TERI DEEWANI (ongoing dark FF)
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AGAR TUM MIL JAO (ongoing funny FF)
IF I'M ABLE TO CALL YOU MINE
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UNDER YOUR SKIN (OS FUNNY)
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Edited by ZANADI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Wow nice update joe.. I liked arshi's conversation near pool very much 😛 Loved d way der relationship is progressing!! waiting 4 d surprise.. do continue soon!! thnx 4 d pm Tc..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
sweet story
Arnav is really sweet here...Khushi is also nice
loved the way is stood up for Khushi before that women's
hope he will give surprised to Khushi
loved the update
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

After giving a good massage to nani, khushi headed back to their room. When she came inside she felt tht the room was filled with jasmine fragrance...suddenly two hands wrapped her waist frm behind...khushi got startled by this. She tried to got out frm the position, but she cant. Fear filled in khushi's mind...

"leave me orelse I will shout"

"hw can I leave u? I don't hold u to leave u"

Khushi heard a familiar sound...& she whispered

"arnavji"

"khushi"

Khushi started to cry terribly...

"hw can u?hw can u do this to me arnavji? I was so afraid..."

"im sry khushi, I just want to give u a surprise...i m sry if I hurt u"

"is tis the way to give surprise...u said me tht u will come only after ..."

Light lit in khushi's head

"tht means u lied to me...arnavji, do u knw hw I spended each day without u...i was restless knwing tht ur not coming tmrw...u did hurt me arnavji..."

Arnav understood the damage he done...

"khushi , I just want to give a surprise...but I promise u wont give surprises like this which will hurt u...nw plz stop crying"

"ok , I wont cry . but I wont forgive u?"

"r u sure khushi?u don't forgive me"

"yes, I wont"

Arnav placed a kiss on her forehead & said "wil u forgive me nw?"

"no arnavji"

"ok I will try this khushi"

Arnav placed a kiss on her cheek

"now"

"n...o..."

Arnav placed a kiss on her another cheek

"now"

Khushi was breathing fast...

"arn...av...ji..."

Arnav started to kiss her in her neck...khushi fetl somany emotions at a time...suddenly she hugged him...

"I think u forgive me"

"yes Mr. Raizada"

They laughed together...

After some time khushi asked,

"so nw onwards u don't leave me alone,do u?"

"never again"

"khushi I hav something 4 u"

"wht"

Arnav take a gift & give it to khushi...

"open it"

Khushi open the gift & touch the gift. (arshi's almost suhaag raat dress, tht rosewala dress. I love u dammit dress). Khushi liked the gift very much...she feel the dress material & its designs...

"khushi, can u wear this 4 me nw?"

"now!!!!!!"

"yes, now"

"ok"

Khushi headed to the washroom...

After some times...

"khushi. R u ok?"

"ji...im...ok..."

"then y r u taking so much time"

"ji...tht...tht..."

"wht is the problem?"

"hmmm, i...cant...tie these doris"

"ok, wait let me help u"

" ji...nahi...i will manage...u don't worry"

"khushi open the door orelse I will break this door"

"arnavji...no...u cant do this..."

"who will stop me then"

Finally khushi open the door

(I hope u all seen the dress tht khushi wear in their almost suhaag raat. It had 6 doris, khushi already tied 4 doris, 2 doris r pending. So here come the typical dori scene...)

Arnav take a close examination of her bare back...she had a small mole just below her nape of her neck...he found is so super cute...he circled his finger there for some times...he started to tie the doris taking his time...he teased her while tieing the doris by running his fingers on her back...after a sometimes he lead her to the room...

"khushi, these r 4 u"

He gave her a bouquet of red roses...

"arnavji, y r these 4 me? So many surprises in a day? Y?

For tht question khushi didn't got any answer...but some metal thing slided in her neck by arnav...

"HAPPY BIRTHDAY KHUSHI...MAY U GET ALL THE HAPPINESS IN THE WORLD"

khushi forgot abt her b'day as she was too much engrossed in arnav's thoughts

He placed a lovely kiss on her forehead...

Khushi's eyes filled with tears...she don't knw wht to tell or do...she touched the chain in her neck...it was a simple platinum chain with A' & K' interwined in a love shaped locket...

"khushi y r u crying like this? U don't like my surprise"

A worried arnav asked khushi...

" no arnavji,itz just tht I don't expect all these surprises...actually I donnt celebrate my birthday after the death of my mother...wht is the use of celebrating my birthday...I cant make any1 happy & I m a burden 4 every1"

Arnav's famous temper is back with full mode...

"just shut up...who gave u the right to speak like this regarding my wife...she is not a burden to me...she is the one who fill my heart with love after my parents death...so think before u say something khushi kumara gupta abt my wife khushi kumara gupta singh raizada"

Khushi got startled by his confession.khushi got shocked to knw tht arnav loved her deeply...

"im sorry arnavji...im really sorry...i shouldn't say something like tht...its just tht wht ...I don't knw wht came to my mind tht time..."

"its ok khushi...i shouldn't also shout at u like tht...but don't ever talk like tht ever..."

Khushi nodded her head

"never in my life"

He hugged her for sometimes...

"khushi , ur surprises r not ended"

"wht? So I hav some more surprises"

"yes , u hav...u deserve these surprises...nw come with me"

Arnav lead khushi to the poolside...

Arshi cut the cake & fed each other...

"khushi open ur mouth"

Khushi. Confusingly "y?"

"you don't trust me"

Khushi opened her mouth as the answer 4 the question...

Arnav held a jelabi near her mouth & got delighted by eating her favourote jelabies. The jelabi syrup flow thru her side of her lip...arnav slowly licked tht so passionately

"itz so swt...I loved it..."

Khushi got the double meaning in it.

Arnav feed her all heer favourite dishes like golgappe, gulab jamun,mathur aloo etc...

"arnavji, hw do u knw tht itz my birthday to today? And abt my fav dishes?

"I hav my own sources...i very well knw tht wht my wife like...also its my right to pamper my wife...so do u hav any problem in tht?"

"no i...don't..."

"when did u came here?"

"when u were having dinner"

"did nani ji saw u?"

"she did"

"so tht means she also knw tht ur here"

"Yes"

***

FLASHBACK STARTS

Nani got a call...

Person: nani , itz me arnav.

Nani: h r u chote?

Arnav:im fine nani.i called u to do me a favour.

Nani:wht?

Arnav: nani , I will come toni8,but don't tell this to khushi..

Nani:so chote...surprise,isn't it?

Arnav:nani its khushi's b'day 2mrw...so...

Nani:I understood..

Arnav:don't let her enter the room earlier. I hav to do some works...

Nani:ok ,I will

Arnav: c u soon nani , bye...

FLASHBACK ENDS

After tht they danced for a soft music...

"arnavji, thank u...thank u so much 4 everything...itz the best birthday I hav ever had...now I feel tht im the luckiest person in the world..."

"hmmm, nw onwards u should used to this pampering..."

Saying this arnav pulled khushi closer to him.khushi felt arnav's hot breath on her lips...she parted her lips as a permission to kiss her. Finally arnav placed his rough lips on her soft lips. Both r in their own world...the passionate kiss turn into a demanding & needing kiss. He explored her mouth...a small moan escaped frm khushi...his lips changed his path to her cheeks & then to her necks...he placed hot moist kisses on her...his hands creep to her waist to made patterns... Arnav slowly bring his hands to his dori & untied it...khushi got shocked by this gesture...arnav notice this & withdraw his hands...

"im sorry khushi...I knw tht ur not ready for this..."

"no...I undersand this...u hav every right on me..."

"no khushi, don't agreed to this becz of me. I wont force u..."

"im not saying this due to u...im saying this becz I also feel wht u feel for me"

Saying this she hugged arnav ...

"today I will shw u hw much I love u & hw beautiful u r..."

Arnav lift her & place her in their bed...

"khushi , I love u"

"I too love u arnavji'

Tht ni8 two souls loved each other very much...arnav made her understood tht hw beautiful she is...he made passionate love to her with delicacy...he treated her like a tender rose petal . khushi came to knw hw much she meant to him...tht ni8 two souls celebrated their union...

***

In the morning,

Arnav wake up & saw tht his wife cuddle in his hands...he placed a kiss on her forehead...

"GM khushi. HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U AGAIN"

Khushi wake up & blushed remembering yesterday's event...

"GM arnavji.."

"r u ok khushi?"

"yes...im fine...don't worry...wht is the time nw?"

"9 am"

"wht? 9am? Wht will nani think abt me?"

"nani, wont think abt anything...she knw tht we were quite busy y'day"

"arnavji. U r so shameless"

"wht ? I don't tell any lie? Itx true tht"

Khushi covered his mouth & said...

" ji...i knw tht...don't tell tht again"

Saying this she headed to washroom...

After getting ready...

"khushi , u forget something"

"wht?"

"my mrng kiss"

Khushi blushed & shyly kissed him.

***

Naniji wished khushi...arnav took a leave as he hav a lot more surprises to khushi...

"khushi . get ready we r going out"

"where?"

"surprise!"

Khushi got ready in a red saree which arnav gifted her...

***

They reached Gupta House... khushi got blessing frm her nani & they spended some times together. Her nani cooked her fav food & fed her...khushi was so happy...nandini was happy knwing tht khushi was in safe hands...

Arnav take her to nidhi's house...the two frnds made a blast...khushi don't knw hw to express her feelings...she felt tht she was seeing a dream...

Arnav then take her to an orphanage 4 handicapped children...arnav donated a huge amt in the name of khushi... He organized the whole day meal for the children & supplied toys & stationaries 4 the children...hushi spended a lot of time with the children...she told them stories, sang songs for them, played with them...the children also likes khushi...when all the children wished her happy b'day she had tears in her eyes...the thing which touched her heart was when a girl In a wheel chair asked her " will we be lucky like you to get a husband like him?"

Tht question again made her understand tht she is the most luck girl in this world... khushi replied back "yes, u also get some one who will love u as who u r...in return u just love him back immensely"

All this time arnav had eyes only on khushi...he was so happy to made her smile...

Night...

Arshi entered in their room exhausted...but both r immensely happy..

"enjoyed a lot today, khushi?"

"yes, a lot"

"liked my surprises?"

"no...I just loved it"

Arnav smiled at her reply...

Khushi hugged arnav & said,

"thx a lot arnavji...today I understood tht hw fortunate I was...i hav u, nanis,nidhi etc with me...but those children who we seen in tht orphanage doesn't hav any1 to love...thx 4 making my birthday memorable...

Arnav placed a kiss on her forehead & they take seat 4 there sleep jouney...


NEXT UPDT : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/92680105

The next updt will be only after 16th sept 2013...

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Edited by joe4joe - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Heyyy amazing update
Love arnavs surprises sooo cute and verrry romantic
Beautifully written
Eagerly waiting for the nxt update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
joe4joe,
I like this Arnav. he is nice to Khushi.
I like how they talk. things are so nice between them.
I could really feel how khushi must have worried when Arnav surprised her.
First of all she cannot see and then she is not expecting Arnavji this early.
so she got scared.
I like how they celebrated her birthday.
Thanks for the update.
joe4joe, prepare an index for your story. I also got the same advice when I started writing a Fan fiction.
You are doing a great job.

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