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Posted: 12 years ago
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so guys this ss would start 4m mjht season1 play
concetp of story is the D3 gang
swayam,sharon,kriya,rey, rinni,amar,simmi,nilesh
will teach our mjht gang
samrat,sheena,mayank,nupur,
dia,ranveerjay
so students n teachers r
samrat sheena - swayam n sharon
mayank nupur-ray n kriya
rv dia-simmi n nilesh
n rest r going 2 help backstage
4 Miss Tamana
swayam nupur n gunjan childhood family frnds bt
nupur n swayam r nt tht good-frnds as gunjan n swayam
part 1,2-pg1
prt3-pg5
prt4-
prt5-
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so guys in excel college pura college play ki taiyare me juta hua hai par rehasal hall me toh alag he nazara hai play ki sare members hall me hai par 3 ko chord ki SAMRAT NUPUR N GUNJAN sam ko princi sir ne bulaya hai par yeh morena sisters kaha hai????????????? tamana maam- uday wer r ur sis abhi tak nahi aai uday-tami i dont knw jab se app i mean play start hua hai me college jaldhi ata hu apse milene i mean apki help karne (turning 2 dia) dids tum to aj bhi late thi tumhe toh pata hoga na dia(angrily)-wat do u mean dodo ki ajbhi huh me kabhi late nahi hoti n (cutted by a vry tensed mayank) mayank -oo stop it guys (turning 2 dia) hav u seen them in the morning? dia-nahi par mene kaka ko pucha tha ki vo kaha hai aur
m-aur kya?
d-kaka ne kaha ki vo toh subha ki college ki lea nekal gai hai
(angrily)m-toh college kyu nahi pohachi!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(cooling himself a bit softly)m-dai tum gunjan ko call try karo me nupur ko karta hu
d-mere pass gunjan ka no. nahi hai!
sheena-wow dia tumhare pass apne sis ka no.nahi hai
vo sis jo tumhare hi ghar tumhare ghar share karti hai
how sad na!!!!!!
d-ooh pls sheena stop ur non -
(cutted off as samrat entered look in his cell)
s-hey guys princi sir ne hume auditorium me bulaya hai
(looks up n sees every1 tensed)
s-hey guys kya hua sab ki sakal par 12 kyu baje hai?
m-dude tere pass gunjan ka no. hai?
s-huh!!! samrat ki chasmish ka no. samrat ki pass nahi hoga tho kiski pass bhi nahi hoga!!!!
ofcorse hai mere pass apne chasmish ka no. par kyu????tujhe chamish se kya kam????
(hearing samrat ki chasmish sheena gets angry)
t.m.-cause nupur n gunjan r missing
s-wat par kise i mean
d-sammy they r nt missing vo bass abhi tak college nahi aai hai
relax sammy
sh-ya sweetheart nupur n gunjan late hai bass nthing else
s-par chasmish kabhi late nahi hoti
m-we all knw tht samrat par aj nato nupur college abhitak aai hai aur naa hi gunjan
ek kam kar tu gunjan ko call kar me nupur ko try kar ta hu (turning 2 dia)tum apne ghar par call karo shayad ghar vapas kise kam se gai ho
sh-(taunting dia)vo to pata hai na
dia was abt 2 answer sheena bt there was an announcement by principal-good morning 2 1n all
students jo play me part le rahi hai i would like 2 see u'll in the aditorium followed by teacher incharge miss tamana
in the nxt 1/2 an hour its vry important
[kaha hai morena sis's?kahi kise muse bat me toh nahi?princi ne kyu bulaya hai insab ko?]
apki sare savalo ka javab
just coming up;p;)
precap-d3 members ki mindblowingly fab entry
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww such a cute start Charmi. Loved it<3 Interesting concept both are my fav shows<3 Do continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys I would 1st thank my evestar (additive_monaya)witout ur help this ws impossible really THANKU😉😉
PART2

sare students aditorium room me the they see the hall full in dark n then they hear a song n all look at the stage n thn lights followed by awesome dancers on stage dance on (for the dance pls hv alook at

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=edMyOll1As4 )

Rock d dance floor

Hai ek zindagi do isko ek chance,
De ke dekho- de ke dekho dilojaan
Life is fun, its full on masti
Dil se karte hain hum sab se dosti
For one thing which is our life
Its salsa, its bhangra, its hiphop, its jazz
D d dil se dosti, d d dil se dance
De ke dekho life ko ek aur chance
D d dil dosti dance
D d dil dosti dance

Ch ch Check this out

Its one life, try yaro flip
Balance your moves n u won't slip
Come on move your hip, Its rock n roll, bhangra palo baja ke dhol
D d dil se dosti
D d dil se dance
De ke dekho life ko ek aur chance
D d dil dosti dance
D d dil dosti dance
D d dil dosti dance
D d dil dosti dance

Hai ek zindagi do isko ek chance,
De ke dekho- de ke dekho dilojaan
Life is fun, its full of masti
Dil se karte hain hum sab se dosti
For one thing which is our life
Its salsa, bhangra, hiphop, jazz
D d dil se dosti, d d dil se dance
De ke dekho life ko ek aur chance
D d dil dosti dance
D d dil dosti dance

Ch ch check this out

Here we go

Its one life go for a flip,
Balance your moves n u won't slip
Come on, move your hips n rock n roll
bhangra palo baja ke dhol
D d dil se dosti
D d dil se dance
De ke dekho life ko ek aur chance
D d dil dosti dance
D d dil dosti dance
D d dil dosti dance
D d dil dosti dance

the hole room is echoed by standing applause claps n claps... the students r none other our vry own d3 gang swayam,sharon,kriya,rey, rinni,amar,simmi,nilesh

girls started drowing over swayam n rey n boys over the girls

bowdown n thn princi comes on stage n says

p-well done students wese mujhe kuch khene ki zarurat nhi hai in claps ka stop na hona he appsab ke ki performance ka result hai

turning 2 excel students

p-so students ap asb soch rahi hoge ki yeh kon hai so let me intorduce 2 u yeh hai st.louise ki hohar dancers n yeh yaha humare play ko apne dance ki talent se 4chand lagane aae hai i would request miss tamana n the lead team to come on the stage

principal introduceted d3 gang n mjht bt

p-where's nupur bhushan n gunjan bhushan

n thn 2 girls hurrly run 2ward the stage n

girls-hum yaha hai sir

yes guys they r the morena sisters

seeing nupur n gunjan mayamk samrat gets relaxed

g-sry 4 being late sir (bt she wsnt seeing princi bt swayam n smiling swayam ws smiling bck)sam n rey sees this n gets confused

rey say near sharons ear

r-lagta hai swayam ko yeh larki KAFI pasand aaie hai

sharon lk n gets jealous n rey smiles

rv-par sir insab dancers humare play me kya karege

n in full attitude -i m sry hishighness lagta hai ki app apne dimaag har rose kitarha aaj bhi gharpar chord aaei hai(every1 giggles)

rv-u..

p-pls students n yes mr rathord yeh yaha apsab ko dance sikhane aae hai

rv-par q sir i mean v dont need it hum dance kar sakti hai

n-no sir v need them after all in ki level ki dance se humara college definately jeet jaige

rv-jeet toh humare he hogeafterall hum jo hai

sw-m sry par yeh indivial play nhi hai right sir?

p-right swayam

rv-par sar insab ne toh group perfomance de hai hw will v knw ki they cn teach usse

p-baat toh tumhare bhi thik hai sooo

rv-sir q na swayam humme se kise ek ki sath dance karki dekhae isse humme innki teaching skilles ka bhi pata chal jaiga

p-nt a bad idea par kon

sheena n dia say 2garther-sir me

rv gets jealous seeing the 2 girls execited n goes

p-ok mr swayam u hv 2 volunteers so u deside

sw-sure sir n lks at the 2 acha well lets see humare pass konse songs hai

when he goes 2 get cds he finds them all broken he takes them n goes 2 sir

rv come by the time n says -wow nupur tum sahe thi ihka level toh huh!!!smiles sir jo log ek cd nhi sabhal sakte vo dance

swayams see gunjan n she assures him n smiles

meanwhile sheen n dia backoff in fear of their image will b in danger

n thn swayam say guys cn u'll clear the stage

rv-so tum bhina music n bhina patner ki dance karoge

sw-mr rv hum dancers kilea music humare dill me hai n rahi baat panter ke sooo jst wait n ws

as they cleared the stage light off n v hear a song[sry guys i m new n nt tht good in decribing songs pls bear me if any mistake]

Tu mujhe chhod jaaye
Yeh nahi ho sakta, saathiya[a girl wit mask come on stage]

Meri baaton mein tera zikr sadaa[comes near swayam n every1 is shocked n confused ki WHO IS SHE???]
Meri yaad mein teri fikr sadaa[swayam bends down]
Main jo bhi hoon tum hi to ho[she sits on his lap]
Mujhe tum se mili apni adaa[he catches her hand n pushes her lightly n sings ]

Kyunki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho[lks at her]
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..[pulls her bck she ends up falling in his arms on the other side]
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi[he surpotes her by putting his arm aroung her waist]
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho[lks in her eyes n smiles]

Tum hi ho, tum hi ho[twirls her round]
Arz bhi, mera marz bhi[she keeps her pams on his cheeks]
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi[turns her round n face her bck]
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho[hugs her 4m bck n picks her up she imates 2 walk in air ]

Tere liye hi jiya main[he puts her down carfully n goes a bit far 4m her ]
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai[run abit n goes on his knees]
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala[slowinly get up bt sleeps n she hurrly catches him cuppes his face in 1 hand]
Saare ghamon ko dil se nikaala[he cathes her hand n squieeezes her hand]
Main jo mit bhi gaya tto wajood mera[she puts her leg on his knee n stands slowing]
Sadaa tujh mein rahe zinda[he pick her by her waist n spins fst]

Kyun ki tum hi ho, abb tum hi ho[she lks at him]
Ki zindagi abb tum hi ho.. woh o..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui abb tum hi ho

Tum hi ho, tum hi ho [he puts her down n the dance slowly]
Karz bhi, mera marz bhi
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho[he spines her twise n make a pose stop]

claps claps claps...

so guys hope u'll liked it if yes plsss hit the like tab n do comment criticising is warmly welcomed so does appreciation

precap-whoz tht girl??? wit lots of mast lots of fights
n ha
swayam-pls jhasi ki rani nhi pls god pls god koi bhi par vo nhi
rey-dude kriya humare team me hai sooo
sw-shut up rey
let me pray!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by charmiashah - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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supar dupar
just loveit
ur cocept is so awsome
plz update dear
i just read it
n i really found it intresting
n ur precpe
sw s pray ki jkr uski team me na ho
just love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kriapatel

supar dupar
just loveit
ur cocept is so awsome
plz update dear
i just read it
n i really found it intresting
n ur precpe
sw s pray ki jkr uski team me na ho
just love it

thnx 2 u dear i'll surly update the nxt bt nt sooo soon as its nt tht popular
bt 1 reader so let it b😃 4 u n ppl who would b a silent reader nxt part aft 22n paka😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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K but jyaad wait mat kar waNa
Edited by kriapatel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow it is amazing
story
but i have some thing to tell u
please give a character sketch of each character in this story
and please use small fonts
sorry don't mind
other wise it is nice story
update soon
Aroma/-

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice and intrstng stry line :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow..
keep writing...😊

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