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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update plz continue soon
Waiting for next part
Plz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome n loved all three chapters...sorry for late comments..
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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved chapter 21 🤗

I love the way Arnav cares for Khushi. And with time the way Khushi getting used to spending time with Arnav, and how she enjoys his company was very well written. Later the way she makes Arnav open up to her was smoothly done. But the part I loved the most was the last part. So finally she realized that she loves Arnav☺️ Yippee

Waiting to know what will happen next

Thanks a lot for the pm😃

Eagerly waiting till you buy a new lappie to update the chappies😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
one of the shortest

and yes no doubt one of the best!!!!!

I am so happy that Khushi's feelings have changed...

and gradually she has fallen for her obsessed lover!!!!

waiting to see..what happens next!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum update..
Love it!
waiting for next..
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Before you start to read the update plzz do read this...
this is written by kajribarunsobti and here is the link:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/3681308/toipk-writers-and-readers-dt-note-p74-solution-p94


but this is what she have written...


OK straight to point, I am very disappointed with some of the writers. I am not against any dark story of Arshi in particular. But the rate in which these dark stories are increasing I am afraid this forum will be a negative forum soon.

$. Arnav left Khushi in Alter, and that to with his child in her womb.

$. Arnav Raped Khushi, and didn't even apologize but Khushi forgives him happily and they live happily ever after.

$. Arnav tortures Khushi, but she only whimpered and utter 'Arnav ji'.

$. Arnav slapped Khushi but Khushi kisses Arnav.

$. Arnav destroyed her family but they Kiss with passion and make up


Guys read these above. Are you feeling good, no right!!!! then think about readers. I know every writes has their own storyline, but that doesn't mean you can write something so low. And above that there are more things to be ashamed of, for example the likes in these stories are above 500 only because they have mature scenes, Yaar, mature scene are also in positive stories. Guys IPKKND is a memorable serial for us, in this forum we writers have to write something which hold ARSHINESS in it.

Like some writers are wonderful in which I comment regularly, their stories are dark but the scenes, climate, understanding, storyline, everything is positive even their mature content are positive and incredible. To make a story dark, doesn't mean to turn it into an unbearable thing.

As a women it hurts me lot, I am not against Showing Arnav as Casanova but at-least don't show him as a beast. It's not our ASR. I am also a writer not as good as some of you but I can bet that in my stories ASR is flirt, rude, Casanova but not a rapist and my KHUSHI have backbone, she fights for her, but still I didn't let her sanka deviness loose.

I apologize to this forum, to every writers, to every readers, I beg for your pardon if my words hurt-ed any of you in anyway, I request don't stop writing at- all.

If I am annoying please block me. I know after reading this I will lost my many reader but girls see it in this way, if a guy raped you or left you in alter and that to with his seed in your womb... will you ever be able to forgive that person... Answer it, then block me.

I know it all a fan fiction and we should read it like stories, but your stories have to bear some morals or humanity, if any of you disagree go and bash me, abuse me all you want but please change your thinking.

I am sick but I am typing this and crying like hell . I beg to you all don't let our Arnav & Khushi touch go waste. Hate KBS all you want but don't neglect this.


I again apologize to forum members for any slang language I used...but I request Please stop this negativity.

P.S: I am not against mature content because I also write them, but my writing are not disgusting and unbearable .

NO LOVE
KBS


I do argree with her, because sometims it becomes too much ...and in the end we are wrting about Arnav and Khushi but also not show Khushi as a weak because when I watched the show for me she never was weak in fact she was very strong.

and try to understand if you are writing dark story or a sad story or any story be with your
limits and think about the person who are reading the story but also which messages are you sending...

One thing if you do think I am showing Khushi as weak or you think this is wrong for me to write this then let me tell you plzz do tell me and dont think I will get angry at you because sometimes it helps if someone will tell that this is wrong and bring me back to the
earth
thank you for reading

update below



Edited by india094 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg10 pages of comments and 79 likes, wow thank you 😳
here is the next update:




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Chapter 22

Arnav and Khushi are getting ready for their office meeting which is really important for the AR company to get a deal as if they can the deal then AR make a lot of profits. Khushi is in her room, getting ready for the deal when she remembers Aryan, how will she will Aryan that she does not want to be with him anymore and she loves Arnav, not Aryan…but most important how will she tell to Arnav about she did not love him before and she only confessed in fair he will hurt himself and possible her also. But after being with him and staying with him she have found out the reason to why Arnav did what he have done is only because he have never felt true love and he had no one to tell him or advise him. After seeing him, not as ASR or as a playboy, she have realised that behind the face of ASR and behind the playboy inside there is still a boy who only wanted to be loved and taken care of…like herself…
That is the person who Khushi loved the most and fall in love…Khushi left everything and she looked at herself in the mirror and said…

"I love you, Arnav."

As if Arnav heard Khushi confessed…Arnav came inside her bedroom and saw Khushi who is still in her own world. But when Khushi heard his voice Khushi came back into the world…

"Khushi, are you ready?"

At first Khushi could not understand what Arnav told her but then as she took her mind back, she understood what Arnav told her and Khushi nodded and she looked down as she is embarrassed thinking her confessed she told herself in the mirror before….it is not like she have never confessed before to Arnav but it just that now she is really telling her feelings…her inner feelings which she have not done for it felt like ages after her mother died…

Arnav and Khushi took everything which they needed for their presentation and Khushi just before the clients come to the office checked again to make sure they have everything so the clients will be impressed by them and they will want to make deal with them….

As the clients came Arnav and Khushi came to greet them and after that they started their meeting which lasted for 4 hours…when the clients came out from the confesses hall after shaking hands with Khushi and Arnav and left being impressed from them, Khushi and Arnav are smiling because they have bang the deal. Yes, the clients were so impressed by their work, they told yes but also they have told in the future they only want to work with AR Company.

Arnav and Khushi hugged each other as they were so happy today. Arnav have always knew Khushi is a gem and she will always do her work serious but also make sure they will have the deal. It is time for Arnav do something which he should have done ages ago…Arnav broke the hug and looked at Khushi and said…

"Khushi, I have always wanted to do this but somehow it never happened but now I want to tell you something really important which will change your life forever….would you like to become half owner of AR Company?"

*****

Meanwhile Aryan got a really bad news which could affect his company really bad if he does not do anything really fast. He was going to have some really important clients which would have taken his company to new highs if Aryan got the deal but now the clients have already found someone else and after having call his men, he found out the that AR was the one who got the deal which means Arnav and Khushi got the deal. Aryan become so furious and he really wanted to kill Arnav right now…this deal was really important for him and he took it from him. But when he remembers Khushi, his love…he will talk to Khushi and make sure she will give that deal to Aryan…

"Arnav Singh Raizada, you don't know who you are messing with…because I have something which you can never have or even if you tried to…that is Khushi. Now by her I will teach you what it means to mess with Aryan Kapoor…"

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Khushi is getting ready go out for tonight as to celebrate for the deal….Arnav has been gone after telling her the biggest thing which could change her life and her telling him she needs time to think. This is very big deal for her but somehow she is feeling guilty….maybe because she has not told Arnav everything. The reality is that she is still with Aryan and she have to dump him but Aryan is not answering her phone calls. Khushi again tried Aryans number but he is not picking up…
When Arnav came back, he looked at Khushi who is looking beautiful as she really is…Arnav in is heart knows somehow he have force Khushi to love him and Khushi as she is scared he will do something to himself came along with him…but now he have realized his mistakes, having Khushi and staying with Khushi he have realized that Khushi is very strong girl and she is like other girls are with him.

Now he has Khushi by his side, he should change himself and understand love is not forcing someone but understanding the others person feelings and that is something he has not done yet but it all ends now…

Now he will understand Khushi and her feelings and not about him….

Tonight he will show Khushi how much he loves her and he is changed man after meeting her…

"Be ready Khushi for tonight..."

Next update after 85 likes and one thing also I will fitter my buddy list as many of you not comment and also now it has become hard to send pm list so many people and only want to send who do comment...next week start from monday I will write pm list and there you will see the name to people I am going to send pm to and if your name is not there it means you are off from my pm list...




Edited by india094 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Can't Wait For Tonight ; P
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Posted: 12 years ago
arnav is turning in good guy
n aryan is being bad boy
hope everything will fit in its right place
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmm so things are changing in good for arshi but if aryan knows then god save them. And they are truly in love with each other and gone confess it. Hope aryan don't mix up things. Waiting for the next update. Thks for the pm dear.

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