Day after darkness (reader vs writer)

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

nyce...😊

she loved him but he did'nt

just used her for money 😭

but rey saved her from fallin in life 🤗

thats his true love .. that he made her stand strong again 👏

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ashwini

@kria_reyd3

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

updte was awsome dear . . . .
Fab
Amazing
Beautiful
Jitne words bolungi utne km he . . . 😉

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Meenal

@Meesocute

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Awesome,super fantastic...

Other reason for liking it beyond dat it was a kriyaansh os was the moral of d story which was:

heart touching
inspiring us not to get blind behind one person in life...we must make sure dat person is faithful for our trust..he wil be with us...

And d last lines...

''teacher teaches a lesson first den takes exm...but life takes exm firt den teaches a lesson''

THEY JUST STOLE MY HEART

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

superb OS...loved it very much

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tejal kor

@tejukor

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Hey aroma 😃

firstly i was unaware about you and your writing skill until i read ur os...frankly speaking someone force me to read ur os n i did. and trust me it was a indeed a pleasure for me to read ur os...it was awesome... kudos for ur writing talent dear...👏👏

story was damn cute... beautifully written...especially those quotes...hayye what can i say abt them... seriously classy... my Favorite

one can cross an ocean without wetting his legs
but
cannot cross his love & life without wetting his eyes..

and

Life is different than teacher,A Teacher teaches lesson. then keeps the exam. But the life keeps the exam first then teaches the lesson.👏👏

albeit m not kriyansh fan but fir bhi i enjoyed it alot...plzzz pm me next time

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

OMG. . .
Aro. . .
Its superb yaar. . .
Lovd it. . . .
Sachi boling mai. . .
Mai abb teri fan ban gayi re. . .

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Ayushi (aka Ayu)

@Hidden_Emotions

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Amazing OS di...
D concept was truly very nice.
I loved dose quotes.
Its vry true dat one must nvr trust any1 blindly.
Loved d way u described Kria's feelings...
U r an amazing writer di!
Luv,
Ayu...<3

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Wow aroma kya os hai
Probebly i say speechless hai
U r right love may lead hell or haven
Its up to u choose hell or haven
Harbaar subko unka pyar nahi milta hai
Coming to the os
Fabbulsh os aroma
Mindblowing and the line are writen realy minded to everyone
Amazing
Amazing
Amazing