Day after darkness (reader vs writer)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys m back with 3rd os
challenged by Iman in Reader vs Writer
please visit this page and challenge any Writer
and u will also enrol your name as Writer

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/channel-v-dil-dosti-dance/3554044/kr-and-ss-readers-vs-writers-revamped-check-pg1


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"Day after darkness " People are mad for this book . Until now almost 10,000 copies of this book has been sold . But people are still demanding for this book . what is special in this book ? .
The story in book is special for everyone .
It is story of a girl . If you think , that girls family is really very poor and she struggled a lot and at last she become rich . Then there is nothing like that .

Let see what is the real story of this book .

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This is a story of Kriya Singh Raizada . She is apple of her parents eyes . She is perfect combination of beauty and brain . In other words , beauty with brain .
Her parents never said no . For them she is always right . They never stop her for doing anything . They always , encouraged her , pamper her . Her friends treats her like princess . Everyone fulfill her demands . She is a free bird . Who, wanna fly high in the sky .
She never hurt someone . She loves to do party with her friends . she is also good in studies .

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As you know things never remains same . She always wants to stay away from love . But there is no control on emotions . It's just happens . This is a beautiful feeling which becomes everything for us . Love is a word , which has ability to change a person completely .
But this becomes your stubborn . Then it would ruin everything . Kriya fell in love . She is madly in love with that guy . He is famous guy in her college . Both becomes good friends soon . They always engrossed in their , own world . Kriya almost forgot about everyone .
as you know "Pehla nasha pehla khumaar nya pyaar hey nya intzaar"

you know pehley pyar k kasmey vadhey , ghoomna , wait karna . Kriya start loving this all .
First few months their relationship was really very good. They loved to spend time with each other , go out for walk , holding hand in hand . Talk whole night and then sleep in class . This all becomes her daily routine .

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"Kriya , tum uspey kuj yaadan hi bharosa kar rahi ho" her friend tries to protect her .
But Kriya . she is completely blind in his love "Come on guys , he loves me " and she walked


From last week he is nowhere . She tries to call her but no use . He keep ignoring her .
But still Kriya believes that he is busy in some work . Her friend try to make her understand that he is not good guy . But she denies it .

"When , you believe a person blindly . When , you get to know the real truth of person then it will break you ."

Now it's almost two week and he is nowhere . Its start breaking Kriya . She slowly started losing her confidence . She locked herself .

After lots of hard work Kriya's friends able to take her along with them for shopping
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Kriya spotted him with another girl when she was choosing a dress . Kria completely shocked .She pinched herself . but when Kriya looked there he walked out with that girl holding hand in hand .

It is big blow for her . She believed him blindly . She remembered how her friends try to convince her that he is not a good guy . And see , her friends were right . He cheated her . He Broke her trust . She is shattered . Its is like earth slipped from her foot . She broke into tears .
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As i said , when your love become stubborn it has ability to kill a relationship or a person also .

He already become his stubborn . Then how she will let him go . "wo . mujhe chod ke nahi ja sakta " she shouted in her sleep ..."'main kuj nahi bolunga usko , wo mere paas aa jayega "
Next day she met him . she behaved like nothing's happened .
He also behave like nothing is happen .
Everything is going good . Kriya didn't ask anything him about that day . What was he doing with that girl .
There is only one thing going in her mind that she will not lose him . He belongs to him . But he started behaving rudely . He also slapped her almost two time . She start losing her metal stability . She always feared she will lose him .

For him she is a toy . He used her for her money . Now he got bored so he want to get rid from her . He tried his best to humiliate her in front of public . But Kriya she is stuck at only one thing that she will die if he leave her .

Love when it became madness it will lead you toward hell .

Real Kriya lost somewhere . She behave like normal but her father understand that there is something wrong with her daughter . But what no one know . She used to talk with herself . Now she feared from everything . She has zero confident . She was a bold girl and now she has no more confident . Students start making fun of her .
her friends still protect her from others but how they will save her from that person who pushed their princess in dark .
True friends always saves you from bad things .
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"Lets break up " he said in his casual tone . she broke down on her knees
For Kriya her world shattered . Finally thing happen which she feared for .
"you can't do this to me' she looked toward him "you said you love me'

she tried to bolck his way but he pushed Kriya and walked .
Here she started laughing badly "us ne mujhe chod diya ' . Her head is bleeding badly .
Doctor declared Kriya's mental instability .

one can cross an ocean without wetting his legs
but
cannot cross his love & life without wetting his eyes...

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It is not guarantee that love always takes you in heaven . Some time it will lead you in hell . Never depend on some body like this .

Never allow someone to be your priority when you're just an option for them...

Her condition broke her parents completely . They never thought that one day they will she see there angel like this . They were helpless .
Kriya singh raizada she is no more .



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"Please stop " he pleaded
"No i am not gonna stop , first say you love me " she ordered him
he pulled her in tight hug "I Love You"

You all are thinking who is this couple it is me Kriya reyaansh singhaniya
Yes i am not that Kriya singh Raizada
i am confident . most important thing my hubby is my true love . He loves me alot .

He is one , who hold me when everyone lost hopes . When doctors declared me mental instable . He took care of me like i am her baby . He taught me real meaning of love .

the real motive of sharing this story with you all this . Don't believe anyone blindly .
Because some it takes your whole life away .

Fell in love is good thing . But fell in love with wrong person is lead to hell .


"Wifey you promised me you will never think about past" he lift his head from my belly and looked at me

"sorry"

"Baby mom sorry bol rhi hey " and he kissed on my belly

"Rey you behaving like baby ' i ruffled his hair
he took my hand in his hand and kissed on it "You are my life and i don't wanna loose you "

i kissed him on his head "I Love You to " he held his head in my lap
"soon hamai pyari angel b a jayegi '"

"no i want boy"
"girl'
"boy"
"girl'
and this fight going on let see who is lucky one boy or girl 😆
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Life is different than teacher,A Teacher teaches lesson. then keeps the exam. But the life keeps the exam first then teaches the lesson.

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okay guys m done with this
i hope u will like this
luv u all
waiting for feed back
likes and comment please
aroma_rubharu
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res

Unres

Yeppie I am first 🥳 🥳

Okay back to the OS
Waah di kya os
Bilkul mind blowing 😃
Aur quotes jo use kiya wo to out of this world the 😛
Man just loved this os
😉
It's beautifully written di 👏

And sorry late unres karne ki Liye

Anu
Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres

awesome OS aro...

sowiiie aaj long commennt nhi dungi
mood nhi hai

Btw teri writing skills badi achi hoti ja rhi hai


Edited by -kitty- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres
Beautiful OS...
Loved It...
Awesome Quotes...
u r An Amazing Writer...
Edited by AbhiyaMaaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing os!
loved how u described kriyas feelings
Rey coming for her when everyone left her
and their babyy.. awww
the cute argument whether it's a girl or a boy was amazing
loved the way u've shown the reason behind this
"never trust anyone blindly"
GUYS half of the quotes were Thought by dii itself 👏
loveedd itt!! Once again you've gone past the challenge and fulfilled it 😃
keep it upp!! 😉
Edited by shelly_Arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it dear...each and evry feeling of kriya is described very nice and sweetly.. u r an awsome writer
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing os...
Beautifuly written...
D use of quotes in b/w were fantastic bt last one was d best...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing...
written beautifully...
loved the way u described it...those quotes in colors they r beautiful...
loved it esp last part where rey is introduced.. i hd tears...loved the way rey became support for her...
thnx for pm...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesomee os aroma
really beautiful
and a perfect end too
thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautifully penned ...

specially loved d quotes u added in between ...


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