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Hello!! Everyone... I know, I know that I am very late this time.. I am really very sorry for that.. I had guests at my home and was very busy..I hope that you all will forgive me...And Guys, Thank you one and all for your lovely comments and the overwhelming response...So, here is the next part...Especially dedicated to Tahira...So, sorry for updating it so late...


Part 8


Everyone cheered them and TaaRey were still lost in each other' Tauji was watching all this from outside' Then, he enters the ward.. Everyone kept quiet but TaaRey were still lost in their own world'

Everyone cleared their throats to bring them back to the real world'It was then when TaaRey noticed Tauji in the room'Taani was very scared to see him.. She held Rey's hand even more tightly in the fear of losing him again'Rey noticed her expression and caressed her hand to assure her that no matter what he will be with her'Taani smiled at his assurance'

Swayam did not want his sister to suffer again because of his father'So he tried to stop him..

Swayam'Papa Please..Aap Taani se door rahiye.. Aap ki waja se Taani ne bohot kuch saha hai.. Ab main nahi chahta ke wo aur Takleef main aaye'Aur ab agar aapne usko hurt karne ka socha bhi hai to aisa nahi hosakta kyun ki ab main, uska bhai uske saath hai'

Everyone was shocked to see Swayam behaving in this manner'

Rey'Swayam ye tu kya keh raha hai'Tu uncle se aise kyun baat kar raha hai'

Swayam'Rey Please.. Tu nahi jaanta ke mere papa ne kya kiya hai'Tujhe pata bhi hai ke aaj tak jo tu aur Taani ek dusre se alag the uska main reason mere Papa the.. He forced her to leave you and everyone else'And if she would not, he threatened to kill you.. So, for your safety, Taani was away from you'

Rey was shocked to know the truth.. He looked towards Taani who immediately drooped her head down'He could not believe that she loved him so much that just for his safety, she was living such a painful life'

Rey(hurt)'Uncle, aap aisa kaise kar sakte hain'Aapne to mujhe aapne bte jaisa kaha than na to phir aap ne aise kyun kiya..Aap jaante bhi hain ke main kitna Tadapta tha Taani ke liye' Uski yaad main kitna rota tha main.. Zinda hokar bhi zinda nahi tha main..Bas saanse le raha tha wo bhi is umeed main ke shayad Taani mere paas wapas aajaye.. Leikin aisa nahi hua'Taani ke saath saath apne aap ko bhi kho diya tha maine' Ya right, main to bhool hi gaya.. Main to sirf aapke bte jaisa hoon.. Agar aap apne bte ke saath aisa behave kar sakte hain to main to phir'

Tauji(Guilty+Crying)'Please Beta.. Aise mat kaho.. Main bohot Guilty feel kar raha hoon.. Apne aap se nafrath ho rahi hai mujhe'Main to insaan kehlane ke layak bhi nahi hoon'Naahi main Ek acha insaan ban paaya aur naahi ek acha dad'Blind hogaya tha mian apne rules ko follow karte karte.. Itna blind ki main apne bachon ki khushi tak nahi dekh paaya'Main tum sab se Maafi maangna chahata hoon.. Main jaanta hoon ke meri ghalti maaf karne laayak nahi hai par phir bhi.. Plz. Mujhe maaf kardo..

By this time he was crying badly and he fell on his knees' All were very angry, but seeing him like this everyone's heart melted'

Swayam'Papa aap plz. Roiye nahi' aapko apni ghalti ka ehsaas hogaya hamare liye yehi kaafi hai'

Tauji hugged Swayam very tightly'Taani was very happy to see her bhai and Tauji together'. She had tears of happiness in her eyes..

Tauji then came forward and folded his hands infront of Rey apologizing him' Rey directly hugged him'He then moved towards Taani..He was very ashamed' He could not meet her eyes..

Taani'Aap mujhe gale nahi lagaye ge Tauji'Jaiye main aapse baat hi nahi karti..(Faking anger and pouting cutely)

Tauji'Nahi beta, aisa mat kaho.. Main bohot sharminda hoon.. Maine tumhe bohot hurt kiya aur to aur maine tumhe apni family aur apne pyaar se alag kar diye..Mujhe maaf kardo, bacha..

Taani'Nahi Tauji.. Aisa nahi hai' Aapne jo bhi kiya, ab bhool jaiye..Aap to mere best Tauji ho.. Aur agar aap aise hi maafi maangte rahe na to main aap se baat hi nahi karoongi.. Aur please, pehle to aap ye rona band kijiye..Khushi ho ya gham.. Rona sirf mera birth right hai aur ye mujhse koi nahi cheen sakta. O.K'

Everyone started laughing and our Rey was lost in her.. He was adoring the Cutie in front of him.. He was falling more and more for her.. He was observing each and every little expression of hers'

Tauji kissed her forehead and hugged her tightly'He then saw Rey who was admiring Taani.. He smiled at him'Taani saw this and started blushing'

Tauji'Rey..

No response..

Tauji'Rey..

Again no response'

Tauji'In sahib ko dekho abhi permission mili bhi nahi aur ye phir start hogaye'

Taani was blushing badly and everyone started laughing' Now Rey came back to his senses'He was embarrassed..

Rey(embarrassed)'Kya hua.. Tum log aise has kyun rahe ho'

Gang'Nahi nahi hum kahan has rahe hain.. Hum to bas ye dekh rahe the ki Kaise Majnu apni Laila ko Dekh raha hai'

TaaRey were blushing badly'. And Swayam was glaring at everyone'

Swayam'Guys enough.. Aur Rey tu apni Laila' I mean Apni Taani.. No, no Hamari behen.. Oh Shit'I mean meri behen ko aise mat dekh.. Samjha'

Rey(Horrified)'What??? Swayam tu pagal hogaya hai kya??? Behen hogi Teri' kya bol raha hai???

Swayam'dekh Rey tu na mere Saamne taani se door Raha kar'

Tauji'Are Kyun bhai.. Kyun door rahe'Agar tumhe problem hai to tum apni aankhe band karlo.. Rey ka to haq banta hai Taani par..

Aur main to chahta hoon ke ye dono zindagi bhar aise hi rahein.. hamesha ek doosre ke saath'Is liye main tum dono ki shaadi karna chahta hoon'

Rey was so happy to listen to this that he literally jumped off his bed'And Taani's cheeks were Red and she was blushing badly'

Rey(excited)'What??? Uncle, kya kaha aapne?? OMG!!! Shaadi' kab, kahaan aur kaise'Chaliye na uncle, abhi chalte hain'

Swayam'rey baith ja warna main'

Rey'Swayam tu chup kar.. hamesha beech main bolta rehta hai'Possessive bhai kahinka'

Tauji'Beta pehle tum dono poori tarah se theek to hojao..Main aaj hi tumhare parents se baat karta hoon.. Phir hum wapas India chalenge'Aur phir Shaadi hogi.. Theek hai'

Rey(sadly)-- OK, uncle.

Rey(in mind)'Pata nahi ye kab hoga.. mujhse to ab intezaar hi nahi hota.. Oh!! God .. Plz. Do something..

He then looked at his love who was still blushing'

TaaRey got discharged after 2 days.. Meanwhile, tauji had spoken to Rey's parents about the marriage and they were very happy with the proposal' All the arrangements had started'Slowly slowly, TaaRey were recovering and they were fine now'The gang kept teasing TaaRey with the frequent glares of swayam and TaaRey could do nothing but blush and adore each other'One month had passed'They all reached Mumbai for the marriage'Everyone headed towards their homes since they all were very tired and wanted to take rest'

At night.. In Taani's room'

Rey climbed up into her room through the window.. He looked around the room to find Taani but he could not'Just then, he heard the door of the washroom open.. He quickly placed her favourite chocolates on her bed and hid behind the curtains,,

Taani had just taken a shower to shoo away her tiredness'She came out wearing a short bath gown' She was still tired'Just then, her eyes fell upon the chocolates on her bed'

Taani(happy)'My favourite chocolates' Yeah!!!

She was happy just like a kid'She quickly removed the wrapper and started eating the chocolate'

With Rey'

He hid behind the curtains and the next moment what he saw made him dumbstruck.. He was rooted to his place.. he could not move his eyes off her'. She looked so hot in that bath gown which barely reached her upper thighs'.Those tiny droplets on her neck and face were so appealing making her more hotter'He was so lost in her' He saw her jumping in happiness on seeing her favourite chocolate'.He was so busy in admiring her that he did not even know when he started moving towards her'

When he reached near her, she felt an intense gaze on her.. She turned around to find him staring shamelessly at her..She was shocked but soon it was replaced by a blush'Rey was staring at her face which had the melted chocolate over it.. He was staring at her neck which had the appealing water droplets on it'He was not able to control himself any more'He moved towards her but Taani tried to get away' he held her hand and pulled her towards him' She came back crashing on his chest'.Their heart beats increased' Rey held her waist tightly and turned her around'. He then pinned her to the wall'He then moved very close to her ear such that their cheeks were rubbing each other and his hot lips were touching her ear'.

Rey--- taani, you look hot'

Taani was blushing badly'Rey then kissed her ear and moved towards her neck' He started sucking the water droplets on her neck'He was kissing her neck madly... He then started biting her neck and giving her love bites.. Taani moaned in pleasure'He then looked over her face' he badly wanted to taste the chocolate on her face'He moved towards her face and kissed near her lips'He then started licking her face and lips'Taani was enjoying the moment'She held him tightly and kissed him on his lips' He was shocked but he then quickly held her tightly and responded even more passionately'They were tasting each other and their tongues played with each other'After a long kiss of almost 15 minutes, they broke the kiss as they felt short of breath'Still not in their senses, they were kissing each other's neck and chest and continuously biting it'And then after a long session of showering love, they hugged each other tightly'.Taani was still lost in the hug when Rey came into his senses'

Rey'taani..

Taani'No response

Rey(smiling)'taani'

Taani(sweetly)'Hmmm'

Rey(Smiling)'Waise taani, maine socha nahi tha ke tum itni naughty hogi'

Taani(gaining senses)'haan.. Maine kya kiya'

Rey(smirking) Yaad nahi, kya kiya.. Phir yaad dilata hoon' Ye dekho'

And he showed the red spots on his neck and chest'

Taani started blushing and could not meet his eyes anymore..But, she controlled and tried to defend herself'

Taani(defending herself)'Haan to aapne bhi to mujhe..Mujhe..

Rey'Mujhe kya taani.. Maine kya kiya'

Taani'mmm.. Ye dekhiye'

And she pointed towards her neck where Rey had given her love bites'

Taani(innocently)--- Aap ko pata hai mujhe kitna dard hua aur waise bhi ye sab aapne start kiya tha'

Rey(naughtily)'Acha agar maine start kiya tha to main hi khatam karoonga'

He then touched her neck and asked'

Rey(Concerned)'Bohot dard hua'

Taani(lost in him)'haan..

Rey then bent down and then licked and kissed her neck passionately so that she could feel relaxed'

Rey'ab dard kam hua'

Taani blushed and immediately hid herself in his chest slightly kissing it'. They remained in each other's embrace for some time and then Rey went to his home reminiscing the beautiful passionate moments they had just spent together'


So guys, I hope you all liked this part...Plz. Guys do like and comment...


Love you all...

Ayesha...😛

Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yipeee...!!! first one to comment...
It was relly an awesome update... 👏
competly tareylicious... 😉
egarely watin for ur next update n ya thnx a lot for pm... 😊
Edited by hirudawda - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing! so sweet and intense and cute and passionate! loved it! continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow... awesome and hot update...😳😳
taarey ki shaadi hone waali hai... im sooo excited..👏👏
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thanks for the pm...😊
plzzz update soon...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
di... i love u...
i love u sooo much...
thanq sooo much fr this update...
warna track se me toh kuch bhi expect krna chodd di maine...
tauji accepted rey...
isse zyaada aur kya chahiye...
nd baaki ka story me bol nahi saqti... coz mujhe sharam aa rhi hai!!!
pls update soon again...
if possible with same hotness!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was really awsum
Luved swayam bhaigiri
Then rey he is really cute
He is very eager to marry taani
Then taarey romance it was hawtt
Update soon n PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
ayishu... my sweetheart .. i am sorry for being late .. was totally out of mood last week to read or to write thats y i was inactive..

sorry for late commenting but i will finish all updates i missed.. this one is for chapter 6

this is i think the most emotional update of this FF .. dont know what awaits in the next chapter but till now its the most heart wrenching update ..

that part where rey also gets hit by the vehicle .. i closed my eyes reading that line.. it was really painful to read the rest

what type of a man is this tauji!! hitler will be ashamed if i use that name for him.!! i hate him!!!
poor swayam!!..

gonna read next chapter now
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update 👏👏
I was like awww after reading it 😊 😊
and rey's lines touched my heart

Rey(hurt)'Uncle, aap aisa kaise kar sakte hain'Aapne to mujhe aapne bte jaisa kaha than na to phir aap ne aise kyun kiya..Aap jaante bhi hain ke main kitna Tadapta tha Taani ke liye' Uski yaad main kitna rota tha main.. Zinda hokar bhi zinda nahi tha main..Bas saanse le raha tha wo bhi is umeed main ke shayad Taani mere paas wapas aajaye.. Leikin aisa nahi hua'Taani ke saath saath apne aap ko bhi kho diya tha maine' Ya right, main to bhool hi gaya.. Main to sirf aapke bte jaisa hoon.. Agar aap apne bte ke saath aisa behave kar sakte hain to main to phir'


absolutely awesome 😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow dr it was awsum full of taarey nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 7
chapter 6 was very emotional and i was sad but this chapter made me smile😊 .. it was the best ayishu.. simply the best of all 👏👏.. i loved it..

the way you write those intense scene's where taani gets well n then she
knows about rey and then she goes near him n opens her heart out n that scene where he moves his fingers na , i smiled there .. sooo well written ayishu .. the words had their necessary intensity.. it was so good n that scene na where he asks he why cant she lay on bed .. i giggled there n then came the scene where she shouts n cries in anger n pain .. i dont know what to say .. so perfect n beautiful a chapter ayishu

you are really talented my girl.. i want u to write more works😊
Edited by disismeenu4u - 12 years ago

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