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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: stiti7800

Beautiful!! But I want to know who was at the door 😆



hehe will reveal in next update
glad u read the update and liked it😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyanshi_

Mein aa gayi!! Tujhe Pakane!😆😆😆

So here's my pakaofication!

Aditi!! Shayad zindagi mein pehli baar tumne koi dhanka kaam kiya hoga!😆
Bechare agni n miu ko apne pinjare se azaad to kiya! 🤣

Agantuk mauke pe chaukka maarne se baaz nahi aaoge na! 🤣
Par bhaisahab ne toh iss baar chakka hi maar diya! 😆

Waise dekha jaaye toh meera memsaab bhi kaunsi kam hai! 🤣


Arrreeyyy!!! Meera feelings ko ignore nahi kiya karte! Arey Jo man mein aaye bol do! Apun haina! 🤣

OK back to the topic 😛

Agantuk beta taane Marna kabse seekh gaye! 😛 chalo keep it up! Meera ko line pe bhi to lana hai! 😛

Sunset...hmm.. acha idea tha foru! Kam se kam dono ko time spend Karne ka mauka to mila! Warna bicharon ke bich mein hamesha haddi phasi rehti thi! 😆

"Agantuk was lost in the beauty sitting next to him"
Arey tirchi nazar se dekhte to sahi tha! Bichari abhi to haath mein aayi hai! 🤣🤣
Khair dekhe bhi kyo na! Har kisi ke paas meera ki tarah ignore karne ka talent kaha hota hai bhai! 🤣

Meera madam ek nazar idhar bhi daal lo! Koi aapko taktaki lagaye dekha ja raha hai! 😆

Bechara agantuk! Taarif kari kiske liye aur jiske liye kari usne kisi aur ko hi saup Di!🤣

Woof! FINALLY! 10 ghante baad par dekha to sahi ki koi usse dekhe padha hai!😆

Agantuk bhai saans to lelo! Waise aise situations pe na aisa hi hota hai! 😛
Aur doosri taraf meera ko koi kadar hi nahi hai! Bechara kabse bhuka Betha tha! 😆

'Idhar udhar ki baatein'
Haan haan foram hum aapka ishara samajh gaye! 😳😳😳

Finally meera jab jaago tabhi savera! Kuch nahi to admire karna to start kiya! Baat aage badhane ka karyakaram apne aap shuru ho jayega ab!! 🤣

Haaayeee!!! My agantuk!! 😳😳😳 You're such a cutie! My babyyy!! 😳😳😛

Areyy agantu bhai tension kayeko lene ka! Kabhi kabhi aisa hota hai! 😛😆
Meera ki taraf se bhi chingari Uth gayi hai! 😛😛

'They were thinking about each other'
😳😳😳

11:30 pm...hmm..sochne waali baat hai! Kaun ho sakta hai!

And now Foram an important notice for you! You ended your FF on such a note that its impossible for me to wait for the next update! To agar tune jaldi update nahi kara...to mein...
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Obviously kuch nahi kar Sakti! 🤣🤣

Behen please jaldi update kardiyo nahi to mein soch-soch ke pagal ho jaungi!😆
All in all a perfect AgaM (Agantuk+Meera) update!
Sorry I'm not so good in naming couples! 😛



awww momoians mujhe kabhi paka nahi sakte...
i love to read your comments
and wen u guys comment in detail i love it more😃
happy that u liked a day out of AgaM
and yeah loved the name😉
hehe lets see wen i update next😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzs200

awesome update foru 😃.. waiting for next update 😛



awww thanks rutu😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: foram.

After breakfast...
After breakfast lets wait for lunch😃(From mere Bhukkhad bhaisaab side)😉

Agantuk stood up to leave..
Abhi na jao chodke/ki yeh dil abhi bhara nahi/ abhi abhi to aye ho/abhi abhi kyun jaoge??
Agantuk: ok girls, m going will meet you during our press conference...
Press con😛.. boring hoga kyunki Miu aur Agni ke beech shayad Aditi hoga.😆
Aditi: oh wait, i forgot to tell u that todays all events have been cancelled... now everything will be rescheduled
Yay...🥳Party all day...
Agantuk and Meera together "what😲😲😲 but why???
and they looked at each other
Wow reminds me of another cute pair made for eacch other Caskett...they always speak on sync. And now yeh log bhi😆
Aditi: calm down guys nothing serious
well now today u have a free day why dont u go and explore the city...
Great Idea...suna hai London bhi boht sare love stories ko hawa dia hai.
Agantuk: well now thats a great idea😉 have never been here so anyways was planning to go out but didnt had a company... u two can now join me
Superb!👏 You are genius Bhai...on cue ghumne ka programme. Isse kehte hai perfect Partner.😆
Aditi: i wont be able to come, y dont u guys go...
Even better ...Adu Bachchi.😉Tumhe iss mahan karya ko sampann krne ka purashkar jald milega.😳
Meera: no, have seen each and every place here... will be here and will spend time reading books
Hmm...spoilsports..
Aditi: u will get bored coz even m going out.. y dont u go with him and be his guide.. as u have been here so many times...
Thanks Adu...kinni soni kudi hai tu...tenu gift to maine dilake he rehena.😉
(Agantuk in mind: pls say yes meera, pls say yes)
Am with you bro...😲
Meera: ok fine... meet me after an hour
Thank God😊
Agantuk: yeah be ready on time...😉
Meera pouted
he smiled
her heart skipped a beat
he noticed something
she ignored that feeling
Hai...such a domestic and cozy picture. Love you Dii...I can picture what it would be. Bhai teasing Bhabi...Bhabi crinkling her forehead and nose and that pouting.😳
And feelings ko notice aur unnotice karte hai...tabhi to lovestory banti hai...
"tumhe bhar loon apni ankhon me/ inn ankhon ko me kholun na/bolun apni batoon me/phir iss duniya se bolun na..."

after an hour
both met in lobby
ok miss jiddi u are 15 mins late but no prob... meanwhile i arranged for a car...
i'll drive and u direct me...
lets see how much u know this city😆😆😆
Ahem...Bhratashri...aise Bhabisri ko chidaiye mat...gusse mein unki Adi Shakti jag gayi...toh aapko kuch karna hoga.Waise 15mins late...sab hote hai.😡No Big deal
Meera frowned
but didnt said anything...
aww...gussa ho??

their day was spent well.. they visited famous places
also had lunch together...
I can imagine...but won't tell😆



evening passed by
it was a time for sunset
still many places were left to be visited, but meera asked him to stop by a nearby riverside cafe
being a working day.. there were less ppl around



Meera: i love to see sunset.. as it takes away our days worries with it.. and bring happiness next day with its rise...
Agantuk hardly paid any attention to her words...
he could only say 'Beautiful"
Meera: yes indeed beautiful... she didnt realised that beautiful was for her and not for the sunset...

Wow...Sunset...after whole tour and
I wish I could witness them😳

Meera: i love to see sunset.. as it takes away our days worries with it.. and bring happiness next day with its rise...
Agantuk hardly paid any attention to her words...
he could only say 'Beautiful"
Meera: yes indeed beautiful... she didnt realised that beautiful was for her and not for the sunset...
Umm..."Yeh sari prakriti tum he to...prakriti ke har ek roop mein main tumhe dekha karta tha. Inhone dekha hai meri ekakipan, mera virah."
Hats of Di...for giving the new way to that famous beautiful scene.👏
some time later she turned to look at him and caught him staring... she raised her eyebrow and asked 'what??'
Agantuk: i guess its late, we should go now... i am feeling hungry .. wanted to say this for long but saw u lost in the beauty so didnt disturbed😳 (he said in a single breath)
Meera: (smiled) sorry.. lets go 😃
"everytime I look at your eyes/as of my paradise..."
I hope their waiting will be finished soon.😛

both had dinner together.. and also did idhar udhar ki baatein...😆
Meera had started to admire him.. the more time she spend with him more she was starting to know him...
she started to like being with him... but still was hesitant to open up to him.. to share her past.. her feelings.. her secrets...
and Agantuk was in love with her... but was waiting for her to fall in love with him...
he never tried to take advantage... nor forced his friendship upon her...
he respected her silence.. but did tried to make her realize that he is not like others. and do understand her...
After dinner "Idhaar udhaar ki batein chai/coffee ke sath"...I think they have given the dil bhi lage hath.😆
I understand both of them's condition. One is scared of thinking may be her heart would be shattered and broken into pieces again. She doesn't want to experience that pain...so she is guarding herself. On the other hand as gentleman ever Agantuk is trying to mend her heart and make a little room there for her.😳

they reached hotel and parted ways...
in their room they were thinking about each other.. small small gestures.. things which didnt went unnoticed...
she knew he was staring at her
he knew that she knew this and may start keeping distance
she slept peacefully
he was tensed that she may not talk...
If your love is yours she/he will be back to you oneday. Just wait patiently.😳

At 11.30 pm there was a knock on Agantuk's door...
he was still up thinking about todays events
he wondered who can it be this late...
Meera??? yes she might be here to confront me for my staring session...
(😆 )
Either it will be "Ankhon ki gustakhiyan maaf ho" or "inn ankhon ki masto ke"😆 which one is DIi...a sneak peak😉please😃
he opened door with nervousness.. but was surprised to see the person standing in front of him😲😲
kaun hai??😲Prajapati Daksh??😆
lets see whats next😆😆😆

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ok guys be serious and tell me liked it?? can point out my grammatical mistakes too
as it will help me to improve my writing...



Thank you Di for this lovely treat.
Edited by mmroyalkaterick - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: foram.



awww such a shayrana reply... 👏
and mein shayar to nahi,
magar aae haseen...
jabse dekha maine Salmanko, mujhko
shaayri aa gai☺️

u made my day with such an awesome comment in shayrana andaz
hope u liking the way things are moving


Hey Di tahnks..😳for liking my shayari.😆
YES i am totally liking it...just main aapko jo PM bheja usko padna pls..😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
rofl itna funny reply...
loved it 🤣
lolz daksh yahan kahan vo to apne ghar hain🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: foram.

rofl itna funny reply...
loved it 🤣
lolz daksh yahan kahan vo to apne ghar hain🤣


Thanks...😆 Daksh nahin to kya Himavan hai?? Ya phir koi zombie??😲
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mmroyalkaterick


Thanks...😆 Daksh nahin to kya Himavan hai?? Ya phir koi zombie??😲


shh surprise hai
wait karo
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Posted: 10 years ago
There was a knock on his door... he went and opened it to find Aditi standing...
Agantuk: hey wat happened? u here this late? is everything alright?
Aditi: yup came here to inform tomorrow's plan...
she explained him in detail.. the plan.. the venue... wat need to be done...
he was quiet nervous as it was his first public appearance and he was worried for audeince reactions for him and his work..
he was not able to sleep that night...
the next morning as usual he went to meet Meera and thought to talk to her
Meera was laughing listening to his nervousness and was teasing him...
Agantuk: stop it ziddi.. u laughing as if u have never been nervous...
Meera: nope..
Agantuk: not even for your first project?
Meera: 🤔
Agantuk: see u were and now laughing at me... i am damn nervous
dont know wat to do and wat not to do
help me..
(he took her hands in his and asked for help)
she talked to him.. asked him to calm down and not to worry.. they wont eat u up😆
and i am sure they will like u⭐️

the events went well.. promotions went well.. and they were on their way back to India for movie release 😃

Edited by foram. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: foram.


shh surprise hai
wait karo


Adu ka Gift aa raha hai kya?😛

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