Mohini ff 'New Beginning' - Page 20

Originally posted by: foram.

and finally thanks for your long analysis
from now on i will wait for your analysis for my update😃😃😃

Arreh.. Nahin yaar, I wasn't lying at all. Your story telling skill is amazing, update little jarror hota hain padh the quality is nice and Simple words se describe karti ho, isliye samajh mein vi easily aata hain. And, That's why I like your This story a lot!

you know what
i always felt that i dont write nicely coz
i have read many other ff's and the way they write, the way they describe all poetic words
mujhe vaisa nahi aata
to hamesha insecure rehti hun ki pata nahi update kaisa lagega

but thanks to all that you like the simple writings too

Originally posted by: foram.

you know what
i always felt that i dont write nicely coz
i have read many other ff's and the way they write, the way they describe all poetic words
mujhe vaisa nahi aata
to hamesha insecure rehti hun ki pata nahi update kaisa lagega

but thanks to all that you like the simple writings too

More than poetic or anything, I like stories with simple writtings. The main thing is Mujhe poetic words utna samjh mein vi nahin aata, So iss catagory mein Bohot hi Few mere IF Fav writters hain. And, you Can ask my other friends too.. Main read karta hu and Like karta hu aur kabhi kabhi unread Karke vi Like karta hu, lekin Comment bohot bohot less karta hu. But, Here in your FF.. It's different, Main Fully read karta hu, Understand vi karta hu, scenes vi Create ho jaate, and I like this story a Lot ki Padhne ke baad Comments vi Karta hu! Yaar, simple writtings mein vi Talent chahiye, Which is in you.. You'd always be my Fav writter.

Originally posted by: MrToolConfuser

More than poetic or anything, I like stories with simple writtings. The main thing is Mujhe poetic words utna samjh mein vi nahin aata, So iss catagory mein Bohot hi Few mere IF Fav writters hain. And, you Can ask my other friends too.. Main read karta hu and Like karta hu aur kabhi kabhi unread Karke vi Like karta hu, lekin Comment bohot bohot less karta hu. But, Here in your FF.. It's different, Main Fully read karta hu, Understand vi karta hu, scenes vi Create ho jaate, and I like this story a Lot ki Padhne ke baad Comments vi Karta hu! Yaar, simple writtings mein vi Talent chahiye, Which is in you.. You'd always be my Fav writter.

omg thankyou ray thanks a lot😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
its feel great...
wen frnds support and say such nice words for you

Originally posted by: foram.

omg thankyou ray thanks a lot😭
its feel great...
wen frnds support and say such nice words for you

Abhi itna Rou maat yaar, Main abhi isse Serious se senti ho raha hu.. Emotional kaarr ditta yaar. Agar main abhi by chance emotional hogaya nah, Toh pher for as Compensation tumhe Iss FF ke ek saath 2 updates dena padhega woh vi in one day.. Telling you.🤣

Originally posted by: MrToolConfuser

Abhi itna Rou maat yaar, Main abhi isse Serious se senti ho raha hu.. Emotional kaarr ditta yaar. Agar main abhi by chance emotional hogaya nah, Toh pher for as Compensation tumhe Iss FF ke ek saath 2 updates dena padhega woh vi in one day.. Telling you.🤣

dont worry isse pehle maine ek saath 3 3 updates die hai
to tumhare liye 2 to abhi abhi likh sakti hun😎

Originally posted by: foram.

dont worry isse pehle maine ek saath 3 3 updates die hai
to tumhare liye 2 to abhi abhi likh sakti hun😎

iska maatlab aaj emotional hona pakka..🤣🤣

nai ji dont worry
new update monday ko milega

tab tak keep rofling😎

Originally posted by: foram.

nai ji dont worry
new update monday ko milega

tab tak keep rofling😎

I'd wait for it, Best wishes.

lovely update🤗👏, lool I love how agantuk tells her that he is not in the mood to take her.