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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: Vabs
Foru

this is a great update. I loved it the best parts for me was when Agantuk offered to drop Meera home and she turned him down and he thinking she is stuck up akdu. And she seeing him enjoying himself in the rains with his arms strechched out reminded me of Shiv and Sati rain sequence. Very well written and I want another update soon

thanks sadhna for ur comment😃😃😃😃

and @blue so true
i didnt realised that the inspiration was from jata epi😆😆😆

and will update soon😃

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Foram

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: maluni

WOW,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
SUPER...👏👏👏
WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE...

ANGANTUK DROP MEERA...

MY HEART IS GOING DUMDANA...😳😳

hehe thanks for reading and for your comment😃😃😃😃

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Foram

@foram.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: chand1234
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inna chotu as upd? 😡

shant chutki shant😆😆😆

Awww...hi bola donnon me... Awww😳

Yeh lo🤢

I expectd something romantic...aur yeh kya hogaya? She walked away!!! Lolzzz 😆

milega sabar karo😳😳😳😳
Agantuk...she is nt like tht😭

Akdu 😆

Hmm..abhi toh baarish bhi ho rahi hai!! Very romantic 😳

Haha...now meera is calling him Akdu 😆

Plzzz upd soonnn!!!

yeah will do😃😃😃😃

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Foram

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

thankyou guys for your support and encouragement😃😃😃😃😃

Edited by foram. - 12 years ago

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Foram

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Meera was wearing a whilte kurti and salwar with red duppatta..
she was compltly wet 😳
she covered her hairs with dupatta and
went running towards Agantuk...

Meera : Xcuse me... Aa... Aagantuk...

hearing his name from Meera, agantuk's Heart skiped a beat...
his heart started dancing

he turned
Agantuk: did you called me ma'am???
he asked innocently😳

Meera: yes, hmmm can you drop me home??? pls
its raining and i dont have umbrella
pls drop me home...

Agantuk(😃) well sorry ma'am but cant you see
m njoying rain and i dont want to get disturbed...
pls go by yourself...

Meera: how can you allow a lonley girl to go home alone in this weather?
dont you have manners????

Agantuk: oh pls wen i sincerely asked you, you denied???
now m not in a mood to drop you home😉

Meera: ok sorry, now plzzz
(kitna bhaav khata hai, dekh lungi isko baad me😡😡😡)

Agantuk: ohk...

but he stopped
suddenly...rain drops increased in size...
wind started blowing wildly...
there was thunder and lightning in the sky...
sea had become furious...

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sorry for mistakes😃😃😃

Edited by foram. - 12 years ago

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Foram

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Lovely Update !!!!

thanks dear😃

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sucheta

@kaatayani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Ab kya hoga?
M excited!

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Foram

@foram.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: kaatayani
Ab kya hoga?
M excited!

me too 😃

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Rayan

@MrToolConfuser

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

awaited for your update, eagerly. And, How lucky, you really have given us a update. Thanks, yaar. 🥳

as I've already said their nok-jhoks were getting better by each meetings , so At today it was at it best, i literally laughed out loud at her self-thoughts, "bhaav khata hain and dekhlunga" lol..😆 That was Epic!🤣 I can imagine Junoon's MeeraG's expression here, her furious yet with the strong substance of innocence in it.

I couldn't have asked more as you totally nailed it down and made this update impressive, with yet another outstanding story tellings.👍🏼 Cheers to you, with a sincere thanks for taking out your time to update it. :)
PS: i know, I'm sounding robotic nowadays, It's actually the effects of new Study-mania.. Because of which, I'm sounding like this..😆
waise.. Sach mein, Update awesome tha yyaaar!!🥳🥳

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Foram

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Posted: 12 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: MrToolConfuser
awaited for your update, eagerly. And, How lucky, you really have given us a update. Thanks, yaar. 🥳
are you serious???😲😲😲

as I've already said their nok-jhoks were getting better by each meetings , so At today it was at it best, i literally laughed out loud at her self-thoughts, "bhaav khata hain and dekhlunga" lol..😆 That was Epic!🤣 I can imagine Junoon's MeeraG's expression here, her furious yet with the strong substance of innocence in it.

so true, you guessed it right😃😃😃

I couldn't have asked more as you totally nailed it down and made this update impressive, with yet another outstanding story tellings.👍🏼 Cheers to you, with a sincere thanks for taking out your time to update it. :)

kitna chane ke jhad pe chadayga
pata hai mujhe tu jhut bol raha hia😭😭😭

PS: i know, I'm sounding robotic nowadays, It's actually the effects of new Study-mania.. Because of which, I'm sounding like this..😆
waise.. Sach mein, Update awesome tha yyaaar!!🥳🥳