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Foram

@foram.

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Hey hiii ...Agantuk said with a smile😃😃😃😃
Hiii...she replied😃😃😃

and then walked away...
Agantuk 😕😕😕😕😕😕
he looked back and again said hiii,
erm i guess you didnt recognised me??????

Meera: hiii, and i recognised you, and you dont need to
remind me that again and again...
and right now i want to be alone can you just leave...
Agantuk( she is having so much of attitude, cant she just talk nicely)
Meera: did you said anything???
Agantuk: no
and she walked away...

Agantuk: Ma'am what you doing here, its so late you
should not be here... should i drop you home (😃😃😃)
Meera: will you just leave me alone, i can take care of myself...
thanks for your concern and help but no thanks

Agantuk( hmmm "akdu" but i cant leave her alone,
need to be here, i know miss "akdu" wil need my help😡 )

he stopped there waiting for her to return and kept looking
in her direction...

Suddenly it started raining...with lightning and thunder
She ran under a tree, but it was not sufficient as
she got completly wet.

from there she saw Agantuk...
he was looking at sky and was welcoming each drop
of rain with a wide smile and open arms...

she was amused that how can one be happy getting wet in rain😕
though she loved rain, but just njoyed from her window
she didnt liked to get wait, and now she was so so angry on
herself coz she got wet... now anyhow she wanted to reach home
as soon as possible...
she made her mind and called agantuk
Meera: hello xcuse me hello...
Agantuk knewed shez calling but didnt paid any attention
Meera: hawww he is so "akdu"😡😡😡
m calling him since long but he is acting like he didnt heard...

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hit like and do comment😃😃😃😃😃
sorry for mistakes😃😃😃

Edited by foram. - 12 years ago

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Ria

@chand1234

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: foram.
vaise iske bad ek aur story hai dimag me teenage love pe.

omggg

really? thn am waiting fr ur 2nd ff😃😃

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Silvy

@SilverBell

Viewbie

+ 14

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

This Is So Very Cute Foram. (:

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Rayan

@MrToolConfuser

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

That was a Faboulous update. The sense of humor in it was awesome with "Akdu" word, First He said and then She said it.🤣
and, In meeting he said.. He want to help her by droping her to home.. was nice, But there MeeraG's irritation was quite justified since She just met him and How can she Trust a person so easily when the other person she thought as A Suave has Betrayed her trust (her fiance).
and.. I really liked your last part here, The scene of Rain, I remember the trailer sequence from A2 where Rahul was totally moved by the rain, You've described this part really nicely.👏
You're really Improving, Brilliantly. All the Very best for your Next update. :)

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Foram

@foram.

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: SilverFairy
This Is So Very Cute Foram. (:

thanku so much for reading and for ur comment 🤗

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Foram

@foram.

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: MrToolConfuser
That was a Faboulous update. The sense of humor in it was awesome with "Akdu" word, First He said and then She said it.🤣
and, In meeting he said.. He want to help her by droping her to home.. was nice, But there MeeraG's irritation was quite justified since She just met him and How can she Trust a person so easily when the other person she thought as A Suave has Betrayed her trust (her fiance).
and.. I really liked your last part here, The scene of Rain, I remember the trailer sequence from A2 where Rahul was totally moved by the rain, You've described this part really nicely.👏
You're really Improving, Brilliantly. All the Very best for your Next update. :)

ray 😭😭😭
nice analysis and m glad that u likd the update. i feel nice wen people say m improving. Dis is al becoz of my al frnds here who encourage me to write better and best. Hehe both are Mr. and Miss. Akdu.😆 😆 😆
and A2 ki to bat mat kar m stil crazy for that movie.

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Rayan

@MrToolConfuser

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: foram.
ray 😭😭😭
nice analysis and m glad that u likd the update. i feel nice wen people say m improving. Dis is al becoz of my al frnds here who encourage me to write better and best. Hehe both are Mr. and Miss. Akdu.😆 😆 😆
and A2 ki to bat mat kar m stil crazy for that movie.

That's the Sprite, I'm talking about!! Keep writting, I'm now really hooked to this FF of yours.

and Yeah, Mr. & Miss. Akdu.. I'm really liking theirs nokjhoks.😆

about A2.. I knew it and It had to be, That was a nice movie.👍🏼

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Foram

@foram.

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: MrToolConfuser

That's the Sprite, I'm talking about!! Keep writting, I'm now really hooked to this FF of yours.

and Yeah, Mr. & Miss. Akdu.. I'm really liking theirs nokjhoks.😆

about A2.. I knew it and It had to be, That was a nice movie.👍🏼

thank u so much ray 😃