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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: ankitachoudhury

wooo that was awesome yaar...
hope to see arshi's face off soon...
brilliant update...👍🏼

thnku
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Swaran13

yay! u update! 😃

awesome, please continue

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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: seeta_naips

Sana's last name is Shergil

Is Khushi married to Samrat?

But i am certain the she is Arnav's daughter

hmm will see
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY

awesome update😊😊...cant wait for arhi meet...waiting eagerly for the next update..continue son..and thanks for the pm

thnku
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thnku
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

HOPE ARSHI MEET SOON……….

SANA IS JUST LIKE ARNAV…………..

HOPE ARNAV SOON FINDS ABOUT SANA ASWELL………

CONTINUE SOON…………

WAITING……………

PLEASE DO PM ME………………

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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
hello! hows yew all? hope u all are fine...here is update...

chapter 2

recape:arnav:muje esa kyun lag ra hai ke me is bachi ko barso se janta hun ...muje kyun lag ra hai mera is se koi to connection hai...or muje esa kyun lag ra hai khushi mere aas pass hai...

khushi:samrat me abhi ati hoon sana ke pass se..

samrat:ohk!

khushi leave to backstage...

khushi:wah! bacha tumne muje bataya kyun nahi ke tum ye act karne wali ho?

sana:mama muje laga ap ko bura lage ga...

khushi:are! muje kyun bura lage ga...

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sana:i know me hi jeetoon gi...cuz mene harna kabi seekha nahi hai...

khushi:bilkul apne papa pe gayii hai...

khushi's eyes was teary...

anoucment: tropy dene ke liye um apne aj ke cheaf guest ko bolate hen...Mr.arnav singh raizada...


all clap...

and arnav come on stage...

arnav:today's winner is..sana garewal...

sana come... ans take tropy..

sana:thanku.

arnav smile...

mam:sana tum kuch kehna chaho gi..

sana:hmm...thankfull to my mom this tropy is mine cuz of my mom love you mom...

arnav:tum apne dad ke liye kuch nahi kaho gi...

sana:i have no father...

sana left...

arnav confused...

but khushi is not there...sad...

arnav jane lagta hai wapis dheli...tabi is ki nazar sana per jati hia...

arnav:hi bacha...(smile0

sana:hello! sorry for my misbehave..mr.raizada..(rudly)

arnav:its ok..how do u know my name?

sana:mam ne stage pe apka nam liya tha..(chota ASR) 😆

arnav:oh yeah! right..

sana:hmm..

arnav:can u come with me please just 2 min...

sana:why??

arnav:please

sana:fine just 2 min..

arnav:yeah...

arnav use car ke kareeb lejata hai...or car se ek packet nikalta hai...

arnav:bacha this is for u!

sana:what the! what is this?

arnav:today's winner is u thats why i gifted u!

sana:i dont need...

arnav:but...

sana:and i dont like to strangers gifted me...

arnav:em not stranger...

sana:u are...

then samrat come...

samrat:what heppen? sana?

sana:he want to gift me...but i reject it...

arnav:ye me tume jeetne ki khushi me dera hoon!

samrat:come on sana rakh lo itne pyaar se uncle tume dere hen...

sana:ohk! ap keh re ho to le leti hoon...wese to humari mama kehti hen ke stranger se kuch nahi lena chaye or na hi un se bat karni chayie..but its alright...(rudly)

arnav:oh1 to apki mama bhi phir apki tarah hongi...?

sana:nahi! (rude)

and running...

samrat:sorry! wo esi hi hai..thora rude behave karti hai...

arnav:oh koi bat nahi she is kid...

samrat:ok me chalta hoon bye..

arnav:hmm bye...

both left..

in car...

khushi:sana ye apke hath me kya hai?

sana:gift...

khushi:gift kisne diya apko mene mana kiya hai na kisi stranger se gift mat liya karo or na hi unse bat kiya karo...

sana:oh mama please not again am tride so me sori hoon...

sana car me peache so jati hai...

samrat:kya hua khushi kya soch ri ho?

khushi:who gave this gift to sana?

samrat:arnav...

khushi shocked to hear arnav name...

khushi:ar..arnav..

samrat:yes arnav singh raizada ur hasbend..and sana's father...

khushi:wo yahan aye the kahan mene unko nahi dekha...

samrat:sana ko tropy usi ne di or ye gift bhi usi ne dia sana ko...

khushi:samrat kahin usne sana ko pehchan to nahi liya?

samrat:no! but wo sana ke bohat kareeb ana cha ra tha...but mene ane nahi diya...

khushi:thank GOD!


in dheli...

AR

arnav:aman!

aman:asr! khushi mumbai me hai...

arnav:what ????????

aman:yes! asr! mene pata lagaya...or wo SG company me job karti hai...as a P.A

arnav:ok then we are leave to mumbai...

aman:no asr..

arnav:what the!!!

aman:asr khushi shayad dheli aye gi isi week me...

arnav:shayad nahi muje pakka pata kar ke batao? other wise i'll fired u!

aman:ohk asr...

aman left...

next day!

in RM

arnav's room...

cell ringing...

arnav:yes aman?

aman:asr! khushi isi week me dheli aye gi...

arnav:ohk...pata karo wo kyun ari hai or kis ke sath aye gi..muje agle 1 ghante me information chayie...

aman:right asr!

call ended...

in mumbai...

khushi:hey! DM please meri sana ki raksha karna...or kabi ye na pata lagne dena ke arnav jii hi uske father hen...

sana:mom where is my pasta?

khushi:abhi layii...

sana:hmm...

khushi gave her pasta...

khushi:sana hum kal hi dheli jayen ge ok...

sana:urrg! not again muje nahi jana...muje wahan ghabrahat hoti hai...

khushi:bacha its importnt for u...

sana:why mama???

khushi:cuz ur not well na...

sana:to hum mar kyun nahi jate ap ko itni takleef dete hen...

khushi: sannaaa! esa nahi kehte bacha...u know na api mama ka apke ellawa is duniya me koi nahi hai...

sana:sorry! mama...

khushi:hmm...

sana:mama where is my real papa?

khushi:sana its to late go and sleep...

sana:its not my answer

khushi:sana mene kaha na go and sleep...and never ask me this question..

sana:fine! (angry)

sana leave to sleep...

next day!

RM

anj:chotte what heppen? why are u smiling??

arnav:nothing di...

raj:arnav kya chupa re ho?

arnav:nothing jijaji...me bas us bachi ko yad kar raha tha jo muje kal mumbai me mili thi...

anj:acha esa kya tha us bachi me jisne apki muskan wapis layii...??

arnav:she is just like me...when she talk she is look like lil ASR ...(SMILE)

raj: really! who is she?

arnav:dont know...

anj:her name?

arnav:sana...

raj/anj:nice name...

arnav:she is also nice...

all smile...

then arnav left...

in mumbai...

samrat:sorry! khushi me nahi askata tum or sana chale jao me jab bhi free hoa me ajaoon ga promise...

khushi:koi bat nahi samrat...

sana:dad! ana zarur ok..kya pata ap muj se last time mil re ho...

samrat:shut up! nothing will happen to u...samjii

sana:GOD ! knows better...

khushi:sanaa dobara mat shuro hojana raat ko bhi mene mana kia tha na..

sana:ok ok fine...

samrat:bye guyxx..

sana/khushi: bye...

both left for dheli...


here is part end,,...



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Edited by Marinajan - 12 years ago
Marinajan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: MT_loverboy

thats amazing...

loved it

thnkss...ur commented on my story 1st time...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

sana has some disease?????/

khushi is coming delhi
now what will happen next????

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