[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 98

How are you still alive after a teaser like this.

Originally posted by: NushIsh

How are you still alive after a teaser like this.

And what have you done with Virat, when are you getting to the parts where you are going to unfold the mystery of the present and the future,

Come and update soon.

Next chapter ONLY :p

amazing teaser...Nw update..

yeah faria I have stopped worrying abt wht ur gonna do evil...hehe...

i m late :/ i m soryyy !! blame my uni !!! ;'(
actually have read the update since u updated but haven't got enough time to come here n comment >.<
Coming to the update it was awesomeee !!!! i loved the way u have written the povs !!! the emotions were superbly portrayed !!!!
aargh i hate jeremyyy !!!!😡😡😡 firstly his entry at the wrong timing n the way he was brain washing manvi !!!! hmmph !!!! >.<
i feel bad for virat !!!! the way manvi run away !!! ;'(
virman n the taxt driver !!! <3 this scene was lovely !!! ❤️
n the changing room soon !!! my god !! it as fab !!! ( aisee scene dete rahoo !!! :P) hayyye !!! virat ❤️
awwieee manvi pataooing virat n making him drink medicine !!! ( i love this Faria !!!:P)
looking forward for part 2 !!! will be waiting !!!

p.s OMG The teaser !!! Update ASAP !!!! :D
n abt the baby !!! he is not virat ;'( no u can't do tat Faria !!! plz !!! ;'(

have strt reading dis ff. .plz pm me wen u update...hav sent buddy req.

Hehehahah. I hope a new thread is on its wayyy!! 😃

And plz give us an 18+ thing 😳 😛

Originally posted by: virman123

And plz give us an 18+ thing😳😛

*caughs* give a solid reason to give u one :p

Originally posted by: .Yamin.

i m late :/ i m soryyy !! blame my uni !!! ;'(
actually have read the update since u updated but haven't got enough time to come here n comment >.<
Coming to the update it was awesomeee !!!! i loved the way u have written the povs !!! the emotions were superbly portrayed !!!!
aargh i hate jeremyyy !!!!😡😡😡 firstly his entry at the wrong timing n the way he was brain washing manvi !!!! hmmph !!!! >.<
i feel bad for virat !!!! the way manvi run away !!! ;'(
virman n the taxt driver !!! <3 this scene was lovely !!! ❤️
n the changing room soon !!! my god !! it as fab !!! ( aisee scene dete rahoo !!! :P) hayyye !!! virat ❤️
awwieee manvi pataooing virat n making him drink medicine !!! ( i love this Faria !!!:P)
looking forward for part 2 !!! will be waiting !!!

p.s OMG The teaser !!! Update ASAP !!!! :D
n abt the baby !!! he is not virat ;'( no u can't do tat Faria !!! plz !!! ;'(

Don't feel bad for virat he is a meany boy :) lol aise scene hmmm lol :p thank u for the comment

Originally posted by: Huma0301

Awesome update
seriously wats jeremy up to
im gettin really angry on manvi
She needs to sort herself out n tell the difference between brqin n heart
poor virat hayeee hes such a cute baby
eager to read next part nw
really want mystery to be revealed yaar 😉

I kno right she need to express her feelings