[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 33

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Posted: 12 years ago
arre faria is back with update... ahhaan okay jeremy is kamina and lisa is not a bitch, but how dare she called my maanvi a prostitute...now she is a dirty bitch ...hummm good...and yeah u can't do that with maanvi, keep her clean...u and your evil giri and yeah i m not confused now , may be i know what is going to come...enjoyed reading and yeah it was a filler update...and why we will kill you...let us get what we want then we will say u hello hi and offcourse bye bye lol...okay now do update soon aur teaser toh tumara ready hi hoga right...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Faria jii - tussi sach meing GREAT ho!!!wat a dhamakedaar update omg- so much happened n it was so fab that I dnt kno where to start n wat to say- loved it sooo much b haaawww hw did u kno my mouth was open while reading the update 😆dnt do this to poor virat yaar- he is going through so much: mentally,p hysically and emotionally too 😭bt still this is goin even more interesting sorry to say bt that's nt good news, its bad news for me cuz I love ur LONGGG chapters yaar anyway update however u want- at least we r getting these mind- blowing updatelove ur alongside commentary- always makes me laugh thanx a tonne for this update- continue soon (I only say continue soon cuz I kno u dnt lyk it)😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SNTG

arre faria is back with update... ahhaan okay jeremy is kamina and lisa is not a bitch, but how dare she called my maanvi a prostitute...now she is a dirty bitch ...hummm good...and yeah u can't do that with maanvi, keep her clean...u and your evil giri and yeah i m not confused now , may be i know what is going to come...enjoyed reading and yeah it was a filler update...and why we will kill you...let us get what we want then we will say u hello hi and offcourse bye bye lol...okay now do update soon aur teaser toh tumara ready hi hoga right...



Lol usually my promos r ready but today no :/ will give one next week. Trying to shorten chapters so might jut give update instead teaser :p

Keep her clean? Ahem! How do u expect her to be clean when_________________ 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

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<font color="#0099ff">Faria jii - tussi sach meing GREAT ho!!!

</div>wat a dhamakedaar update omg- so much happened n it was so fab that I dnt kno where to start n wat to say- loved it sooo much b haaawww hw did u kno my mouth was open while reading the update 😆dnt do this to poor virat yaar- he is going through so much: mentally,p hysically and emotionally too 😭bt still this is goin even more interesting sorry to say bt that's nt good news, its bad news for me cuz I love ur LONGGG chapters yaar anyway update however u want- at least we r getting these mind- blowing updatelove ur alongside commentary- always makes me laugh <div>
thanx a tonne for this update- continue soon (I only say continue soon cuz I kno u dnt lyk it)😉</font>



How I know ur mouth was open cuz I do double task! First write as a writer thn read as reader! ;)
Thanks for ur feedback appreciated ^___^
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria12345



Lol usually my promos r ready but today no :/ will give one next week. Trying to shorten chapters so might jut give update instead teaser :p

Keep her clean? Ahem! How do u expect her to be clean when_________________ 😉


trying to shorten updates whyyy ?????????? yeah i agree ur some update's were extra long but this one was perfect not so big ... not so short...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SNTG


trying to shorten updates whyyy ?????????? yeah i agree ur some update's were extra long but this one was perfect not so big ... not so short...



Will try my best to shorten it but let's see my phone is an ass always ends being a humangous update >.<
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria12345




I love ur outbursts lol that's how I wanted :)
One thing I know u gonna LOVEEE jeremyyy specially his talent :p


Trust me! I already hate this Jeremy ka bacha! And what is his talent?!!!!!!!! Taking girls and trapping them!? I HATE HIM!! I HATE HIM I HATE HIM I HATE HIM!!!

You love my outbursts?! 😲

I have a feeling that you're planning on torturing me even more! 🤢😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
seriusly? what happend with manvi?? and ho is this Jen? Oh my goood!! pliss continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Trust me! I already hate this Jeremy ka bacha! And what is his talent?!!!!!!!! Taking girls and trapping them!? I HATE HIM!! I HATE HIM I HATE HIM I HATE HIM!!!

You love my outbursts?!😲

I have a feeling that you're planning on torturing me even more!🤢😭



Na na playing with girls is not his talent that's a god gift trait na... Something that will change the whole thing :p specially manvi
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweets1126

seriusly? what happend with manvi?? and ho is this Jen? Oh my goood!! pliss continue soon!


Wat happen with manvi... Asking about ch 10 thn nothing much Jer had little fun with her :p
N if u r asking about the garage /"last night" thn u gotta wait!!

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