[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: virman123

Awwwhhh!!! Yayyy!! But I want Virat and Manvi's 18+ scene😳

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

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TEASER!

"expectation leads to disappointment n dissatisfaction. You should always try to fulfill ur desires first and when there wont be any option left, then you may ask for help, however, if you try harder you won't need any help nor wud u have to pamper god for ur demands. And yes, never expect to get things for free... You gotta earn it to own it. "

"jeez... Look at you.. Being so diplomatic philosopher huh."

"well I can be the bad boy n kiss you instead? Will it be better for u?" he turned her instantly after finishing his line.

she placed her palm on his lips n said "you won't get a kiss for free. U have to earn it!"

He kissed her hand n removed it from his mouth; she blushed n tried to get away but he hold her back.
"Kissing u is a complimentary salary so I'll cherish it for free" he winked

" stick to ur words virat! Don't cheat.." Gazed him while narrowing her brows

"oh that was for u darling, that motto doesn't apply on me" pulled her closer

"that's cheating..." trying to push him away but he buried his face on her cheek. Her face turned red by his naughty stunts.. She crawled his shoulder top unable to handle the way he was attacking her face by feathery kisses except the lips.
"virat stop..." huffed roughly, Gasping air nervously n that made him wild; he just pushed her back on the bed was about to capture her lips but she turned her face n screamed "stop ssstoppp stop" squeezing her eyes shut, pushing him a little back

To be continued... :p

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keerthana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1023

mujhe update abbhiii chaye🤔

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luv nishal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1024

Originally posted by: _keertu_
mujhe update abbhiii chaye🤔

wid u keertu...mujhe b update Abhi chahiye faria...plzzz

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

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NushIsh

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Fariaaa What are you planning on doing now.

You love to keep us in suspense never giving the complete picture.

Love the dialogues and philosophical words you came up with, you've really grown as a writer,

Love the flashback moments from Goa, you conveniently left out continuing from the beach scene that the last chapter ended. For someone who was confused at to how to go next you did extremely well.

So Virat is not dead, but we don't know what Manvi read to make her collapse like that,

Get yourself working on the next update soon, and knowing you, you'll probably not update what happens to manvi but write about the past, sighs, I'm not going to even predict what you'll write in the next update.

You know I love this Virat of your, he goes to the extremes, be it with his anger or his love, thank you for giving us sweet Virman moments but no thank you for still keeping us in the dark.

Love ya

Nush

Edited by NushIsh - 12 years ago

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virmanhus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1027

me third 😃

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me third??!! may be befor last to comment..

i am in love with 'secrets of life',, it does deliver alot about virat and manvi,, especially virat.. i can figure out what virat's character is like thru this though i am not at all aware of his character as Faria the great has always kept it a suspense!

now that our lovable couple are together,, the moments thy are having are great!!

virat is DIFFERENT!! very very unique character.. the way he claims himself as 'the bad boy' is awesome!! he does repeat it and i can see he's real and not fake,, may be thats the reason manvi cannot avoid but fall for him very badly..

he's a puzzle right,, at sometimes i feel like i have understood his character 100% but most of the times his actions are very unique.. he is never crazy but his acts are..

so far,, he was a cool guy but has high 'anger issues' and is out of control wen drunk.. he was a confused soul (like me) once and then became a determined hero to get back manvi and ofcoz he did get her back after very smartly proving that he was never at mistake.. and now he's a 'lover boy',, a perfect and a different lover..

the extent of difference is he had made his girl friend to wait so long! i mean ''20 voice messages, 50 texts n 120 missed calls''.. the interesting difference is,, any other guy wud die to get his gf's attention and wud panick to hell at the thought how to passify her,, but this virat,, mahhnnn his way of approaching his love is brilliantly different and hence mind blowing... i just love this carefree and never fake attitude of virat... i can totally sense that he is always him no matter good or bad.. just loved it!!!

Fariaaa you are a philosophical queen girl!!! u made me to miss Helina's fake fiance.. mahnn the philosophies of virat and the most interesting ''that motto doesn't apply on me'' was awesome!!! this again is giving me a different and a unique virat.. i mean the way he explained manvi about expectations, demand, dissapointment, bla bla bla,, made me to think that he is a strict follower of such things may be... but his immediate action and reply for manvi of 'those things are not applicable for me' gave me the interesting virat,, the so called bad boy in him.. one thing for sure, there's no rule wen it comes to 'love' in virat's dictionary..

loved virman's almost encounter being disturbed by the poor waiter and virat telling him to 'trash the food'... lmao at the funny moments..

vihaan is such a sweetheart.. the way he predicted his mumci's bad mood is due to him not sharing his 'butterscotch' was sweet..

"eeewww no cute please... That's so girly",, he's very much like virat!!

oh my dear darling sweet sugar faria,,, plsss give dominance to your super cool good sweet twin and make my mannu's wish at the shooting star to come true... plsss

'' And when we do the same thing with our life by turning a mistake into a sin is a profane task that can't be repented.

'' today I have nothing left to run for the race called life. I destroyed the pure essence of love and I don't deserve this life. Unintentionally doing this mistake paid me back a big time and I know how to solve this matter. There is only one way n I'm heading for this way..''

owkaii Faria,, now u are freaking me out!!! wat the hell is this??? 'evil' faria on strike again??? not giving us the whole of wat he has written??!! I baaadddlllyyy wanna read it!!

this gives me the feeling that the 'one mistake' is yet to be introduced ito the story.. wat does he mean by repeating the mistake and turning it into a sin??? urghhh i think i'll loose my hair if u continue the 'suspense' game...

the fact is,, i love this.. i mean i love the way u stop the things at a cliffhanger.. its so interesting and arousing curiosity to know further.. its helping to read everything carefully.. i love to wait, understand and then cherish things.. so cant praise u and scold u at the same time for giving this suspense torture!

manvi's reaction after reading and recalling the incidents is not sounding that good! especially her numb gone body, her tears and her 'no' are disturbing me..

i dont want anything bad to happen to manvi and virat..

i still am looking forward for virat's return and virman's life together forever ( if ur evil twin is laughing at this,, give her a kick)

virat is missing, manvi's life is at risk!! can this get any worse???

u are teasing us vt the 'teasers' of their moments together aren't u??? sooonnn give them fariaaa,, u shudnt make us to yearn for those moments

one best thing about the teasers is i got the news clear that they are married!!!! ''oh then shall I do it in ur filmy way? Like "manviiio yesss finally we are married?? Wohooo??"

was jumping at this u know!!!

EXTREMLY SORRY FOR THE EXTREME DELAY... PLSSS FORGIVE ME!!!!!

thats it,, done finally and looking forward for more turn of events

get going!!

Edited by virmanhus - 12 years ago

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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1028

Awesome Update..!!! Virat isn't dead...waiting for his re-entry in her life..Loved VirMan here..Waiting for next!!

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: NushIsh
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Fariaaa What are you planning on doing now.

You love to keep us in suspense never giving the complete picture.

Love the dialogues and philosophical words you came up with, you've really grown as a writer,

Love the flashback moments from Goa, you conveniently left out continuing from the beach scene that the last chapter ended. For someone who was confused at to how to go next you did extremely well.

So Virat is not dead, but we don't know what Manvi read to make her collapse like that,

Get yourself working on the next update soon, and knowing you, you'll probably not update what happens to manvi but write about the past, sighs, I'm not going to even predict what you'll write in the next update.

You know I love this Virat of your, he goes to the extremes, be it with his anger or his love, thank you for giving us sweet Virman moments but no thank you for still keeping us in the dark.

Love ya
Nush

Awww thank u!!! Lmao I was still confused n The beach saga will be on next update :p
What makes u think virat is alive? Or even dead? I didn't mention either of them :p

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NushIsh

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Faria12345

Awww thank u!!! Lmao I was still confused n The beach saga will be on next update :p
What makes u think virat is alive? Or even dead? I didn't mention either of them :p

Well I assumed that he might be dead and now I'm assuming that I was wrong to think that he is dead.

But there was something in that diary that you conveniently left enough to make Manvi collapse so and you know when Manvi was calling Virat's name the way Viren turned this is getting suspicious. When one mystery begins another one begins.

Edited by NushIsh - 12 years ago