[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 102

Originally posted by: SNTG

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Originally posted by: Faria12345

*caughs* give a solid reason to give u one :p

Originally posted by: virman123

Look at ur title😳😛

Originally posted by: virmanhus

i didnt just say dat u have mastered the art of confusing people... i mean it!! wen it comes to the writer in Faria,, i se a different avatar.. well critics maybe.. language, plot, confusions, mysteries, beautiful moments, family time, past, present, future... everything presented in the story is unique... ahh not to forget ur pranks, warnings and ur role inside the story where u crop in here and dere.. everything is unique, stylish and damn interesting.. now, why do i tell dat u leave us confused even after the solved longtime mystery??? becoz now after dis chapter im confused whether to hug u tight and appreciate or kick u strong and depreciate???!!! i am choosing to do both.. let me scold u vt all my heart!

darling Faria,, didnt u wen i searched for so many doubts about the suspect inside the garage and presented u tactfully let down each of my doubts.. coming again - virat was drunk only after the kiss

- he remebered only the kiss

- he never ever remembered hurting manvi and was confused to death about her behaviour

- jer's 'had fun the last couple of hours'

wat did u say?? virat was drunk and never remeberd and Jer is a playboy and wud have had some other affairs at the same time!!!!! uuu evilll faria.. i erased all those doubts and trusted u becoz u said to 'trust in wat u read'!!! errggg i wanna killl uu

owkaaii um tired,, lets come to the appreciating part.. before u justify urself i'll do the same job.. well if u didnt make me to think that it was virat, the plot following wudnt have been interesting.. i was eyeing virat's each action carefully and cud sense him as different in attitude, a person following his heart, never hurting anybody intentionally, a hardworker, a prank player, a lover of family & relations and a heart throb vt a good heart and a bad mask.. a very very different, awesomeness filled virat!! his POV of things are different, hi actions are different, he seems arrogant and self obsessed but has immense love for his family.. he's such a different character.. this virat has no influence of any other virats from any other stories.. he's like a complete package vt love, hate, trouble and perfectness.. i love him!! alot!!

as u made me to think of the person who almost raped manvi as virat, so i never doubted Jer.. i was wondering 'wat's Jer's problem?' and 'how com he's everywhere wenever virman are in trouble?' u gave me the answer in this chapter.. Faria,, very nice answer.. i mean his hatred and jealousy towards virat is the whole drama about.. and never to forget,, loved the way virat behaved strangely yet naturally and tricked Jer to spit out everything

i must mention the importance of the previous happenings in the day.. virat was really angry vt manvi and dat was why he started hurting her at the performance but his hatred mellowed and happiness overtook once she confessed her mistakes.. he hugged her tight and assured the moment but the way he became stiff and the way he planned out his following action is seconds was awesome!!!! he knew dat manvi still thought dat it was virat, but he knew dat it was never him,, to prove it to his love, he planned the next actions and successfully implemented it.. bang on!! his immediate rejection to manvi, comeback once Jer started to show his real face, the rough kiss to manvi, hurting her beyond limits intentionally.. all these made Jer to conclude virat as a 'beyond bad' boy.. his tactful talk helpd Jer to slowly reveal things.. and the very very smart approach of virat mentioning dat Jer gets second hand or is always second after virat made him to spit out everything furiously.. dat was bloody brilliant!!

i enjoyed and adored each moment of that whole scene.. great job Faria!!

'the driver' i love him alot!! he comes wenever virman are in need, its not filmy, its trendy, funny and awesome!! i adored every moment te threesome (virat-manvi-driver) shared vt.. they are alot funny and beautiful.. his entry here at the yt time and his usual dialogue "u again".. everything is adorable...

then love u for the beautiful confession!! Virat never fails to be naughty and different.. still the same always bugging and funfilled one.. loved the different confession..

plllsss faria,, give beautiful moments of them alot..

'secrets of life' is something in which i find ur brilliant language, philosophies and literacy.. its awesome!!

"Venom's (Jeremy) vicious vengeance vanquished the virtual peace of our happy go life." loved the 'V' words here.. very nice word selection and perfect and truthful meaning.. loved that particular sentence alot!!

one thing i dont understand is.. virat has penned down everything from personal to all his philosophies,, okayy but he wanted his son to read it once he's 18???? different dad

i think dat'll do for now.. struggling alot vt my net connection Faria,, sorryyy for the extreme delay

u indeed are a queen in suspense.. loved the chapters so far heartily and i find it extremely interesting.. finish the opened chapters quickly.. and yeah the mystery in 8th chap has been solved in 24th phewww long journey huh..

looking forward for more such interesting revelations

till den take care!!

get going!!

Originally posted by: Faria12345

U see if u don't believe in wat you read then how you gonna enjoy it? So do believe cuz soon well in next chapter some thing u will read that might tick it head again!!! Mystery doesn't end here it's just the beginning n I'm ending it soon too!!! Lol 8-24 hahaha I'm amazed too that I managed to do the dragging!!!!! This virat u read so far was the innocent soul a good boy!!! From next chapter I will show u wat my bad boy looks Like :) thank u all for taking the time n effor to read my story really appreciated!! Keep reading untill u r bored hehe

Originally posted by: Faria12345

U will get no worry