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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: akanksha1371986

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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Hi back with next part hop u like..

PART=23
"Tujhe dekhata hoon..
bus shamon or shubhaha.."

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SCENCE-Arjun Completaly lost in riya..
he leaned his face closer to her back n placed a soft kiss on her bare back.
.
When she feel arjun lips touched her back..
She tightly closed her eyes..
.
she put her hand near to her heart as wanna to controled her uncontrolled heart beat..
but her heart beat betraying her today..
.
she wanna to controlled but its going out of controlled..
.
she bits her lower lips when she feel arjun's hand sliding her upper shoulder to her arms..
.
n then arjun rested his hands on her stomach..
.
this was the first time when he touched there..
(loll i meen in full consious state)
.
she moaned by his touch but arjun is not in his sense,he doesnt know what he was doing,
.
arjun pulled riya litle closer to him..
.
he was badly missing her for last one week but his mind doest eccept it,
.
why should he eccept It to himself that he was missing her,her presence effecting him lot,
.
Yes i miss u i miss u lot his heart shouted out of range but he scared his mind so he preffer to be slient..
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BG-MUSIC
tujhe chahata hoon main sham or shubha esae jayada tujhe or chahon to kya..
.
tere hi khayalon main duba raha ..
esase jayada tujhe or chahom to kya..




He needs her but his ego ,his anger n his guilt always saying him just stay away from her..
its not a physical needs..its need of closness,its need for somone special that always close for him n care for him..
n vo or koe nahi riya hai, yes his riya..
how he say that i never lived without u..
.

The same condition for riya..
she also her..
She badly missed him,
it hurt her more whenever he ignored her..
or es time main to she realy needs him,
yes the lonely ness hurting


Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13

Her more..
or kyun nahi hurt hogi..
every woman hv a wish or needs for that time when she is pregnant her husband is always near or close to her..
.
the same with hv riya ,but she new very well ..
thats not possible in her dreams..
When arjun last time kissed her,he started to make the distance from her..
now he again kissing her..
.
She feel scared or may be feared that..kahin arjun phir se or door na chale jayen..
n if that happened ,she was not able to handle all this,
.
Arjun each n single touched on her back n stomach creating a buterfly on her stomach..
.
arjun moved litle up n leave wet kiss on her neck..
the fragnance of her deo making his sense loose ..
he cant controled to himself for kissing his beautiful wife,
u belongs to be mine only mine the only word running his mind that time,
how could he stoped himself
for kissing her..
he can feel her n his incressing heart beat..
every passing minute is making tough to him to controlled his desire..
that was hidden inside his heart..
.
Riya clenched her fist tightly to keep herself controlled,
she could feel the warmth of his hand on her..
and started melting in the warmth of his arms..
.
they both dont want to brack that moment ..
(lolll but kya karen riyaz khan ko kon samjhaye kise ke private moment main interfare kerna thik nahi..)
--
Sudenly somone nok the door..
Heyy sweetheart r u ready for the first scence..
i m waiting for u..
.
Arjun comes out realy when he heared somone nok the door..
First he wanna to shout him..
how dare he disturbed their private moment..
.
but next instent he realise what he was doing with riya,
he again lose his controlled..
his heart beat is still racing foriously..
.
He looked toward riya ,
her eyes still closed as she was totaly lost him..
.
Unknowly a smiled crept on his face..


Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

How beautiful n innocent she looked that time..
Why she always make me crazzy ..
He snapped his thought when riyaz khan again nok the door..
--
Heyy sweet heart r u ready or not..he ask again,
.
Arjun tightly clenched his feet how dare he call my wife sweet heart..
.
When riyaz third time nok..Riya comes out reality..
she still blushing n its tough time to meet her eyes to him..
her eyes is stil lower n looked her n there eccept him..
.
She wanna to say somthink to arjun ..
(but that riyaz is to much do minute ka mon vart nahi le sakta),
hey dr kya main ander aa jao..Reyaz spook..
anjun angrly moved toward door as he wanna to leave but before he leave..
.
Arjun think-main he chala jata hoon,ab tum aram se riyaz khan se milana..
.
but before he left..
He feel riya cought his hand by her..
(Riya hold his hand as wanna to stoped him)..
.
Riya reply to riyaz-noo i m not ready..
main apne aap shoot per aa jaongi,
.
arjun face stil opposite to her..He is stil angry but why or kiss per he dont know..
.
She inocently asked-
Kya aap chahte hain main ehase hi bahar chali jayon..
.
without turning back reply..What do u meen..
he closed his eyes for few second as wanna to controled his anger or wanna to remind whats her meent..
.
ohh shit finaly he realise ke riya kya kehana chati hai..
arjun turned his face toward her,
But not looking her eyes..
.
He comes closer n turned her opposite side,
He slightly moved his hand n hold her blaouse doori..
.
he tried his best not touched her more that time,
so he very carefuly hold her blaouse doori n neatly tied nod..
.
n now without saying any he left imediatly her makup room..
.
but she didnt know one surprise is waiting for her outside..
.
she looked one time herself in mirror n give final touchup n comes out ...
shree was wsiting for her..


Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15

Ri-shree tum yahan..
Sh-haan check kerne aya tha sab thik hai ya nahi..
I meen tere or arjun sir ke bich..
After hearing arjun's name ,
her cheks turned deep red..
shree again notice this..
.
Sh-(In teasing way)Ri ye arjun sir ehsa kerte kya hai ke to her baar etana blush kerti hai..
.
Ri-shree (she hits her shoulder) just shut up ab chalen..
.
---
SHOOT LOCATION:-
(one shok or surprise waiting for u all )
.
all r waiting for new side hero..
movie director-
ye new side hero aya ya nahi..
assistent-vo dekhiye aa gaya all looked toward him..
Riya shree chotu n sameer looked him with their opened mouth..
OOO is it true..
Ra-mujhe pata tha rawte tum jaror ayoge..per etani jaldy..
Ch-hilaa shree arjun sir sardar ke getup main..
Matlab ye hain vo side hero..
matalab...
Sh-shree has mischivious smiled as he was knew it before,
.
(
i will explain later how n when..?)
.
Action director said
.
arjun n riya stood in midle
Arjun hold riya's hand n bend down on his knees..
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n say Tum chahati the na main tumse apne dil ke baat keh doon..jo tum hamesha se sunaana chahti the..
arjun was again lost in her..
.
assictent-ye kon se dialog bol raha hai,
ye to scrip main nahi hain,
Di-ek dam chup raho jo bol raha hai,ek dam natural lag raha hai..
.

(Bich ke diolog cut ker diye bez i already write in privious part)
.
Ar-pyaar ho gaya hai mujhe tumse
(that time he is turly confess his feeling by heart bez the diolog is not in script)
.
kya tum bhi mujhase..
riya has a tears on her eye
(she whished kash ye sach hota,kash ye sirf scipt ka diolog na hota,poor she didnt know arjun realy confess his feeling)
.
(Choree n sameer in bw doing their investigation..
they r very near to catch the real suspect)
.
arjun n riya both lost in each other.
Arjun waiting for riya's reply but before she say anything

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Riyaz comes in bw..
n snnached tiya's hand from arjun,
Riyaz-tere mehbooba ab meri hai..(Loll poor arjun)
.
Director says cut it..
n scence is complete..
.
riya feel tired so she comes n sit one chair..
her eyes searching arjun but he is no where..
Riya's FB end-
.
on the other-

arjun feel uncomfortable he imediatly comes out as he feel litle safocation,
he was totaly confused what he said just few time before..
hop riya ko kuch samajh na aye..
n why i said that i lv her..
i lv only roshani, sirf or sirf roshani..
--
(Why arjun come here -


arjun flashback-
arjun fustrated comes out conference room..
Damm ehse jo kerna he ker le but i dont care..
he goes his cabine..n stood near window..
Dam mujhe etana bura kyun lag raha hai..Riya kiseke sath bhi acting kare..
he tried to convence himself..
He saw riyaz n his pA comes out conforence room(apne cabine ke window se),
n heared their convo..
Ar-arjun blood start boil..
how dare he thought about her..
esaki himaat kaise huye meri wife ke baare mai ye sab sonchane ke or kehane ki,
.
(I will told u later ke riyaz ne ehsa kya kaha tha)
.
he think hard n hard n finaly decided to go there ..
he called shree-
Shree haan it me ohhh just shut up n listen main aa raha hoon ..
haan any think-what..?? acting no way..
sh-sir they need one side hero.. app sonch lijiye riya ke opposite..
.
Ar-okkk fine i will do..
finaly arjun was ready..
FB end-
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on the other-
shree pulled his color up..wah shree kya plane banaya tune kise ko sak nahi huye even arjun sir ko bhi nahi,
---
it was shree plane ..
usne he riyaz khan ko riya ke vanidy main jaane ko kaha tha taki arjun..
jealous ho jaye..
(loll naghty shree jab arjun ko pata chalega tab to tum gaye samjhe)
TBC-
no precape
ab unhen akela rehne dete hai.
mast ya bore.??






Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey sweetu tujhey jitna pakana hai paka caz is terhay to may 24*7 paknay kay liya tayaar hu 😆😆.
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ab jaldi jaldi paka kiska intezaar hai 🤣🤣.

had hay yaar kya zamaana aa gaya hay paknay waalay tayaar baithay hai aur pakaanay wala hi gayaab hay🤣 🤣.

chalo ab jaldi karo aur intezaar nahi hota.
Edited by akanksha1371986 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: akanksha1371986

hey sweetu tujhey jitna pakana hai paka caz is terhay to may 24*7 paknay kay liya tayaar hu😆😆.

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ab jaldi jaldi paka kiska intezaar hai🤣🤣.

had hay yaar kya zamaana aa gaya hay paknay waalay tayaar baithay hai aur pakaanay wala hi gayaab hay🤣🤣.

chalo ab jaldi karo aur intezaar nahi hota.


Are anku gayab nahii pakane ke tayari ker rahiii hoon..
update likhungi nahi to pakaongiii kaise lolll...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I will come 4 short time so bear me hehehe
Pic to dassu hai de
Congrats dr 4 nw thread
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Continue soon.mai to pakne ke liye tayar hu.
And congrates for new thread.
Jaldi update kar.
Teri to har story padhne ke liye hum to hamesha se hi bekarar hai.

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