T2-FF:Kya yahi pyaar Hai...???(Thread three link add)

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

congratulation for new thread di.
Its awesome..
Your editing and thread designing is great.
The pic u added is really matched to the story..
Kyun ki sari gadbad toh ussi epi mai hui thi na...

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sorry for late comment-

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the part is really awesome..
U knw what di , u never left any chanc to make me blush..
Thodi tips muje bhi de do..

U are my queen of romance..

Ariya romance hi hai ab ..
Oh arjun couldn't control over his emotion...
Lol..hamesha apni asli baat bhul jata hai.. Ab blouse ki dori bandhna tha..
The toh utarne pe aa gaya..
And thank god peheli baar kuch hosh mai kar raha hai..
Ab pls iss baat ko regret mat karo arjun..
You love her..and yahi pyaar hai 😳

damn it riyaz khan , teri toh 😡
pyaar ka dushman 😡
har baar bich mai aa gaya..
And riya apni feelings ko control nahi kar paa rahi hai.. 😉

shree ka plan mast hai..
Good job shree..love u fr this..

👏

and then wo arjun tha..
Big wala shock di..
Arjun ha ha..
Par dialouge mast the..
Bechara pyaar ka mara 😛

ab riyaz ne kya kaha riya ke bare mai 😛

thank god arjun aa gaya ..
Warna
uski mehbooba riya ki begam ban jati 😲

waiting for the next part di...

And aapk exms kaise jaa rahe hain..??

Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago

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Krinal

@MissC

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Congrats for the new thread 😃

This was a great update

Aww Arjun and Riya were missing each other

Loved Ariya's romance in Riya's make-up room

Arjun's starting to get a bit naughty now

He should learn to control himself when they're not in their house

Loved the way Arjun confessed his love to Riya but unfortunately Riya didn't understand it

I really hope that she finds out that Arjun actually loves her and that Arjun also accepts his feeling for her

Was Arjun just touching Riya's tummy because he was lost in her or because he wanted to feel their child?

Shree's starting to make some really good plans these days but when Arjun will get to know about them, then he'll have to make a plan about how to save himself from Arjun

Can't wait to read more

Please update soon 😊

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Himani

@Himu_arsha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Awesome update

Thanks for the pm dear

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teja21

@teja21

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

hi dear, sry fr d late respnse...was busy wid my interview

d update was awesome

n surprise was really very nice...

lovely update ...

thanx fr d pm

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bellasha

@bellasha

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Cant wait now
when u updating.???

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ashmi

@ashmifebaa

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

hey, why are u late?????

update soon yaar...

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

my dr frs sorry but kya haiii naaa ...
mere exam haiii ..
esliye 18 may ke baad he update doongiii lolll...

NOTE-Update de diya guysss
Thoda bor haiii...
He he he he...pakane ke liye maafi chahoongiii,
SORRY for any error..tukde tukde main likha hai..
bez last night likhate waqt so gaye or jo likha vo by mistake delete ho gaya...lolll
ab dobara likha haiii..
hop u like ..ager bor kiya to maafi chahoongiii..
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2 N i finished my ss arjun promised...hv a looked whenever u free guys..
ok bye n no pm frs..
hop u understand..

Updates last part...
WARNINGGG-its litle longgg...hop u enjoys..
Pm late or may be not possible...
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ARIYA SS:ARJUN PROMISE..i m always with u riya...LAST PART A

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ARIYA SS:ARJUN PROMISE..i m always with u riya...LAST PART B
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pm late..
Sorry for any error

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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573339

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

all the best for your exams piya :)

missing this FF so much :(

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

PART=24-A
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"Ek ajeeb sa dar hai,tu pass hoker bhi kyun etana door hai.."
.

SCENCE-Riya eyes searching her arjun sir but he is not there,
.
Riya pov-ye arjun sir kahan chale gaye,kahin phir se naraj to nahi ho gaye,
.
(The fears of avoiding by arjun,is homes inside her litle mind)
.
kahin vo dobara mujhe avoid to nahi kerne lage,
why every time arjun sir avoiding me,
.
poor she didnt understant that what happened with her now,why every time she is thinking about him??
why she is missing him lot.??
.
Kahan gaye arjun sir abhi to yahin the..
(she make a pupy face)
.
"she snapped her thought" when some one called her,
tum mere baare main he sonch rahi hoo,
she looks up n saw riyaz khan was there with holding one glass of juice,
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without waiting for her permission, he sits near to her,
Riyaz-so bataya nahi tumne tum mere baare main he sonch rahi the,
.
She tried to avoid him,
so she give him light smile n says just excuse me plz ,
i hv to go,
(n wanna to get up,but before she move riyaz khan hold her hand)
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Are etani bhi kya jaldy hai,abhi to hum aye hain,
or abhi app jana chahahi hai,thats not fare miss riya,
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(riya half heartly sit again)
but her mind n her heart was far away from there,
.
(they r thinking or feel only her arjun just arjun not sir that time)
(Riyaz stil holding her hand)
wah manana padega kya kamal ke acting kerti hain aap,
aapko etf main nahi film line main hona chahiye,
(She just give her smile)
he slide his chair near to her,
but unwhere the fact that one pair of eyes observing all this,
Riyaz tring to filrt with her,
(he think)riya bhi baki aam ladkiyon ke taraha hai,
tumne to meri kaye filmen dekhi hongi,
Ri-hum,u r gud actor,
apki movie romentic or imostional

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Hoti hai..
or apki acting ka to her koe fan hai..
Riyaz-or tum..
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He moves closer to her face..
tumne bataya nahi or tum..
i meen tumhari life ka hero kon hai..
he hold her hand tightly..

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she feel uncomfortable..
befor she protest ,
someone came there he looks very angery but tried to caam himself ,
he hold riyaz hand tightly..
riyaz yelled..who the hell r u..? n looked up,
leave her hand..i said leave her hand..
He hold riyaz hand tightly,
riyaz yelled with pain,
tum hote kon ho mujhe batane bale..tum to vahi side hero ho na,
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Few minute before-
arjun tried to caam himself..
he was think -
why every time i loose my controlled in front of her,
whyy ..??
he snaaped his thought when his phon start ringing..
he looked the caller id it was rathor..
.
Ar-yaan rathor.. good,
maine to tumhenpehale hi kaha tha ke en sab ke piche vahi hoga..
.
(soon they arrest the real culprit..it was non other then riyaz ex gf..)
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Yaa dont warry yaan main or riya chalen jayege..
after saying that he cut the call..
.
arjun comes inside but in mid way he heared chree conversation..
.
His anger rised in seven flor..
he didnt say anythink to both
.
but just give his dead glare..
after giving his dead hlare he goes inside,
.
where riya was talking with riyaz..
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arjun saw riyaz holding riya's hand in him..
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n they r talked bw somthing..
in mind-how dare he hold my wife hand..
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he tighten his grip when he saw riyaz slides his chair near to her..
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he noticed that riya apna haath chudane ke koshish ker rahi hai,
.
or riyaz uske sath filrt kerne ke koshish ker raha hai..
.
he angrly moved toward riyaz n hold his hand tightly,
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tum to vohi side hero ho(he was still in his sardar getup)
.
Ar-lagta hai tumhen meri baat samjh nahi aye..
maine kaha riya ka hanth chodu.
Riyaz-lagta hai ek mamuly saa

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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