Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~THREAD 5

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Congrats on the new thread. Loved this chapter. The main thing I like in your writings is the way you weave your characters - they are very real and very human. The way Khushi still is getting her confidence back after being jilted by Shyam and the way she was taking care of Arnav in the mela and her general acceptance that she is a failure in kitchen all left me very in awe of your writing. And Arnav is slowly melting. He knows his thoughts are getting occupied more and more by Khushi and her dazzling attitude - Bitwa is falling in love and he somehow knows that. Can't wait for the next chapter. The progression of the story is awesome and reading the story leaves an 'Awww' in my mind. Good job. Thanks for the pm.

Edited by psarada - 12 years ago

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cheval

@cheval

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Congratz on new thread dear

Amazing update I sonlove the way theybspent time together how he cooked awww tooo cute j jope they spent more time together

Super great

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

hey

that was such a beautiful update👏

it was nice to see how they took care of each other

and Khushi's explanation about the potato chips was funny😆

and they actually spent an entire day together

that's totally a wow factor when it comes to Arnav

and i loved the part where Khushi tried to move away from Arnav but he just kept following her

i assume you meant that to be symbolic in more ways than one

it definitely showed Khushi that not everyone she meets would have a mindset like Shyam

the part in the car where Khushi took his phone and started gossiping with his dad was nice also

and the fact that Arnav let her do that was even more amazing

i definitely think his tolerance for all things Khushi is growing

and at a rapid rate might i add😆

the cooking bit was very entertaining

and i love the fact that Arnav recognizes that Khushi is helping him heal in her own way

i completely agree with his thoughts about her being a constant

the chapter in general had me thinking aaawww at the end and i loved that👍🏼

i really did enjoy reading this

continue soon

and congrats on the new thread👏

and thanks for the PM😊

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vandana73

@vandana73

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Khushi being herself has managed to undo the damage that his mother did all those years and now Arnav also knows that there is nothing sinister about her !

And him being so accepting towards her incapability made her feel normal which Shyam perhaps never could .

What a disaster zone in kitchen !

Waiting for more

Thanx for the PM

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

You are slowly showing us how she is making way into his thoughts, warming his frozen heart, throughly enjoyed the mela, your words do the setting for me, it was as though I was in the mela, the dinner fiasco I could stop but laugh, and her excuses lol..., and next he starts the conversation like he is already unknowingly would like her tirade to continue, and his analysis of her prefect, she is truly sunshine...

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Nice update.
Awww!.he cooked pasta for her and clicked her pics.he keeps on losing himself in her thoughts.
Arnav Singh Raizada,For a man who used to hate Khushi,u are changing a lot.

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Poonam

@prantika

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Brilliantly written, loved their trust for each other😛

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

it was awsumm update...

they spend all day with eachother ,love how he folloing her when she ried to ove away...

cooking scne was cute she trying to heel his wound he likes it 😊

continue soon

thanks for pm

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Tanu_96

@Tanu_96

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#169

You have beautifully written the fair which I can visually picturise!
Thankgod their relationship has taken a U-Turn.
Arnie is slowly...falling for her!

Nice😊