FF : The Purgatory Masquerade, Updated - pg 45!

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princess_pari

@princess_pari

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

loved it...
i was bit confused in the beginning but now its cleared.
sakshi's shayari's and kawali were funny...
cant wait to read more...😊

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Shanzy

@-Shanzy-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Wow you are an amazing writer. Continue soon ❤️

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Pisces_Gurl

@Pisces_Gurl

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

The story is getting interesting..
Thnx fr writing the summary...bcoz i got confused..lolz..
But knw got it..n understood it...
Plzzz update ur other stories too soon...most probably the Ariya story "I'll try to fix u".plzz update that soon n pm me..

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

hi dhriti di🤗...awesome update...😃😃😃😃...sakshi recognised his voice😉😉😉😉...acp arjun rawte on her perfect men list😉😉😉😉...chattani wali qawali awesome😆😆😆😆😆😆...too good...what abut aisha😕...plz update soon di😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃...no more wait😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

oye I feel like an idiot now...

ek minute lemme clear it up...

part 2 ke end me Sakshi wass supposed to meet ACP Arjun!

aur fir, part 3 ke start me hamare hoddie Arjun said he want to see if she is really good... and if she goes to POLICE??

oye.. confused again..

par sabke comments dekh ke aise lagthe hai ke mujhe hi ye confusion hai...poor me...

loved the chatni shayari... wah wah...

now who is keeping a tab and killing Hoddie Arjun's criminals?

kaun hai jo unhe takkar dene aya hai?

and AISHA??

wow...too many questions..sorry yaar...

couldnt stop myself...

loved it...as usual😳

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despicable_me

@despicable_me

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: kunchu
oye I feel like an idiot now...
ek minute lemme clear it up...
part 2 ke end me Sakshi wass supposed to meet ACP Arjun!
aur fir, part 3 ke start me hamare hoddie Arjun said he want to see if she is really good... and if she goes to POLICE??
oye.. confused again..
par sabke comments dekh ke aise lagthe hai ke mujhe hi ye confusion hai...poor me...
loved the chatni shayari... wah wah...
now who is keeping a tab and killing Hoddie Arjun's criminals?
kaun hai jo unhe takkar dene aya hai?
and AISHA??
wow...too many questions..sorry yaar...
couldnt stop myself...
loved it...as usual😳

Part 2 k end mein she was supposed to meet ACP Arjun, yes.. but it was in present 😆 part 3 is in past.. in blue.. continuation from part 2 k past wala update 😛

aur sawalo k jawab de diya toh to ho gayi kahani poori 😉

Love ya helna!

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

stupid me...I didnt see the word PAST in the start of part 3...

sorry yaar

ok now its getting clear...

thanks buddy...

jaldi jaldi update karo...

samjhe ya samjhau??

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DEEPZzzz

@DEEPZzzz

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Loving the story... 😊

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Not fair Tahi, i was actually hoping that you'd show us more about who came to visit Sakshi in her office and her reaction on seeing him, but you started back in the past😭

anyway, case seems very solid, probably mafia rivals, that's why they killed Mr Riveira...

and Arjun actually was spying on girl, how shameless of him, he even came to graze her face😳😉😆

Please continue soon😉

and thanks for the summary, i admit i was a bit lost, but now all ok😆😉