FF : The Purgatory Masquerade, Updated - pg 45!

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Wow! I love this story! It's so interesting. It actually makes me think and keep up with the details, and not just mindless reading. I can't wait to read more!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

fantastic update :) loved it

love how he was observing her just to make sure if she is trustworthy or not

and then love how he was watching her dancing, eating and praying and then he was watching her sleeping

awww arjun was smiling :)

sakshi's shayary was so funny 😆

seems like that vigilante is arjun but then who is the other guy?

can't wait to read more

thanks for the pm

continue soon

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Awesum di
treat to read
bhaiya to h hi whistling lol
rofl shayari
maje aa gye di
wow
lovely
love u
tc
hugs..!!!

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ehmmbh_luvr

@ehmmbh_luvr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

wowie another update😃

It was amazing😉

yes i understood the whole past n present thing!!

Initially i thought whats happening did i kind of miss a part coz it dint seem to be the continuation of the previous part😛

Then i scrolled up n then i understood the whole thing😆

He actually was observing her..haha her kawalis😆

She reminded me of a time when i was crazy about aam ki chatni(would take that with every meal)😛

Oouch...yeh ayesha wala kya majra hai??😲

N the last firing wala part was too good...reslly well written!!

Continue soon...the precap seems to be ahem ahem😳

Thanks for yhe PM😊

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Awesome update PC

now i understood

so there is someone who is killing in his avatar

who is that??

waiting eagerly for the mystery to open up

cont soon!

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

u r a mystery gal
nd ur stories r too...

mujhe to koi confusion tha hi nahi...

good going...

continue soon

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NeethuEli

@NeethuEli

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Aisha????????

Leave it. I will find the answer on my own. The update apart from the Aisha confusion was FANTASTIC.

I love you Tahi!!!!!😆

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

🤣Do u hummm the chatni wali line while having paratha&chutni 🤣.Well next time when i m going to have paratha&chatni,dis will surely pop up in mind.😆.Coming to the update,Fantastic.Arjun Rawte observing so keenly &that too a girl.News hai boss😉.Aur ye aisha kaha se aa gai yaar.Tel me sumthing,U,shilpa,avantika&vidya hav planned together to post updates wherein readers,start scratching heads with twist,confusions😉.Anyways now dat u have updated it,brainstorming to karni padegi ab.kya yaar office mein bhi dimag lagao aur yaha bhi.itna chotu sa dimag par kitna zor daalu mai😔.Waise the part wherein she mumbles the code in her sleep is that i can relate verymuch coz sumtimes i too mumbles coding in my half sleepy state.kabhi kabhi to logic building aur client meeting bhi kar leti hu wo bhi nind mein.(Silly Me) but being frm IT field it is a must.Right Tahi?wo kehte hai na dhobhi's dog,na ghar ka na ghaat ka😆

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Sia

@satanslove

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Only u could make Chutni par shayari!!😆😆

Okies now this gets more mysterious ...so we have two people on killing spree ...😕

U better jaldi update it behena ...warna ...😉

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..pink..

@..pink..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Nice Update

Though I think I have messed up the story in mind...Bt then m nt sure m confused or not...M I talking lyk an idiot...🤪

ok coming to the updates...

Arjun thinks that Sakshi wud nt come with him ainveyi so he kidnapped her...
bt then she called him only for help...

OMG chatni khate waqt kaun shayari maarta hai...😆

Ok now why on earth was he watching Aisha sleep...😕

Arjun is on a mission to kill the bad people...lyk wo andheri raato me sunsaan raaho par types😛😆
Or may b the other one...or is he bad...

Update soon