SS:The Seven Sin Series - Completed! - Page 7

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Afya,

Thanks for reading and your comments, I am not a writer...😳, will leave that you guys and stick to reading and of course commenting!

Originally posted by: chitrajay

You write Vandy
And let us be the judge of whether u r good or not

Originally posted by: Anarocksick

This seems interesting!

res-ing! Will unres soon.

(suggested by Vandana.sagar)
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Edited:

Absolutely, LOVED this one.
It's so much like IPK, which I so miss these days...and yet it's not.
I love Khushi 😆 No, I mean seriously...masst bandi hai, boss! Le li company ki owner ki. LOL.
And Arnav, oh Arnav. Bechara... Attraction and Jealousy ka maara.
Seriously, our Arnav and Khushi fit right in the concept of the seven deadly sins.
Can't wait to read more. :-)
And a big thanks to Vandana for suggesting this story!

Cheers!

Originally posted by: RTlicious

Hey! this is a very Novel idea...loved the concept...thanks to Vandana for recommending it :)

Looking forward to the other six Sins! xx

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

Are you sure you are writing for the first time?

This one is beyond brilliant. You have a smooth command over English which makes the reader imagine exactly what you want them to imagine.


I thought it is actually 8 p.m. on a week day and I am watching IPK :-)


The story has kick started very well. I loved the title. I loved the concept. So since there are 7 sins, there will be seven updates? I am glad you have two besties on the forum who will push you to update so that I don't have to. But if I see them failing in their task, get ready to be chased by me ;-)

Originally posted by: tracy1191

wow!! loved d concept nd d flow... u floored it gal👏👏👏

waiting 4 more😊😊