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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: RTlicious

Hey! this is a very Novel idea...loved the concept...thanks to Vandana for recommending it :)

Looking forward to the other six Sins! xx


Thanks for reading!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

Are you sure you are writing for the first time?

This one is beyond brilliant. You have a smooth command over English which makes the reader imagine exactly what you want them to imagine.


I thought it is actually 8 p.m. on a week day and I am watching IPK :-)


The story has kick started very well. I loved the title. I loved the concept. So since there are 7 sins, there will be seven updates? I am glad you have two besties on the forum who will push you to update so that I don't have to. But if I see them failing in their task, get ready to be chased by me ;-)





Mints is going to be thrilled with your comment...she is a big fan of your works!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Also I loved the hustle bustle in the office before his arrival, Khushi's and Arnav's cluelessness about what has entered their lives, their anger/wrath, Akash's timely entry and the fumes inducing hug :-P


Lets see will these 7 sins lead them to heaven? Its going to be one hell of a ride :-)


P.S. I am glad I still visit IPK forum :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Did I say it is fantastic?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
wow!! loved d concept nd d flow... u floored it gal👏👏👏
waiting 4 more😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Oh I'm new here!! But I love the starting

Looking forward to more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
OMG I LOVEEE THIS!

The name is awesome also the way u writeee

Update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
This FF was recommended by Vandana and I'm so glad she told me about it!!!

This is your first attempt at writing? Are you kidding me? It was absolutely perfect.

You had me intrigued with the title, loved the banner, and by the end of the first paragraph I was sold!!

I can not wait to see how you take this forward, please include me your PM list.

Fantastic! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
OMG i sooo love this story!!!!

So perfectly written and well described!!!! Just awesome!!!!

Edited by mastermagician - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Am going to read this and comment

Ok just read part 1. This was great!! Classic Arnav and Khushi head on in our favorite setting! Great chapter...
Edited by ssyahoo - 12 years ago

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