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Posted: 12 years ago
yayieee...
sooo nice...
ye jealousy waapas kab aayega d3 me...
pls update soon!!!
loving it!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
really nice!!! reynie scene similar to taarey's dance camp scene was nice. Loved taani's jealousy. 😊😊pm the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice
Loved the bahon ka darmiyan scene
And also loved seeing Taani jealous
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 14

recap- gang masti and all sitted in bus and having fun
boys makes taani jealous by gettingg reynnie together
taani thinks somethng is goin on btween RV and annie

sorry guys precap se diff hai ye stry...for more details chck out last chapter on page -23
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taani was still engrosed in her own thoughts and then panchi came and sit besides taani...

panchi : taani ..kya soch rahi h??

taani: ahh kuch khaas nahi...kyu kya hua??

panchi: nahi bas aise hi...vaise i want to tell u tht u can share anything with me.

taani: i knw birdy...par tu mujhe ye abhi kyu bata rahi h.

panchi: nahi bas aise hi...i knw u share evrything with RV...but still in case agar tu usse kuch baat share na kar sake then i m always here...right beside u.

taani: hey birdy aisa kuch nahi h...nd u can never be a second option for me...u knw wat u r like my sister...and i knw tht i can share evrything with u...its just tht i m also nt sure abt tht.

panchi: abt wat??

taani: vo actually i think ki jemmie mujhse kuch chup raha h...may be something tht could hurt me and vo nahi chahta ki mujhe vo baat pata chale.

panchi(thinks ki taani ko sab bata de but then she remembers her promise to RV) :nahi tannu aisa kuch nahi h...may be teri lyf mein already itna stress h isliye tujhe aisa lag raha h.

taani: hmmm may be.
(then she looks around and find annie looking at RV )(she gets excited )

taani (in panchi's ear) : vo dekh birdy...humare naye love birds.

panchi looks arnd but didnt get it...then taani points towards annie.

taani: mujhe na bahut solid wali feeling aa rahi h ki inke beech kuch chal raha h.

panchi: taani tu pagal ho gayi h kya...annie kal hi to aayi h and aaj tujhe lag raha h ki vo...oh god.

taani: oh hllo madam dnt frget tere aur tere majnu ke baare mein bhi maine aisa kaha tha nd now see u bth r together. and even K.D -kiya ko bhi to maine hi milaya tha varna aaj tak vo dono ladte hi rehti...and now u'll see ki apne best frnd ke lyf mein bhi hapiness main hi laungi.( and smiles prodly)

panchi: ji tannu ji...aap to antaryami ho...aapki baat kaise galat ho sakti h...accha ab nautanki band kar aur bata ki kya karne wali h.

taani: just wait n watch baby ( haan RV -annie ek doosre ke liye perfect h and then ye annie rey ka peecha bhi chod degi...)

panchi ( in mind): i hope taani aisa hi ho...but i afraid kahi RV ko annie ke karreb laane ke chakkar mein tu usse aur apne aap ko hurt na kar le.

taani and panchi were lost in their own thoughts and here our rey was getting restless...

rey(in mind) : ye boys kya karne ki kosish kar rahe h...i m afraid kahi inki vajah se taani mujhse aur door na ho jaaye and mera temporary break up permanent na ban jaaye...nahi rey aisa kyu soch raha h..u knw na taani tujhe kitna trust karti h...main bhi usse trust karta hu phir bhi usse us RV ke saath dekhkar jealous ho jata hu...par taani aisi thode hi h...main to poora pagal hu but my angel is so sweet vo kabhi galat nahi sochegi mere baare mein...par agar socha to...nahi ..nahi sochegi...par agar vo hurt hui to mujhe annie ke saath dekhkar.

rey was fighting with his own thoughts and then sharon comes and sits beside him..

sharon: rey..(no response)

sharon : rey...(still no response )

sharon(shouts) : reyyy (evryone luks at them and then rey comes out of his thoughts)

rey: haan sharon kya hua...chilla kyu rahi ho (evryone gets back to their wrks and thinks ye to pagal h )

sharon: oh to atlast tumne sun hi liya.

rey: ab kuch bolo to tabhi to sununga.

sharon ( closes her eyes and then says "sharon calm dwn " dn open her eyes :haan to bolti hu na/...kya soch rahe the...ya phir ye puchu kiske baare mein soch rahe the...

rey (blushes) : huh...kiske baare mein soch sakta hu.

sharon: haan ye bhi sahi h...humare ranjha to apni heer ke hi khayalo mein kho sakta h na.

rey:( blushes more) : accha sharon ye batao ki tum sab kya karne ki kosish kar rahe ho..

sharon ( thinks isse pata to nahi chal gaya ) : what r u talkng abt.

rey: sharon u exactly knw wht i m talking abt.

sharon: no i m not...anyways bye hav to leave.

rey ( catches sharon's hand) : no sharon u have to tell me ki ye sab kya chal raha h...tum sab milke kyu meri love story ki band baja rahe ho.

sharon: rey vo actually ...hum bas vo...(closes her eyes and speaks in one go) : vo hum taani ko jealous karna chahte the ye dekhakar tht u n annie like each other.

rey (loudly ) : what!!

evryone luks at thm again ...but then rey smiles fakely at thm and again get back with conv.

rey: hav u gone mad...vo mujhe maar degi...tum log dost ho ya dushmann...i m dead now...she'll kill me..

sharon: no rey...listen we have a plan.

then sharon tells rey their plan and rey also agrees to this...soon evrything gets back normal and now all are sitted on their respective places...its already dark now and soon evryone reaches sharon's farm house...

everyone gets down and then sharon gives them dirn evryone heads to their rooms-- ( all girls in one room and all boys in their room)

all were really tired now so all sleeps without any kind of drama or masti...

next morning-

girls wakes up and gets ready and moves out of their room..expecting boys outside but when they came out no onw was there...they headed to boys room and see all boys sleeping there peacefully (all were luking damn funny ...lying on each other... guys imagine na u knw how these boys are)

taani moves forward and tries to wake swayam but he was not paying attention... and same with all others...girls got irritated and kiya goes to bathroom and takes a bucket of water...and throws water on boys...all get wet and soon they open their eyes and see 9 girls standing in frnt of them ...they imagine 9 devi's ( durga,kaali,etc...arre guys vo 9 navratro wali 9 devi's )...they all get scared ...

swayam ( gulping ): ye humein aise kyu dekh rahi h..

vicky: haan jaise

bharat: abhi

amar: katta (kaccha)

nil: chaba jeyengi

rey( handling the situation) : guys get up...get up...dekho kitne der se uthane ki kosish kar raha hu...uthte hi nahi h ye sab...guys utho..

taani: (comes frwrd close to rey)rey aap to bas rehne hi dijiye...kitni der se aapko uthane ki kosish kar rahe the hum

rey (holding his ears) : sorry princess vo...

taani realises tht unka break up ho gaya h and tht she is angry wid him..so she moves back and starts luking here n there to avoid him..

rey also remembers his plan and then he also luks at other girls and speaks-

rey: accha thik na ..par tumne humpe paani kyu daala.

annie: tumhe uthane ke liye

rey: to koi aur raasta nahi mila...

soon they bth starts fighting...kach kach kach...ahh all get irritate..taani feels odd and even gets jealous...tht how anyone could answer back rey or scold rey ...its only her right...

Rv: rehne de na rey...bas ab ladai band...(luking at girls ..specially annie) ab tum sab bahar jao hum tayyar hokar aate h.

annie luks at him sweetly and soon all moves out...

then boys gets ready and joins girls for breakfast ...all enjoyed a lot and then decides to go club for more fun...

girls getting ready in their rooms-

simmi- sharon...ye dress kaisi h.

rinni: sharon ye earings match to kerenge na.

neha: kiya how this make-up...babu liking it na.

aashi: panchi aap batao na ye dress kaisi types h.

all were just moving here and there and getting ready and taani was sitting on window and luking outside...sharon comes to her.

sharon: taani kya hua...chalo na tayaar ho jao.

then they bth come and sharon takes a white dress and tell taani to wear that...

sharon: ye lo taani this is beautiful.

simmi( gets an idea and then speaks) : yaa taani wear this and vaise bhi white to rey ka fav color h...he'll love this.

taani(thinks rey ka fav color to main bilkul nahi pehnungi ..takes a black dress frm cuboard ) : nahi sharon ye jyada better hai main ye pehen ke aati hu.

she goes to bathroom for changing...and sharon glares at simmi.

sharon: simmi aisa kyu kiya...this was really a nice dress.

simmi: sharon mujhe pata h...but i hav a plan ( she hands the dress to annie and asks her to wear this )

sharon: simmi wat r u doing .

then simmi luks at them and waits for their tubelight to get on.

sharon: oh god simmi thts a perfect plan...now annie will wear this and taani will think tht she wanna impress rey...OMG u r too smart haan.

then all gets ready and moves out except annie ...she goes late to wear tht dress ( acc to their plan)...

all boys are waiting down and then girls enters...all stares at their respective partners...nimmi,rimar,swaron,taarey,kesiya,siddhi,viha,bhashi and RV also looks at taani...but not in bad way...soon he get back senses and strts luking here and there..

taani's dress-
taani

sharon's dress-
shar


then annie enters wearing a white dress-

annie

everyone's eyes were on her...she was feeling awkward...rey was also luking at her but as a friend...but taani takes it in a wrong manner...

taani(thinking) : ye rey isse aise kyu dekh rahe h...and isne yahi dress kyu pehni h...oh god i just hope ki jo main soch rahi hu vo galat ho. (then her eyes falls on RV)

RV was all lost in her baeuty...he was thinking tht she is luking so cute..he was admiring her changing expressions with evry nxt stair...

taani: lagta h main kuch jyada hi soch rahi hu...rey kya sabhi usko dekh rahe h...even girls bhi...but luk at RV ..kaise dekh raha h usko...anyone can see how much he is affected with her.

then all sits in cars and heads to club.

precap- some guys misbehave with taani
rey realises that RV have feelings for taani
RV hurt ..annie consoles him
RV avoiding taani
taani comes to knw abt rey and sharon's plan
huh...this will be covered up in 2-3 chapters...but still i gave this precap ...


so guys i knw this chapter was short and even not so gud...but still hit like and cmmnt.,...and ya i wanna clear some things.

1- yes RV loves taani but it was just bcoz she is so caring and sweet...its a frndshp love...but evryone wants a partner to spend whole life...thts y RV is attracted to annie...he is not at all a bad guy.

2- annie is a very sweet girl. same like RV...made for each other types h dono...hahahah types...she is only comfortable with dazzlers ...rey,sharon and other dazzlers as she knw thm frm long ..but she is shy also...












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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update ..
Loved it
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update, aww love how Rey was thinking that his princess cannot think wrong of him and she will definitely kill him lol. Love Taani and the other girls dresses. U did a lovely job plz continue soon. Love the waking up part lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tani-Panchi bond ws efctv.Rey lost in Tani,nice.Sha spitng ot abt d plan to Rey scenario ws funy.Oh my,wt a plan by Simmi! Tani is jealous! Prcp is hel intrstng dr.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome!!! Update soon!!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
rey n sharon convo part ws really nice...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic update
loved Sharon and Reys dialogue
can't wait for the next update, the precap is superb
please update soon and pm me

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