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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome..it was funny ..update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Debu fantastic update... Aww Rey is such a sweetheart for helping Taani although he know all along that she ran away from home. Love the promise they make and as for the twist hmmm I don't know why but I feel like Rey is the guy that Taani parents choose for her... Maybe Im wrong



ha ha ha..everyone is thinking the same..I ll revel it wth the epi for sure😉
BTW Nats, I would like to start practicing what you have told me in the prior post (2keep that sprey in the bag)..India is no longer safe for women these days..sad but fact
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kikia

Amazing update debuuu,love rey pj 🤣and yesh love the update tooo tooo...im really looking forward for the next update as i wanna know how ou continue with this amazing story...thank you for such lovely update debuuu❤️





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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: patie

Ok nw coming to part 4 actually i wanted to comnt last night bt my net 😔 chuck

hush finally mera confusion dur hogaya Thnk god she is not criminal

acha toh taani ghar se bhaag gayi 😃 hmm ab muje kuch idea aa raha hai

bt chill abhi kuch nai bataungi...oww rey is such a sweetheart kitna khayaal rakhta hai uska ... n taani is really sweet 😳 bt epilogue itni jaldi 😔 hmm lets c kya hota hai



ooopsss Taani is criminal..not bad actually!!! wud definitely love to think over this idea😉 and I get something to write on it, I m gonna definitely gve u d credit😉😆

waise this comment 🤗 dur se hah😉😛😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ish_taarey

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Debu.Loved it!
It was a short update..Not done..😡 😆
Okay..Hmm.. Twist is coming...😲 And..U r writer??
What are you doing right now?? Update fast yarr..😆
*Kidding*
Loved it a lot...
Nice convo between Taani and Rey!
Well..well..well.. I am eagerly waiting for ur next chapter. Hmm.. Soon, you are going to end this story?? Okay!
Ye bhi.. koi puchne ki baat hain?? Of course u come with Season 2! I would love to read it.
And, sweetie.. U update ur FF too! Plzz..😉
Heehehehhe..😆
Update soon!
Pm me! 😳
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he he he Ish..thanku darling 🤗

next update is the last update😭😭..I didn't expect that you ppl ll love this too😳😊

you jee..take rest and get well soon 😳😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tareyfan

for part 2- it was hilarious yaar 🤣 n d line ""Are you a part time maths teacher in primary school kya?? " n ""Ohh..now the total is Three Hundred and Ninety Eight including the price of that broken Lass glass which was so lively few minutes back, so unfortunately it went to your hand and.." literally lol 🤣 n taani's anger omg 😲 n loving to see rey as a bubbly character n really eager to noe wat rey read ki he became serious so now heading to part 3



Glad Aish that this story has brought a smile on your face

and thanks for reading this story and loving it🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Itz.Me.Charleen

3rd update

hey itz awesome .. I wanna read more ..plz dont end it .. This Rey which you created iz more lovable dan d one in d show..i love him .. Nd Taani is too cute .. You write awesome :)



Even I have started falling for this Rey😳😆

actually, in my FF, Rey is so rude, cruel, arrogant and purely grey shaded character, many of my frnz told me that they can't think Rey as anti hero, so I thought 2give them this gift😊

and now everybody is loving him
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Itz.Me.Charleen

Part 4

debu u cant just end diz .. Plz na ..plz dont... I love it .. D way yiu ryt..d way rey speaks..d way taani reacts ..ol are just awesome..plz dont end diz yaar ..plzz ...yaaa i want season 2 or maybe d contiinuation
..u r an awesome writer..plzz ud soon..waitin fr ur pm!





season2 is on the way😉 bt after a short break😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: soumiluvztaarey

Wow yar it was superb
Luved rey in this ss
N taani she is so sweet
N di I want 2nd season of this ss plz continue soon n do PM me



Thanks for this comment 🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
***Epilogue***

"we have at least reached Mumbai huh..such a beautiful and memorable safar for me, I have enjoyed it" Taani says after getting down from the truck

"ohhh...beti Taani..how are your? why you have gone from the house without informing us? we were so worried, your mom didn't take a single piece of food since then, she is now bedridden, still has come to take you home only " these anxious lines come from a gentlemen aged sixty around - he is sober, well dressed man, Taani's father Mr Sikhawat.

He turns back and says to Rey "Thank you, Thank you very much Mr Reyaansh, you have informed us at the right moment, bachhi hai, naadaan hai, she has done this by the heat of the moment, but you have informed us and saved us, we are so grateful to you" he takes the palms of Rey in his hand with tears in eyes.

"I was waiting for you beti so long, as soon as we got the call from this young chap, I and your mom have started the car without delaying a second and we haven't also informed police, family matter, if solved peacefully then why disturbing them" he tells to her one and only daughter.

Rey can understand the pain what actually a parent can feel about their kid. He can not say a word. On the other hand, Taani becomes speechless with the sudden shock, the man who has helped her during her entire journey, who has saved her from the goons, now that man has broken her trust, betrayed her. She doesn't find any valid reason of that. Now, suddenly she thinks about the prize money and becomes more angry with Rey.

"I want to talk with you in private..now.."Taani says it to Rey with giving the extra pressure on the word NOW, so that her father gives her the space

"I didn't expect you Mr Reyaansh, you greedy man, you don't need to pretend yourself anymore for that Five Lakh reward ..Traitor" Taani throws these to him and walks out from the venue to her car where her mom, Mrs Sikhawat was waiting for her.

"Taani..listen..please " Rey says this but Taani can't hear this. A silent tear has been rolled out from his eyes without letting him know.

"na Jaane Kyuun, Hotaa Hai Ye Zindagi Ke Saath
Achaanak Ye Man
Kisi Ke Jaane Ke Baad, Kare Phir Usaki Yaad
Chhoti Chhoti Si Baat, na Jaane Kyuun"



*** The End***


Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago

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