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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Firstly, no BDSM for ArHi..I waise bhi wouldnt have wanted to read that. 😆 Too unpleasant.

M glad both accept the attraction to themselves.
I completely agree with khushi. If I were to meet some hotshot famous heartthrob of the nation and get attracted to him in a way other than of fangirls,it would surely unsettle me.

I liked their little bump in the end. Very well written.

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Loved it and Thanks for notifying in the title with the date.

That was a nice way of gathering her thoughts and luckily she could make up for her lapse.

Arnav's mother is interesting and reminding Khushi of her mother!

Loved the update.

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Penny

@penny25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

well well an update...for us... in just a gap of one day...:) it wud b really great if u keep d pace like dis...being selfish u now but i'm likin dis stry very much...:)

nd d part bour d our dream heri bein an actor...i agree...nd khushi is a possesive lil chick...

but can u make d update a lil longer...plz...;)

i like d not so subtle way u wrote bout d indian tv scenerio...baa was an immortal...i feel she died just bcoz she got fustrated in d end for livin so long..:P

P.s we'l stalk u thread till d tym u're not able to send PM...:)

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saradagandu

@saradagandu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Hey girl ,I hope ur doing good , I must say u have good old dictionary within u using which u weave such fabulous lines ,the way u wrote the inner feelings of kushi was outstanding ,while reading I was just wondering how on earth can anyone put words together soon perfectly such that it gives such a beautiful meaning to the lines ,I wonder if I will be ever able to write such a beautiful story in near future ,I hope not ,anyways all the best for the ride that u have undertaken ,I hope u get many passengers on board soon ,take care

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Just came across this today and my my! I loved it!!

The subtle satire references to our desi shows, the way Khushi adamantly refuses to watch them and ironically now she's put up with the profilic personality of the very same industry and to her own surprise, disapproval and anger, she seems to be attracted to him at the very first meet. Life does surprises us a lot by throwing a lot of things in our way. Looks like Khushi's going to have a very nice ride from now on!

And our great ASR. A tv hot-shot! Can he get more better than this?! And of all the ladies on the planet Earth who are apparently swooning over him including me, he's floored by a certain Miss Khushi.

Definitely looking forward to how the entire day together goes!!

And oh yes, I'm your new phanka 😃

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katunkka

@katunkka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Oh the car convo is going to be awkward. Oh I can't wait!
Don't worry being a newbie. You're excellent in your writings.

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zeedia

@zeedia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Just came across this story..wow this is amazing
U hve written it brilliantly..looking forward to the next update
M sooo much loving this story..

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gifttag

@gifttag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Awesome update...don't worry too much about The PMs I will manage to catch the updates until you are able to send the PMs..this story is so lovely and as I told you before you writing skill is too good...do you just realise what you have promised us ...another FF or SS that too on lines of ahem ahem...going to hold you to that promise...don't worry I am just joking ...no pressure.

So they both are feeling the heat and Khushi has got interesting views on Indian serials but she is right you know...can't wait to see where you are taking us with this awesome journey ...I have got the seat belt on and ready for a ride.

Thanks for the update.

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A_BA

@A_BA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Finally some interaction between the two of them!!

Thankfully Khushi was able to keep composure while she introduced herself to Arnav.

I really liked the way you described Khushi's attitude towards the typical Indian drama, but how this one actor affected her. I have to say that I never really watched any serial either when my mom would watch, as the plot and characters were usually so outrageous, but with IPKKND I was instantly pulled in when my friend told me about it.

So Arnav doesn't want her to see what's in his eyes?? Wonder what car ride will be like!

If he likes the feeling of Khushi crushed behind him, he should take out his bike😉

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

I hope you realise what a fab job you are doing of taking this story forward...Seriously your talent is par excellence i love the way you incorporate humour into your updates so effortlessly...👏

God knows i left my teenage years a long long time back hence i thought my obsession with ASR and the show was quite hilarious😆so khushi dear completely and totally understand your perspective..

Par Aabhi toh yeh shuruat hain..You have lots of dhak dhak and acidity coming your way.

Poor Ms.trying to be a journalist Gupta but doesn't know where to start...better be geared for this ride of a lifetime..

Aur haan no BDSM for these two they look best rabba veying away to glory...😆 and having great eye sex 😉or maybe you can make them indulge in some, that we wouldn't mind at all 😳

Jo haal dil ka idhar ho raha hain, woh haal dil ka udhar ho raha...looking forward to the next update and the car or a bike ride already...😃

Liza