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IPK007

@IPK007

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Just read all the parts in one go on Disha's recommendation and I'm so glad that I did. Your writing is outstanding and I love the way this story is shaping up. Really looking forward to the interview :)

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

I am really glad this lovely FF was recommended to me...really well written...enjoying it a lot...do looking forward to the interview.

Khushi has started to feel the heat already and she has not even started the interview yet...wonder how she is going to cope.

Thanks for the PM.

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Disha is responsible for getting me here and boy am i glad i made this trip...😊

Read all the parts in one go...

Loved the flustered khushi already, who is swooning over ASR. Bas ek naazar hi kaafi tha.😉 ASR who has not only captured the hearts of hapless maidens but married aunties as well 😆. Khushi is in for a ride of a lifetime, be geared girl. This is nothing like you have ever experienced before..

The dashing, goodlooking ASR who is enamored by the pretty as a peach khushi. Dhak dhak and acidity here they come.

So clover leaf how does it work i am geared for the ride.

Do you send PMs or do i bookmark this for future updates.

Liza

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vidya.sanjay

@vidya.sanjay

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Loved their awkward moments,both feeling heavily conscious o themselves and trying hard not to get embarrassed.
You are really very good for a first timer at writing.Good luck for the coming ones:)

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

And let the awkwardness begin 😆

Loved it.

How in god's name are they going to have a decent conversation agar abhi se yeh haal hai toh???

Looking forward for more

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

A_BA recommended this story and I just read all the chapters.

I must say this is a different take on Arnav and Khushi.

It reminds me of the SBS and SBB journalists following the TV stars for a day.

Loved their first meeting and I'm looking forward to the interview.

If possible please PM me when you update.

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Chap 1-Your narration is simple and impactful. Plus i liked the concept. A TV serial hero and a journo s' friend. Looking forward how and whats in store.

Beintehaan mohabbat. Lol. Good one.

And hey,I liked the friendship you built up between both payal and khushi.

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

And yes, hamari dost Disha ji got me here. :)

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Chapter 2 and 3-

Its making me more and more greedy about it. Good going. Anticipating excitedly about the interview.

A change from what normally the character of Khushi is known for. Someone who is a reserved and not an out going person though ofcourse not socially inept, does have no interest in trying to strike a conversation with a stranger.
And i lovved Arnavs description. Needless to say we fantasized a lot about him and have no shame. :D

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Chapters 4,5 and 6

oh I just loved the description. Lovely just as the rain.

So physical attraction it is and also I m keeping in mind the opening lines in the prologue post.,thinking where it'l be leading to.

Khushi s' reaction was a lol. So she did make a fool of herself and Arnav is no less. :D

So much for being a heart throb. These stars do have a tough life. To think what would happen if we can't go around in peace without getting posed for photos. How much they are patient.? But then guess,its the love of their fans which helps them.. Still trying to intrude their privacy by hounding them for weeks is :|

but thats how it is.

Waiting for the interview.