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I really like the concept of this story! Good job!

The setting of this story is very nice. Though I have never been to NC, the way you describe the small town atmosphere and the B&B makes it sound like a very pleasant place.

Will definitely be following this story!

So you have not only given Jenny a role even her Mrs. Townsend has appeared!

What a unique story...Garima running a little B & B and khushi and payal are her adopted daughters... Loved the relationship between the three of them share ... the best part is Arnav staying there for one month... khushi and arnav already had an interesting encounter and I cannot wait to see what more happens between these two...loved the way khushi drawing his eyes...and then seeing them live and thinking that nothing.. no painting...no sketch can do justice to them😆...awww...Nidhi ..u really killing me here coz you've made me gone in my arshiland dreaming😳...
I love the scene and place that you have chosen...by the beach It's such a beautiful place...am already falling this awesome story and the beach is what makes the story so beautiful... plz continue soon..

Reserved!

Unreserved!!

I'm so so sorry for commenting so late! I haven't had any time to read it and then to comment on it!! I seriously need to manage my time better! I'm so sorry!
Well, a new story from you and you have no idea how excited I am! Both your stories are so different and I must tell you that this was a wonderful beginning! I liked the idea of Garima being an independent woman, running a B&B and bringing up Payal and Khushi, her two adopted daughters! I loved the chemistry between the three of them, they share a wonderful rapport! The love that the sisters share is so touching! I loved the idea of Khushi being an artist! And they are expecting a mysterious guest from India who will also live with them! It is a very unique and a different idea!
Loved the equation between Jenny and Khushi! Jenny indeed is a true friend and wants Khushi to excel in what she is good at!
And their first encounter was so interesting! Khushi is so sweet and found him handsome! Well, any normal girl would! 😆 And she was sketching his eyes, Aww!! I loved that part! Eyes do speak a lot and Khushi could gather a lot of information just from looking at those deep pools of chocolate! And they met again, and I loved that part where you wrote that no sketch, picture or painting could do justice to those eyes! I'm so excited for this story! Them living together at the same place! Woww!!
It is a very fresh concept and I love it! Please update soon! Thank you for the PM! Wonderful start!

what a lovely start...can't wait to read more

Wel wel the beginning seems quite interesting
Wow arhi near the beach awesome
Pls continue soon
Just love ur work
Thanx

I love it!!!! I'm so siked to read how the story will play out!!!

loved the intro and the whole concept so looking forward to reading this one

Nice start. Classic Arnav and Khushi bump into each other and start their first fight while subconsciously mooning over each other.