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Posted: 12 years ago
Ten things I love about this chapter:

1. The A-K confrontation that I've been waiting for since forever!

2.The collision-papers flying Rabba Ve.

3.Finally, the accusation of being played.

4.The shaatir eavesdropping!

5.the arguments made sense, the moral compass began to matter, your rebuke to Shyam Jha for asking you out to a play, your anger towards Ashima for trying to shift loyalties from Papyrus to WordsWorth for something as basic as sex, even your frikking loyalty to her became endearing.."



6. Aapko isse kya farq padhta hai, revisited.


7.Arnav's admission that he had fallen for her! I never expected that at this point, dammit!

8.The kiss. Sigh.

9.The 'guilt' kostin.

10. Just your writing, ya. This story is such a pleasure to read!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for giving us such a wonderful piece of work meera. A thanks to NB for recommending this too..
Swami aka Arnav character has been portrayed so well in the story.. The playboy, "I dont care" attitude, his brilliance, information on finger tips, his smartness, ability to hook everyone with his wits, flaws, the courage to confront and handle the worse situations until he fell for those hazel eyes. No wonder Ashima has got to experiment the best protagonist for her story. I thought Khushi is someone who is offbeat character really proving a competition for Swami. She did play a good role in trying to trap Arnav with Ashima.. Ashima was a character which I thought was contrast to what was portrayed. She had the brains and guts to experiment her characters in real life.. She played along with the plan so smoothly that the "hawk eyed" Arnav couldnt decipher. Imran and Affie is such a cute couple I loved in the story apart from Aditi Aman.. Arnav has such a good friends circle, his relationships with Affiya and Aditi to pull legs of their respective husbands is really nice. Aditi looks lot more like Anjali of the show.. more like his sister kind.
This chapter throws light on how Arnav had found out their secret, the importance of loyalty which Ashima has on Papyrus, her deal with Arnav which had just nothing in meaning except to test his morals, the face off between Arnav and Khushi was more interesting than the confession of Ashima. He finally let out his emotions, confessed that he fell for her. The guilt Khushi posesses not able to reciprocate what she had for him, the concealed fact of why she "owes" to Ashima which prevents her to come out of her shell. A bleak line of relationship tug forms around Khushi Ashima's bond I guess. The kiss, the acceptance from Arnav's end, the questions shot back by Khushi finally the blame coming on to her head instead of Ashima since he had been affected more by her involvement in the act.. Brilliant! I love this story especially your way of writing.. 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
i just came across this story because expel recommended it... and think i am really blessed toread this... i have totally fallen for ur story...i can't wait to read ahead!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I find myself here again and I find myself asking the same question, Is it too early to be Spamming/stalking this thread for the next chapter? You see I am still very new at this spamming/stalking business and you make me want to try it M!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshix144

I find myself here again and I find myself asking the same question, Is it too early to be Spamming/stalking this thread for the next chapter? You see I am still very new at this spamming/stalking business and you make me want to try it M!😆


And I have been waiting for someone else to ask this question...although I have hinted at hating the wait and the pain I am in associated with the waiting !
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar


And I have been waiting for someone else to ask this question...although I have hinted at hating the wait and the pain I am in associated with the waiting !


😆 Iss restlessness for the next update ko kyaa naam doon? Iss restlessness ko kyaa naam doon? Ab only M ji can answer or enlighten us about the Shub mahurat for the next update! :D

You will be glad to know that you are not alone my friend, you are not alone in this game that we can refer to as " the waiting game"!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshix144


😆 Iss restlessness for the next update ko kyaa naam doon? Iss restlessness ko kyaa naam doon? Ab only M ji can answer or enlighten us about the Shub mahurat for the next update! :D

You will be glad to know that you are not alone my friend, you are not alone in this game that we can refer to as " the waiting game"!


Unless we can pressurise her again...it's on Tuesday around 9ish!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update as all your other updates...loved it...ur updates makes us anxiously wait for the next one...u are one hell of a writer.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally Unresd!! 😊


Now I can shamelessly demand for an update!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar


Unless we can pressurise her again...it's on Tuesday around 9ish!


Thank you Ma'am!, Tuesday is not Far but somehow it seems FAR! Pressurize you say, does that actually work?😃

PS. Talk about Spamming, hope she doesn't kick us out of this thread! :P

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