hey!! YOU'RE BACK! And what a lovely chapter you've brought us :) :) :) I was counting the days to 2nd July and as fate would have it, fell ill on that very day. I waited for my fever-induced delirium to end so I could read this in my full senses. Missed your story man. For me the characters you've built up are so engaging that even the supposed shift in genre didn't alter my interest one bit. I just want to follow their story, whatever shape it takes. And honestly the direction you've taken has me more intrigued.
It was impossible to not love this chapter. Their banter, sarcasm and the comfort in their relationship had me smiling throughout. I've landed in trouble like Swami when I end up sharing too much with my mother, thankfully none of those of conversations were about hookers. They even use the same arguments - "passing revelations as jokes doesn't work with me".
So Mr. Raizada is finally reflecting on his actions and thank God he realises he's actually nowhere with Ashima's deal. The doubts are taking place in his mind. Wonder why he asked Amma about relationship with older woman- does he really think he can still do it? Doesn't he know the power of hazel eyes!!
It's funny how eager he is to follow Khushi's FF. And he smiled at her author's note- he knows it's because he's getting to her as well. The realisation about his own writing was particularly well written. What if he backs off and foils Ashima's plans completely? When he thought- "Trouble was that the only solution he could see went through the jungle full of cougars and dusky middle aged women." I just laughed like hell. Love how subtly you bring in humour. I also laughed a lot at the "reverse psychology is your tool of trade" bit. Mothers!!
One sincere request. Don't put up pictures of food please. Now where will I find Idlis and chutney.😛
So Kanna is off to be a better son by watching DDLJ with Amma. And I'm waiting to know more and more. Khushi kaha hain, kaisi hai wo Meera?
So glad you're back. Really hope you had a wonderful vacation.
Thanks for the wonderful chapter.
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