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aliya51293

@aliya51293

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Was it for me...i'm too emotional...😭

kamini u got this stupid story to gift me...abe ragging to tune isse hi kar li...now i want it to be continued...in happy way. change it into two shot, ss, or ff...i dont care.just change this thing...taarey should be together...u love happy ending...hai na. I want it to be continued...and jaldi...i wont wait.

And yeah after this dont think that I'm gonna compliment you😛

Edited by aliya51293 - 12 years ago

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--Suhani--

@--Suhani--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Amazing OS...

u should probably continue this...

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Maya

@mymy_taarey

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

that was so amazing. i almost started crying!!! seriously good! would love if you made a part 2 to this!!! but i like the way it ended!

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Amazing os...
very well written as usual...
loved every bit of it...
the hesitation of tani while saying no to Rey was beautifully portrayed..
but why only one shot...thoda aur likho na...
thanks for pm...
agli baar pehla res mujhe he karna hai...
love you

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Viji.Chandran

@Viji.Chandran

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

amazing stry...

i always thought that TR break up cn put an end to evrythng...

bt ur os made me think again...

i think rather than hiding tey should f8...

f8 for their love... evn her tauji want her to b happy...

so cn u plz continue d os??????????????????

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Arbitrator.

@Arbitrator.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

That was fantastic!! I so loved it!! Immensely painful and beautifully written... You are seriously a master in writing! 🤗

And a warm welcome to aliya.. 🤗

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Mon_tr

@Mon_tr

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Emotnal n Amezng os.luvd it.

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Nikita

@--coco--

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Nice os love, what pulled it off was the last line said by Taani.

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salta

@salta

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: aliya51293
Was it for me...i'm too emotional...😭
kamini u got this stupid story to gift me...abe ragging to tune isse hi kar li...now i want it to be continued...in happy way. change it into two shot, ss, or ff...i dont care.just change this thing...taarey should be together...u love happy ending...hai na. I want it to be continued...and jaldi...i wont wait.

And yeah after this dont think that I'm gonna compliment you😛

you are so ungrateful...and dear till now toh i havent done anything...so dont make me do anything.and shut up for further. but still okay if u want, i'll change it in a story...look how nice i am...fine i'll do it a happy ending.

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NSohi13

@NSohi13

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Aww it so emotional and touching ... Taani is so heart broken... But ya that's right ... Everything is sorted out for Rey and his friends... :(
Thank you for this story...

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