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NILOUFER

@BARUN-myladdu

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#761

Rach how does it feel..ppl fighting over for d first spot for ur story..??ur sentiments pl..

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ok so "mannu" mami is being herslf...

bt glad naina stood up for her son n khushi..

atlst she wont b shocked to see them together one day 😛

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nxt comes d ARHI part...😳

khushi feeding him rasmalai...haaayyyeee how utterly romantic...

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"Khushi, don't make this hard on me. You and I both know how difficult it was to fix an alliance with him. You should be grateful that he is still willing to wait for your answer."

oh god...shez facing probs cuz of dt incident is nt it??poor girl 😭

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What do you do when you realise that you have turned blind to the entire world except for that one person, when your eyes simply follow every step, every word, and every movement of hers?

How do you stop your gaze from wandering around like a predator ready to catch its prey?

Why does it become so difficult to breathe when that person grabbing all your attention disappears from your eye even for a second?

How do you get your brain to focus on anything else around you except for her?

How do you react when she catches you staring at her at every possible opportunity?

Can you ever stop her from visiting your dreams at night or your thoughts during the day?

Her laugh, her sneeze, her rapid chattering, her squeaky giggling. The way her hips swayed as she walked away from him. Or the way she stood on her toes when she reached out hang the curtains.

Her, chewing the tip of the pen when she was thinking deeply. Or the tapping of her fingers when she was nervous.

The low thumps of her feet as she walked past him. The slight fragrance of that one tiny jasmine that she pinned near her ear.

The dupatta tied in a particular knot on the side of her waist while she worked. Or the special way of twisting her hair up in a bun.

The smile which she flashed when she was extremely happy. The smile she only flashed when she was pretending to be happy. The smile she reserved only for Dadi. The smile she flashed when she was upto some mischief.

The way she scrunched up her nose in worry or the way her eyes crinkled when she was apprehensive.

Her, stepping into the house only using the right foot. Her way of neatly arranging the cutlery in a particular order on the dining table.

The tiny brown scar near her elbow. The birthmark on the right side of her neck.

The little space between her lower incisors, the little pimple exactly three centimetres below her left eye.

He noticed every bit of it.

Yes, Arnav Singh Raizada had infact never noticed someone so intently like he had observed Khushi. Nothing was amiss his eyes.

😳

i ws al smiles thru dis part ...😳😳

guyz realy do dt dont dey hehe...

u ve described everything so romatically beautifull rach...LOOOVVVEEEDDD ITTT

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AHA!!

so in d nxt update v ll b served arhi romance???

haaayyye cant wait...

once again hun FAAABB UPDATE...

keep up d gud work ...loadz of muaaahhhzzz

Edited by BARUN-myladdu - 12 years ago

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#762

Originally posted by: BARUN-myladdu
Rach how does it feel..ppl fighting over for d first spot for ur story..??ur sentiments pl..

🤣🤣

What a question !!

I don't think she really cares, she just doesn't want to see any RES after one hour 😆😆😉

Will read it this night 😉😉

and will post all my comments on wednesday and thurdays 😉😉

🤗

Edited by Agathe - 12 years ago

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wonderblake

@wonderblake

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#763

**edits**

That was so so sweet, Arnav is noticing every minute detail about Khushi.

Arnav be careful, it seems like you are falling in love with your best friend.

I love Naina, she just wants her son back and he she wants him to be happy.

It is absolutely adorable to see how mothers care for their sons.

And you have portrayed their relationship really well.

I hope that Manorama will keep her big nose out of this, the last thing Arnav and khushi want is another separation after fifteen years.

Awesome writing Rachel, waiting for the next part.

And so sorry for the late editing, got caught up with some work.

Edited by wonderblake - 12 years ago

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#764

Originally posted by: BARUN-myladdu
Rach how does it feel..ppl fighting over for d first spot for ur story..??ur sentiments pl..

Want my honest sentiments?

"Crazy people!"🤪 <----- Yup that's what I exactly feel.😆 coz believe me, there is nothing special in getting the first spot. I don't get the whole hype behind it, coz I read all the comments whether they are first or last.

And you know what irks me?😆 reserving the first few spots only to end up commenting, 'superb update', 'wonderful update', 'update soon'.😆 Hey, if they want to write only that much, why reserve a spot for it?🤪

I truly appreciate people who take the time to write down comments more than 3 lines and point out what they liked and what they didn't. Now those are the comments that I truly wait for. They are the ones that make me all excited.⭐️

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#765

nice chapter... well , it was really a beautiful time in the kitchen...totallly cozy and warm... but khushi seems to be the realistic person here...but i hope her dreams do come true...
clearly arnav has started falling for his kukkoo.. :)
and am glad naina is not prejudiced but on the contrary she is happy for the bonding...
and yes , thursday seems to be faaar...but loooking very much forward to the teaser!!

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#766

Originally posted by: Agathe

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What a question !!
I don't think she really cares, she just doesn't want to see any RES after one hour 😆😆😉

Will read it this night 😉😉
and will post all my comments on wednesday and thurdays 😉😉

🤗

Aww.. Agathe. You know me so well.🤗

You really know what annoys me.🤪 Good girl.

And I'll be waiting for your comment.😉

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Nirjhoramanisha

@Nirjhoramanisha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#767

Lovely update.arnau is falling for khushi,so sweet.

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#768

he notice so many things about her and she want more time out to meet may be her future husband...his dadi like her his future bro- in -law want to play cupid...it is only one thing that they love each others so deeply that even they themselves don't know and that is beauty that we reader feel and ours eyes tears when ever we read this story...loving it

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Habfa

@Habfa

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#769

Loved it. 😊

Can't wait for the next update 😊

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#770

Reality bites 😒.

So, Naina does understand that Arnav is changing coz of Khushi and she is not unhappy about the developments. For me, that is phenomenal. Somehow the fact that the class difference doesn't bother naina is phenomenal. But that's a mother who wants her son's happiness beyond anything else. She doesn't care that Khushi works for them. 👏 to Naina Raizada but hey! I never said she is perfect ... Naina's weak stand during her conversation with her family was disappointing but I will put it down to blind siding by Manorama Maami.

One of the things I used to enjoy about IPk used to be that Khushi recovers faster than Arnav in most dhak dhak scenarios. I love that about your story too. I have no doubt Arnav didn't think of Khushi doing his work from the servant perspective but that is the statement that brings her back to earth. She remembers that she is a servant in Arnav's house and reminds him of the same. Once again reality bites 😡. The class divisions in our world are strongly entrenched and it is probably wrong if we think this happens only in Indian society. However, the acceptance of such situations in our society maybe one of the hardest.

Dhak, dhak dhak dhak... the hug and rasamalai feeding was dhak dhak dhak ... rabba vey awesome 😳. I don't mind a messy Khushi as long as she doesn't smell 🤣. It actually lends a very domesticated feel to the whole thing and that is exactly what Arnav missed out all these years ... the unconditional love and a home filled with warmth.

Arnav Singh Raizada is on a holiday and he is pretty jobless I guess ... kidding 🤣. By God, it is incredible how much he had noticed about Khushi. It was cute, adorable, awesome and sexy. But on a more serious note, I have to admit that I'm jealous of Khushi coz any girl would die to have a guy who is sooo into her.

YAY to me Rach ... I guessed right about Manorama maami's eyes 😛. My next prediction ... Lavanya is going to make an entry really soon. Maybe in the next update or the one after 😉. Am going to wait and watch.

BTW, I reserved from my phone ... have never done anything like that before 😲.

Edited by AquaSandhya - 12 years ago