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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#731

well whoever the observer in the corner was doesn't seem to happy that Khushi and Arnav are well close, and possibly in a more closer way than friendship, it could be his mum i assume as his Dadi is a matchmaker for the two

Arnav's gesture for the kids was really cute and sweet and bet the kids really loved it

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#732

Heartwarming update..loved it..

It's not his mom..may b Nani

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#733

Aww that was one of the sweetest update by now, sweet just like that chocolate they shared 😊 Lovely!

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#734

nice update... loved it.. wonder who saw them, i'm guessing its Arnav's mom...

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clarissajohn

@clarissajohn

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#735

Wow sparks fly sparks fly sparks fly

Lavos beautiful update

Both are confused as whats going on

But we know

Update soon

A song for their blooming love

Na umr ki seema ho

Na janm ka ho bandhan

Jab pyaar kare koi

To dekhe keval mann

(Nayi reet chalaakar tum

Yeh reet amar kar do

Aakaash ka soonapan

Mere tanha mann mein

Paayal chhankaati tum

Aa jaao jeevan mein

Saansein dekar apni

Sangeet amar kar do

Honton se chhoo lo tum

Mera geet amar kar do

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#736

A very beautiful chapter!

To appreciate someone's good ways/deeds is wonderful but to follow it and practice it in your own lives is way different..Arnav appreciated Khushi's efforts in providing the children love and some basic necessities but he did not stop there ,he actually went ahead and helped them in his own way..

Finally things are changing between Arnav and Khushi...but who was watching them..Arnav's dad or his mother?

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Farha Naz

@farha_ipkknd

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#737

a big hiii...I'm not out of my hibernation and commenting but I'm definitely not a new reader...I read Mirage and its one of my favourite ffs ...and when I came across your new ff, u
you've already posted 14 chapters...so I've lots to say

anyway its sooo different from Mirage...the only common thing is your flawless writing and execution of emotions ...its in a word awwsmmm...
the way you narrated their memories ,khushi's loneliness, her wait for arnav,his guilt for not able to save his best friend, not able to meet her eyes...its all sooo real..I cried with them,I laughed with them...I really got scared thinking about what could possibly happened to khushi...and just like arnav even i'm afraid to face it...the best thing of your writing is you made us feel it... all 15 updates are mind blowing ...

sorry for this long blabbering...waiting for Sunday

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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#738

You know I am having my exams and your FF is my stress reliever. It has a calming effect on me. I have said this before but will say it again - the innocence and peacefulness is just plain brilliant. I love your writing style. It always make me smile.