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Posted: 12 years ago

#721

Wonderful chapter!! Such a wonderful gesture on Arnav's part to buy the orphans gifts and donate his books! I loved how he bought the chocolate for Khushi as well. I wonder who saw them and what to pact this will have later on.

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shivanisaur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#722

I have read this whole ff so far in one go and it's amazing!
Your writing skill is evident and the plot so far is interesting making this a riveting read!
I really enjoyed the chapter and I hope to read more of this soon.
Thank you!

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shivanisaur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#723

And the chapter itself was touching.
Khushi helping those children was so sweet and the way arnav mirrored her actions was touching.
I like the small changes in their relationship. Yet we still need to find out what happened in the past.
And those pair of unhappy eyes at the end.
Who may they be?
You leave so many questions answered which is painful to the reader but great in keeping us hooked! ;-)
It been an amazing read so far...
Let's wait and see what is in store for our arnav and khushi!

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#724

CHAPTER 14

Khushi's realistic nature makes me sad. Poor girl. Had to learn soon that she can't dream.

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Manitaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#725

Such beautiful and thoughtful gesture by A. K's rubbing off on him 😉.

To give happiness is one's greatest ability.

You closed the chapter with very meaningful lines. That, I felt, was the cherry on top.

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#726

Chapter 15

Glad Arnav did all this. Khushi has such a good effect on him, brings out his best.

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gundu92

@gundu92

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#727

Wow! Just, wow.

You write so well! I was completely submerged in Khushi and Annyav's world. It was only when the chapter was over that I realized I was sitting in front of my computer, reading.

Awesome!!! Can't wait for Sunday!!

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Sarah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#728

Wow that was an amazing and outstanding update, written perfectly.

Loved the fact Arnav took present and sweets for the kids and even read them khushi's favourite childhood story.

Awww the way that boy came and hugged Arnav and said he was like a father figure, honestly bought a tear to my eye, it was such a beautiful and touching moment.

Poor Arnav was shocked when the kids told Arnav that him and Khushi are like brother and sister, loved the way he tried bringing up the question in front of Khushi and finally found the courage to ask her.

So glad Khushi said no and told Arnav he will always be his best friend, honestly I felt so relieved.

Wow the last part was amazing, the chocolate eating together and Arnav licking khushi's fingers, it was such an intimate moment, very beautiful. I think poor Arnav was left breathless, I wonder how they will react when they share there first kiss (I'm sure I can dream, don't know whether it will be included in your story)

Is it Anjali that has noticed chotey at the end.

Please continue soon.

By the way love your words of wisdom you wrote at the end, very true words, relates to my life at times xx

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samirao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#729

Must say a very heartwarming , touching and emotional update , I am not good with words ,so I don't know how to apreciate ur update in fancy words , Arnav Khushi and kids scene was just awosome , not only Arnav but Iam also learning a lot from Khushi , sister and brother clarification scene was funny and intense at the same time , chocolate scene was passionate , so finally there feelings r changing from friendship to love , so glad to read that , dear writter u explained Arnav's feelings after chocolate scene very beautifully , Spc the line , every single morning he wants to wake up and see khushis eyes , was brilliant , Whow is unhappy with love birds closeness must b mom or dad , any ways thanku once again dear writter for giving us such a marvelous story , and sp thanks for bringing them close , eagerly waiting for sunday

Edited by samirao - 12 years ago