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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: rajkumaripari

Kya yaarr Yashi.. Rula diya..😔..Par dekhke ronse se accha..Intense n suprb Taarey read karke royuu..😳..COming 2 d OS! It is very emotional bt awesome!! 😉..I loved it..Continuee plzz...ur an awesome writer...love ur writing skills...Waiting for ur nxt updt! UPDATE soon!!!!!PM me!! 😃


off course dear i'll definitely pm you btw thanks for liking it😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you so much😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sad taani dead :(

Plz update soon...n i din get a pm 4 dis :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonakshigupta

Sad taani dead :(

Plz update soon...n i din get a pm 4 dis :(


sorry dear and thank you so much😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
part- 2

then rey start remembering all the memory all the days which he spent with taani

rey to taani – taani aa j bhi yaad hai mujhe vo din jab mai tumse pehli baar mila tha yaad hai na tumhe

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a girl enter in the st. Louis college she is wearing a blue top with black jeans and look like a angel every boy of the college stare her she attract the attention of everyone in the college but seniors still try to rag her they told her wrong direction and spread oil on stairs she is sleep on stairs and fall but someone catch her , protectively , safely she clutched his shirt so tightly as like she didn't want to loose him , her eyes are still shut so hard, but boy looked her face continuously without blink his eyes then girl felt protective arms around her and she slowly open her eyes & get lost in those warmth black eyes as like this eyes promise her that he always with her and uske sath kabhi kuch galat nahi hone dega , he always there to safe her , and on the other hand rey also lost in her big brown eyes kitni sachayi thi un aakho mai , there is pure bliss in her eyes but they come in their sense after hearing a people's voice...
girl- thank you

boy- dosti mai no sorry no thank you

g- but hum frnds kab bane

b- abhi…….. (she made a confused face ) arre confuse mat ho mere kehne ka matlab hai tum bhi iss college mai new ho mai bhi new hu tum bhi yaha kisi ko nahi janti mai bhi yaha kisi ko nahi janta ab hum dono mai itni similarity hai toh hum dost huye na ( she smile on her talk) vaise bura na mano toh kya mai apni dost ka nam puch sakta hu…

girls (with smile on her face which add more beauty on her face)---- off course taani

boy- ( confuse expression) ---- of course taani yeh kaisa naam hai ????

taani- (with more wide smile)----- taani

boy-(he also smile and extend his hand towards her) ------hiii I am reyansh but you can call me rey ……..

taani- tum konsa course kar rahi ho

rey- commerce or tum

tani- mai bhi or aapka section

rey- c

t- wow mera bhi yani hum dono ab sirf frnds hi nahi balki classmates bhi hai……..

then period bang rang

r- let's go chalet chalet baat karte hai varna pehle din hi class mai late ho jayenge

t- yup thank you Krishna ji mujhe aap mil gaye

r- what?

t- I mean mujhe laga tha itni jaldi koi frnd nahi banega or class mai akele jaana padega chup chap or mujhe chup rehna bilkul pasand nahi hai mujhe baate karna itna pasand hai ( and she is going and going)

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rey-( with smile )- --- or uss din k baad se hum best frnd ban gaye or kab ye frndship love mai badal gayi pata hi nahi chala…. Mai jab bhi stage par dance karta toh meri aakhe baas crowd mai tumhe hi dhoondhti or tum bhi mere liye sabse jada cheer karti thi , or jab koi ladki mere pass aati toh tumahara reaction , tum mujhe sabke bich mai se kaise hath pakad kar khich kar le jati thi or vo tumhari meri itni tariff karna , or haste haste mujhse ruth jana or tumhe maanane k liye kitne papad balne padte the , I must say tum itni mushkil se manti thi na , or tumhari vo non stop talking ek baar start ho jati toh fir toh rukti hi nahi thi but I love all this or yaad hai tumhe vo din jab maine finally tumhe propose karne ka decide kiya or pure college k samne valentine day par tumhe propose kiya tha………..

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rey- taani mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai

t- abhi nahi rey baad mai baat karte hai (and she again busy in dancing)

r- but taani bahut important baat hai plz

t- okkk bolo

r- sabke samne

t- haaa jo baat karni hai sabke samne karo

r- okkk


he picked a diamond ring from his left pocket and sat on his knees taani continuously looking at him , she is so surprised but rey continuously smiling because vo finally aa j apni lady love ko propose kar raha hai or somewhere down vo janta hai that taani also love him …..

r- taani aaj maai tumse apne dil ki baat kehne jaa raha hu samajh nahi aa raha kaise start karu , sach batau toh thoda sa nervous bhi hu but I have to say I love you taani I really do , jab uss din tum meri bahao mai aake giri thi tabhi dil mai kuch ajjeb sa laga tha , fir socha nai aisa kuch nahi hai hum toh sirf best frnd hai , par pata hi nahi chala kab ye sirf best frndship love mai badal gayi , tumhara mere liye itna concern , vo tumhari non stop bate man karta hai bas pure din suntan rahu , tumhari hasi aisa lagta hai jaise meri duniya mai kisi ne 100 watt ka bulb jala diya , or tumhare aakhe unme itni gehrayi hai ki kai baar kho jata hu unme , tumhara vo mujhe se choti si baat pe ruth jana or fir ice cream dekhte hi man jana , tumahra vo ajeeb ajeeb se face banaa I love everything , tum jab mere sath hoti ho taani toh mai tanhai mai bhi akela nahi hota but jab tum mere sath nahi hoti toh mai bhid mai bhi apne aapko akela mehsus karta hu , tumhari good morning se mera din start hota or tumhari gud night pe end , tum mere sath ho toh badi se badi mushkil choti lagti hai , or badi se badi rasta aasan (easy) or mai chata hu ye sath hamesha bana rahe so will you merry me ???? I promise kabhi tumhari aaakho mai aasu nahi aane dunga , tumhe har khusi dunga , itni khusi dunga ki sea bhi tumhari khushiyo k samne chota lagega , tumhari har baat manunga , kabhi tumse ladai nahi karunga plz haa bol do……


she has tears in her eyes but she said

taani- nooo I don't love you (and ran away from there)

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rey- and,maine socha apni jaan le lu but fir socha ki jo chiz meri hai hi nahi hai vo mai kaise sakta hu , kyoki meri jan toh tum ho, you left me behind all alone taani bina ye bataye ki meri galti kya thi why were you said me nooo and from next day you start avoiding me , whenever I try to talk to you, you taunt me or ignore me , but taani I know ki jitni taklif , jitna dard mujhe ho raha tha uss se kahi jada dard or tklif tumhe ho rahi thi, every time when you taunt me your own heart broke into 100 pieces , but taani mai I bahut confuse tha ki aisi kya vajha kya reason hai jiss vajah se tumhe ye sab karna pad raha hai or jab mujhe iska reasn pata chala toh ( suddenly his expression changed , he is looking too shocked and a tears made their way in his eyes )...


okk guys i am done her plz leave your precious comments and hit like...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
res

unres...

ye...i m furst to read ...awesome update jaan...love their first meet...and the confession of rey to taani was lovely ...but taani said no...may be she has some major bimari like cancer ...and thats why she is no more ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
awesome n emotional update...
just left d stry at a cliff hanger...
that's nt dne...
so plz update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
emotional cliffhanger update...
I loved d proposal...
really want to know d reason of her 'NO'...
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Ugh!! Dii???!! Aise cliffhanger types point pe kyu chod diya?! *pouts*

but whatever.. LOVED THE UPDATE!! I mean.. All the flashback scenes were sooo cute!! Loved them!! Can't wait for the next update!! Do update soon and do pm me!! <3

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