FF:Sanaya Barun Mohit( Pighalta Asman)Part 10-Pg21

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Mahnoor

@rockprincess123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Res!

~~~~~

Unres...

Yay, me first me first!!!!

Great start on the FF hun, really well done! I'm kinda confused about the names... is Khushi Khushwant?? Is Khushi supposed to be a nickname for Khushwant? And then the Chaudri family and the Radhwana's are having a feud... ooohh wonder what's going to happen between them!

So, is it all a big misunderstanding between them? I'm guessing it has something to do with the death of Arnav's mother.. i don't really think it was anything to do with Chaudri's.

I liked the storyline and plot and how Arnav automatically sees Khushi as is "Queen" and starts unconciously thinking about their future. It was sooo sweet!

Waiting for the next chapter, Noor Xx

Edited by rockprincess123 - 12 years ago

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sakthi25

@sakthi25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

So pleasant and natural entry of characters...

Liked it as it is not overdramatic...

Let's see what happens in the party.

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sushna

@sushna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

woww...nice...

gud one...

thankx for pm...😊

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nimko

@nimko

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

interesting begin...👏
looking forward ...

All The Best ...👍🏼

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: rockprincess123
Res!
~~~~~
Unres...

Yay, me first me first!!!!

Great start on the FF hun, really well done! I'm kinda confused about the names... is Khushi Khushwant?? Is Khushi supposed to be a nickname for Khushwant? And then the Chaudri family and the Radhwana's are having a feud... ooohh wonder what's going to happen between them!

So, is it all a big misunderstanding between them? I'm guessing it has something to do with the death of Arnav's mother.. i don't really think it was anything to do with Chaudri's.

I liked the storyline and plot and how Arnav automatically sees Khushi as is "Queen" and starts unconciously thinking about their future. It was sooo sweet!

Waiting for the next chapter, Noor Xx

Yes, Khushwant is Khushi

Yes, there is no misunderstanding , Randhawa and Chaudhris are actually having family feud.

And the story will be very violent at some point. Get prepared.

😃