Smitar's: Finding Khushi #7 Part 25(1) Pg125 (7/5)

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Swati Hansraj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#491

Wow! Smita... i have no words for this last update.

It was magical, not just the way u described the last pic, but by the way u wrote abt their reactions.

Loved it! Just no other words for it!

Thanks Rashmi for the PM.

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404703

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Posted: 12 years ago

#492

waiting for the next updatewaaa...

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arshi21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#493

I don't know how I missed so many updates...

I loved each and everyone of them..and Khushi's and arnav's desire is now almost palpable...like mami said- "jaldi shaadi kara dio inki" :P

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#494

wow that sure was something
how did they managed to do this
recreate what they feel for one another
so anamika is a well established designer huh
seems she has take fancy to khushi wonder why
but that sure was mindblowing chemistry

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Monasha

@monasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#495

It was a Very Lovely Update...
Anamika is super cool...
Ganesh made Khushi n Arnav prince n princess...
Khushi is calling Her own self Beautiful because of the Cloths ... heheh...
Licking part was so romantic but Khushi only think on Getting Ticklish...
Update soon Dear.. Really waiting
And Thanx for The PM Rashmi 😳

Edited by monasha - 12 years ago

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Pramiti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#496

I quite dislike seeing "loved it" comments... but...

MAN!

I loved it!!!! Both sections! *sigh* You're just too good, seriously.

My mind is all #$%**(@# right now, I swear!

I want scooby. And Arnav. Cute and delicious, both. 😆

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Pramiti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#497

Oops. Double posted.

P.S. I still don't get what's up with Anamika. :/

Edited by maverickmartin - 12 years ago

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smitar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#498

Originally posted by: Maddy1270
One looong, heart-warming update! Thank you, thank you, thank you for posting such an adorable picture of Scooby' one just wants to cuddle him! I thought he would fall into the basket," Arnav smiled' and you managed to find just the right picture of a puppy curled up in a basket! When I imagined Scooby, I was thinking of a golden retriever or a Labrador' any idea what breed the cutey in the picture is?

The song is beautiful' is it a ghazal? "You want to kill me before you marry me?" "Never. Not even if you kill me daily all our lives, making me worry about you!" loved the query and the touching reply' "I will match you worry for worry." 'they are truly the odd couple, finding the quirkiest things to argue about! Nice to see Khushi not backing down from stating some unpalatable truths in the midst of their semi-serious squabble' how quickly it turns to concern! All said and done each word and action of theirs ' be it Arnav's anxiety and remorse on remembering the guest house incident, or Khushi, having recalled his diabetes-induced fainting spell, lovingly chiding him for skipping his lunch just to be with her ' speaks of their love for each other' in the blink of an eye the air is filled with passion: trust Arnav to latch on to the fact that her own desire for him is what scares Khushi. So he doesn't hesitate to let loose his naughty side on her! Licking and sucking on her fingers is another introduction for Khushi to the world of sensuous pleasure! Nice to see her flustered. Khushi shivered, and dragging her legs close together, pulled her suit down to cover her knees' that's a telling comment on the rampaging desire she's fighting to control! The beauty of the scene where they browse through the pictures is that each notices how exquisite the other looks, totally missing the fact that they, too, look ravishing' their sole focus is on the true nature of their loved one that Ganesh's genius has managed to capture' Khushi's unassuming nature and her goodness is what captures our hearts: she doesn't consider herself beautiful and, in her innocence, doesn't realise how great a conquest she made when Anamika offered to design clothes for her' all of Arnav's attempts to woo the latter fell flat and his clout failed him, whereas Khushi's simplicity and genuineness won Anamika over' the irony isn't lost on Arnav! I believe that Anamika has things in common with Khushi: both are honest about their feelings and know how to value relationships' money, power and fame has no meaning to them, especially if it stands in the way of forging interpersonal connections' because of the close friendship and the mutual respect that has grown between them, I hope Khushi invites Anamika to her wedding!

"Just call me whenever you want to see me. I will appear before you." Love how Arnav's doesn't miss any opportunity to make Khushi blush; their gentle teasing was quite touching, too! Smita, not only are you a great writer but you also have great fashion sense' Khushi's pink-silver-gold-seagreen outfit and Arnav's black sherwani as well as the white one are just spot on! The way you described the dance reminded me of their tango-like steps during that 'Bali in Delhi' sequence. The embers of their passion need just a spark to become an out of control conflagration, and both know it! No wonder Khushi tried to tamp it down by focusing on the last photo, but to no avail' that only added fuel to the fire! I wouldn't be surprised if that last photo doesn't persuade them to forego the four month waiting period and to jump into matrimony, immediately' now I understand why the Guptas and the Raizadas wanted the same! The themes for the various photos are spot on! Anamika's concept has been brought to life by Ganesh' their shared genius has made the Arnav-Khushi love story come alive, leaving no doubt in anyone's minds that these two individuals are made for each other' Lisa and others of your ilk, eat your hearts out!

It is a song from the movie David.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EF57pgCjguk&list=PLzz8Mvy1ahwdB2DorYnjXgYCipR2Q3Rus&index=9[/YOUTUBE]

Scooby is cute, isn't he? Breed? Let's say, Mongrel?😆

Smita

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#499

AAJ TO HADD HO GAYI.. BOHOT HI ZYADA LATE HU MAIN!

SINCERE APOLOGIES!

BACK WITH MY VISHESH TIPPANI on Chapter 23 (4)

Loved the update Smita... The bonding between ArShi is too cute! Eating lunch together! Awww.. A.D.O.R.A.B.L.E ❤️

Then Arnav is shocked to know how closer Khushi has gotten to Anamika..😲 The greatest designer in India is Khushi's friend and not ASR's! Hahaha.. 😆

SERIOUSLY SPEAKING... I CANNOT HIGHLIGHT ANYTHING IS THIS COZ THIS WHOLE CHAPTER WAS A HIGHLIGHT!

But, I'm gonna tell you particular things that i LOVED about this chapter!

First,

As they finished their meal, Khushi complained, "Why did you come to see me instead of having your lunch? What if your shakkar had gone down and you had fainted as you did in the kitchen the other day? Aap ko pata bhi he, how scared I was? The great Arnav Singh Raizada swaying and falling down in front of me! I almost had a heart attack!" Her worried eyes bored into his.

He smiled.

"Don't smile! You scare me. Always.", she declared.

"You are scaring me by shouting at me or you are scaring me by fainting or you are scaring me by...", her eyes went to his lips, and she swallowed hard.

"I am scaring you by...", Arnav asked, his lips turning up in a naughty smile.

"Nothing.", Khushi was quick to say. She tried to jump off the table, but Arnav caught hold of her hand.

"Arnavji, kya kar rahe he aap? Chodiye hamein. Let me wash my hand.", Khushi tried to free herself.

"I wil clean it for you.", Arnav offered his services.

Khushi frowned at him. Arnav brought her hand to his mouth, and after dropping a kiss on her palm, began to lick daintily at her fingers.

Khushi stared at him for a moment, and burst out laughing, her laughter tinged with discomfiture.

"Arnavji, chodiye hamein. It tickles...", she gasped.

He sucked on a finger, running the tip of his warm tongue along the length of the digit. Khushi gasped loudly, and pulled her finger out of his mouth, breathing heavily.

Moving his eyes over her heaving bosom and rosy cheeks, Arnav asked softly, "Does it only tickle?"

Khushi blushed, feeling butterflies flutter their wings in her tummy.

She jumped off the table.

"Careful, Khushi.", Arnav warned.

Khushi ran away to wash her hand, feeling her limbs tremble at this unexpected attack on her senses.

The para above ^^^.. Oye hoyye!! Kya ROMANCE hai.. Mar jaawan! ☺️

Aisa lunch agar roz ho to bhook hi mar jaayegi! ☺️

Second,

"I was not talking about the clothes, Khushi. She is beautiful because of her smile, her open eyes, the love I can see in them, her kind heart... All these are yours, Khushi...", he said softly.

This was ^^^ such a true statement made by Arnav! A person is beautiful by their nature and not by looks! *bows down to you Smita* ⭐️

Third,

"Arnavji, I am going to cut these pictures and fix them on my wall. That way, I can look at them and see you whenever I want.", Khushi declared.

Arnav smiled at her.

"You don't have to do that, Khushi. Just call me whenever you want to see me. I will appear before you.", he offered.

Khushi blushed.

Arnav turned the page reverently.

This was ^^^ another small convo that made me stun! It was sooo ROMANTIC! I mean.. Imagine ASR say this! *faints* ☺️

Fourth,

THE LAST 2 PHOTOGRAPHS!

Completely went *thud* after reading the explanation!

Photograph 1:

Khushi was in a pink, silver, gold, & sea green lehenga.

They were dancing, lost to the world.

Khushi was caught close to Arnav, his arms tight around her bare waist. Their bodies were pressed together from chest downwards, and her feet were off the ground. Arnav was twirling her around, and her skirt was flowing around her.

Her arms were coiled around his neck, and her head was tilted backwards on her slender, swan-like neck. They were lost in each other, their eyes seeing nothing but each other. Love, desire, passion, hunger... they seemed to set fire to the paper...

Khushi gulped, and stole a glance at Arnavji. He was looking at her with burning, molten, chocolate eyes.

Khushi quickly averted her eyes, and hurried to turn the page.

In this ^^^ Haaye.. Arnav ji.. You must be feeling like "Marry Me NOW!" 😳 😆

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Photograph 2:

The bedroom was dark. The antique bed was decorated with a net of fragrant flowers, Sweet-smelling candles vied with the flowers to perfume the air.

Through the chains of rajnigandha and rose petals, Khushi could be seen sitting on the bed, waiting for her bridegroom. She was in a red and green lehenga, the rich dupatta covering part of her head. Her sindoor-filled maang was visible. Her bindi, her nath, her heavy earrings, mangalsutra, her necklace with rubies and emeralds, her armlets, her bangles, her dark mehendi...

The hem of her lehenga lay on her feet, showing off the deep colour of her mehendi and her silver payal. Her knees were raised in typical bride-on-suhaag raat pose, and her nervous fingers clutched each other on her knees.

Arnav stood a little away, as though he had just entered the room and was walking towards her. Light focused more on his face and fell on his white sherwani in a diffused manner.

Arnav looked as though he had just glimpsed his dearest desire. As though he couldn't believe his eyes. As though he were scared to approach her for fear that she would vanish in a puff of smoke. As though he wanted to clasp her to him so tight that nothing could take her away from him. As though...

Khushi's eyes were lowered, as though she could feel her Arnavji's eyes on her. Her lips had a red tinge that owed nothing to makeup, and her cheeks were rosy with bashfulness and anticipation. The diamonds in her mangalsutra glinted in the dim light...

Khushi shut the magazine hastily, and held it close to her heart, trying to control her rapid breathing.

Smita.. You got me ogling at this photograph that I myself forgot to breathe as I read this para! ☺️ ❤️

@Smita: Love you sooo much for the update... 🤗

@Rashmi: Thanks for the PM! 😉 Love you! 🤗

Excellent Interpretation Rashmi! 👏

Continue soon! Desperately waiting for Next Chapter!

Now All i have to do is..