Smitar's: Finding Khushi #7 Part 25(1) Pg125 (7/5) - Page 48

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, just wow, The update was mind blowing and phenomenal.

From start to finish the update was written perfectly and exceptionally well.

Awww loved there little harmless teasing and banter at the start remembering there past moments together.

So finally Arnav revealed Anamika's true identity, she is a very famous designer and never interacts with anyone and she gave khushi her number.

Loved all the photos described in the magazine, each photo was beautifully written.

Wow the last setting and photo taken was to show there suhagraat, poor khushi could not even breathe at the end, simply amazing.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx


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Posted: 12 years ago
long and very beautiful update
Anamika played a role of an angel...showing their love to the world
they are just made for each other
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Posted: 12 years ago

One looong, heart-warming update! Thank you, thank you, thank you for posting such an adorable picture of Scooby… one just wants to cuddle him! I thought he would fall into the basket," Arnav smiled… and you managed to find just the right picture of a puppy curled up in a basket! When I imagined Scooby, I was thinking of a golden retriever or a Labrador… any idea what breed the cutey in the picture is?

The song is beautiful… is it a ghazal? "You want to kill me before you marry me?" "Never. Not even if you kill me daily all our lives, making me worry about you!" loved the query and the touching reply… "I will match you worry for worry." …they are truly the odd couple, finding the quirkiest things to argue about! Nice to see Khushi not backing down from stating some unpalatable truths in the midst of their semi-serious squabble… how quickly it turns to concern! All said and done each word and action of theirs — be it Arnav's anxiety and remorse on remembering the guest house incident, or Khushi, having recalled his diabetes-induced fainting spell, lovingly chiding him for skipping his lunch just to be with her — speaks of their love for each other… in the blink of an eye the air is filled with passion: trust Arnav to latch on to the fact that her own desire for him is what scares Khushi. So he doesn't hesitate to let loose his naughty side on her! Licking and sucking on her fingers is another introduction for Khushi to the world of sensuous pleasure! Nice to see her flustered. Khushi shivered, and dragging her legs close together, pulled her suit down to cover her knees… that's a telling comment on the rampaging desire she's fighting to control! The beauty of the scene where they browse through the pictures is that each notices how exquisite the other looks, totally missing the fact that they, too, look ravishing… their sole focus is on the true nature of their loved one that Ganesh's genius has managed to capture… Khushi's unassuming nature and her goodness is what captures our hearts: she doesn't consider herself beautiful and, in her innocence, doesn't realise how great a conquest she made when Anamika offered to design clothes for her… all of Arnav's attempts to woo the latter fell flat and his clout failed him, whereas Khushi's simplicity and genuineness won Anamika over… the irony isn't lost on Arnav! I believe that Anamika has things in common with Khushi: both are honest about their feelings and know how to value relationships… money, power and fame has no meaning to them, especially if it stands in the way of forging interpersonal connections… because of the close friendship and the mutual respect that has grown between them, I hope Khushi invites Anamika to her wedding!

"Just call me whenever you want to see me. I will appear before you." Love how Arnav's doesn't miss any opportunity to make Khushi blush; their gentle teasing was quite touching, too! Smita, not only are you a great writer but you also have great fashion sense… Khushi's pink-silver-gold-seagreen outfit and Arnav's black sherwani as well as the white one are just spot on! The way you described the dance reminded me of their tango-like steps during that 'Bali in Delhi' sequence. The embers of their passion need just a spark to become an out of control conflagration, and both know it! No wonder Khushi tried to tamp it down by focusing on the last photo, but to no avail… that only added fuel to the fire! I wouldn't be surprised if that last photo doesn't persuade them to forego the four month waiting period and to jump into matrimony, immediately… now I understand why the Guptas and the Raizadas wanted the same! The themes for the various photos are spot on! Anamika's concept has been brought to life by Ganesh… their shared genius has made the Arnav-Khushi love story come alive, leaving no doubt in anyone's minds that these two individuals are made for each other… Lisa and others of your ilk, eat your hearts out!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updatre love how Anamika' captured them. Seems like the perfect pictures
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow what an amazing update
I was just waiting for this and you wrote a long one

So thats who Anamika is, OMG she's popular and she loved Khushi no wonder she gave her number to her :O

& oh my desire is running high!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I Get Dhak Shak After Reading
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rulama


Look, we don't know what is the relation between Anamika and Ganesh.
There are many things that are unknown.
First what is Anamika's surname.
See she never told Khushi, Gautam was her son.
So we cannot assume Ganesh and Anamika's love in romantic angle.
Though Gautam calls Ganesh as uncle he may be in reality his mama or chacha or just an uncle who is his mother's friend.
Nothing is to be assumed. We will come to know about it only when it is unavelled.

Glad that you found my write-up interesting.

Rashmi.


True but it is fun to speculate and hope that Anamika also finds someone for her as Arnav and Khushi have found each other

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Posted: 12 years ago
What a beautiful update Smita!!!

God my vocabulary has gone to the dogs.. I can't even express the proper worth to your writing!!!!

What perfect Love.. between Khushi and Arnav.. which is successfully captured by the brilliant and talented Ganesh and the person behind the scene who is pulling all the strings is none other than the famous and reclusive Anamika!!!!

Arnav cannot believe that the most wanted designer in the world has become so close to Khushi who has accepted her in her heart wholly without knowing or caring who she is or how much in demand she is from everyone ... even her Arnavji...

Fabulous... brilliant... wonderful... amazing...BRAVO!!!!!

Thanks for the PM Rashmi.. love all your interpretations!!!!!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
ahh where arnav resources ends khushi contacts starts!!
the last pic
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it
anamika wow
i just love her
thanks for the pm rashmi

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