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kvgmatri

@kvgmatri

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Hi Lazyleaves,

Am one of the lucky ones who reached 'Late' late 😊
Lucky - cause I was able to read the whole story in one stretch without the agonizing wait for 'what happened' next!
Such a beautiful, realistic, lovely story. Loved all the characters.
Khushi and Arnav's love story is so perfect! So romantic! And the whole journey from teenage love is so beautifully written. Hats off to you!
Love this Arnav - he's been so perfect right from the beginning. And Khushi is so innocent and cute!
Best of all - love your Payal. She set everything right so smartly in the end!

You are so amazingly talented - love how everything is interwoven and one gets the feeling of actually watching a serial with all the twists and turns.

Thank you so much for sharing your story. I realize there were plagiarism issues and again love how you put in the 'plagiarized titles' - humorously bringing the issue to notice.

I know am not a regular commenter or a friend - but still, can I say I love you? 😊

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Jennifer

@Jennymyola

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#272

a beautiful ending, zehraji! Though i still wonder why khushi calls shyam kannu bhaiyya? Sorry, if i missed reading it sumwhere, but is it because shyam=kanhaiya and kannu is short form for that?

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shaheen

@Shaheen17

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Oho!!!that was too good
even the surprise ...
Luvd it

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Creatiwitty

@Creatiwitty

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Love ur ff. how much ever read abt a navi don't get bored. This was su,ch a cute story

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LiNdASoUmZ

@LiNdASoUmZ

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#275

grt ending,will miss the ff

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AR_EternalLove

@AR_EternalLove

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#276

aww just loved the ending

shyaam punished him well

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kooltoad

@kooltoad

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#277

wow... can't believe it has been ten months already!!!

this story was really a very sweet one! i remember reading the first ever chapter when khushi plays a prank on arnav... and then eating the comments on the story requesting u o continue the os... i thot it all be a two-shot or ss and wud be cute and short but didn't hv any idea that it wud turn out to be one of the most romantilicious-sweetilicious-flirtilicious-cutilicious-naughtilicious story...

i loved the young college going couple - arhi and their journey and enjoyed it absolutely!

for the first time i saw arnav as a younger brother not just to akash(whom he thinks to be cool and addresses as bhai) but also to payal(whom he adores to the core) and of course his Di who is again the most important for him...

i know i was a bit harsh when i got very angry with arnav in my last comment but u made shyam torture him to my heart's content... and later family too... lol...

well all's well that ends well... not that he wouldn't hv otherwise, but now, itna tadapne ke baad, he will cherish khushi forever... :))

i liked the way u weaved in the story of anji-shyamu...

loved bachchi and kannu bhaiya's bonding...

the romantic PSR and Devyani Raizada,

naughty akash and payal (with the fiery flair that u added to payal's character- she was smart, witty, caring, risk-manager and the G!!!)

and of course - loved loved loved the cool, flirty, hot, handsome hunk arnav and ever so charming, lovely, adorable, cute khushi... and their love story - the pranks, the revenge, the sorrys, the attraction, the craziness, the teasing, the blushing, the dance, the dating, the flirting, the heartbreak, the punishment, the reunion... it was wow... :)))

this is definitely one of ur best stories... congratulations and thank you!!! 👏🤗

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Swagata

@addicted16

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Hey...first of all really apologise for the late comment...was not keeping well, and as the title of this chapter says its better to b late thn never so here i m back to my fav story...
u gv us beautiful ending for everyone..👏
poor arnav...shikar of sadism...he he he...i dont know if he deserves three years of punishment but yes its a torture to stay away from ur love...nd then tortue again n wedding night,...poor arnav again i say n khushi as well...but loved the way everyone teased him including PSR:-D
Thankyou Zehra for a very sweet nd beautiful story.👏 .🤗...really gonna miss it..tc ❤️

Edited by addicted16 - 12 years ago

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@Anony_mous

Inactive

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#279

Did I not tell you that I absolutely love 'LATE' ? So to pay homage to my loved story I decided to be very Late with my comment as well :D

Ok, that was a PJ. Sorry for the late comment!!

Well, the story which started with Arnav being late for his class on the first day of his college, beautifully merged somewhere in between with Shaym and Anjali being late in their relationship by freaking 10 years.

What I liked about this story since the first time I started reading it was that Arnav and Khushi were treated like ACTUAL YOUNGER SIBLINGS. No body burdened them with responsibilities or unnatural expectations. For once Anjali was the elder sister and Shyam's role was positively etched out. Payal and Akash were independent entities who had a life of their own and did not warrant sacrifices from two poor souls at every step of the way. In all the characters drew me into this story for they were written beautifully!

I am a sucker for happy-ending but not at the cost of logic. And that's what I love about you as a writer, your ends always justify the journey you take your readers on. It just looks like the most logical end possible.

Shall join your new story band wagon after my sabbatical. Hoping to catch up on lot of chapters at once (I seriously love it when I don't have to wait for updates!) :)

Edited by Anony_mous - 12 years ago

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#280

Why does Arnav always complaint that Payal and Akash were on honey moon for longer period of time... AWESOME STORY LOVELY ENDING so they didnt do anything that night as Khushi went to sleep aww she must be too tired na... and yahan main nay Arnav ko kitni hi galian day di k is k baad bhi us ny Khushi ko chorh diya khair I was really very angry with Arnav but phir when I read abt his condition after Khushi I said JA TJHY MUAF KYA lolz waisay Shyaam gave the best punishment... waisay to bada tees maar khan ban kr khushi ko apni zindagi sy alehda kr diya tha to ab suffer it bachu.. oh Anjali helped his brother nice liked the way u used K3G in this update... lolz they made him wait without any reason and what a welcome his wife his Khushi gave him lolz SUPER STORY SUPERB ENDING u know Zehra u never failed to give AWESOME STORIES each unique in it own way... will miss this FF aisa lagta hai jaldi khattam ho gya...