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Kavyanjali

@kavyanjali08

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Posted: 12 years ago

#751

I don't knw wht 2 say dis chp left me vry disappointd with arnab...i realy didn't lyk da way arnab outburst on khushi i undrstnd his pt but still he sudn't bring out his frstratin on a kid lyk dat...poor khushi was terribly heartbrokn...i guess arnab wnt 2 prostitute area...i'm not sure but da way it was writtn in lst li9 felt lyk dat pata nahi aur kya hoga...nxt chp sooon plz..:)

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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#752

oh dear godd!! arnab and his dads heated arguemnt..and mann was he really going to a courtesian! :O pls nooo :(

and he is a lil bit attractd to khushi? :D temme yess temme yess

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shutter

@shutter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#753

Caught up even before the pm!!!!!!!

yay...

The story looks very serious right now... the setting, the frustrations, the thoughts of doing something for the country > every action and thoughts have this flow in them that it feels like u are watching something that is actually happening in front of your eyes, just like an everyday life would be!!!!!!!!

this is what i love about your writings... that flow, that magic in the words, the way you capture each n every emotion, thoughts, feelings of the characters is so evident... u forget that this is just a story!!!!!!

beautiful update, though a bit sad in its context!!!!!!!!!!

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#754

Man innocence is oozing out of that pour soul

In a way I admire Arnav! He doesn't wants to destroy a child's life nd deprive her of her childhood!

And thammi? I thought she was the only one for khushi apparently she's not! Hmm!

Pranav and Khushi are such sweet buddies!

Is Arnav heading to the red light area to vent out his pent up anger both mentally and physically?

Cheers

ps: this kinda stories with such a disturbing thoughts actually make us think how cruel our past history has been witg child marriage and in no way should we encourage it in this janam!

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Keenara

@Keenara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#755

Innocent khushi 😭 I really feel bad for her. But at the same time I admire Arnav since he is trying to protect her childhood...

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#756

Jenny! Couldn't help but write this second comment after reading the chapter again...

By doing what Arnab is about to do...isn't he essentially going down the same path as his father? Didn't he think about whre his father was while his mother was getting ready to sleep, when he goes in to talk abotu Khushi's doll?

I sincerely hope Arnab would prove to be a better man than his father in his treatment of women.

Edited by AquaSandhya - 12 years ago

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#757

That was rather shocking. I see you've laid down the foundation for future misunderstandings. he'll probably not sleep with a courtesan, but obviously she'll believe he did. Shame

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#758

Jen edited my comments here

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msmarple

@msmarple

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Posted: 12 years ago

#759

Khushi - innocent...

Arnab - idealistic...

What is to be seen now is whether Arnab's idealism bothers him either on his way to the "district" of Calcutta...whether he realizes that he is essentially going down a path similar to his father...

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#760

he really visited tht place...????

his words will really effect khushi in the worst possible way...the traditional she is...she worship her husband like a god...soo, she will do any thing to attract him to her...

awesome writing dear...

loved it...

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