Finding Love #5: COMPLETED - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the twist you have given!

I had thought Aradhana had brought Lavanya with her and now it turns out to be Dadi
Loved it when Dadi's stopwa sign was shown as a sweet gesture and not out of anger and she approves Khushi for Arnav.
You know I love the stuff you write because within the update itself you show how they solve things.
That way without keeping the reader in tenterhooks you still leave them very interested in your work.

Loved it dear.

Looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all...Congrats on a new thread...!!
The Update was fantastic!!!⭐️
The way you ended the previous chapter was like as though there will be some interruption due to La or the other idiot...!😡
But you completely took me by surprise with the entry of Dadi!!
Such an understanding and Elegant woman Dadi is!!
And im happy Dadi came into the picture, this way Arnav's mom understood that Kushi is indeed a gem and she wont let anyone down.
Well i seriously dont blame Aradhana here because she is a mother for God's sake and she loves her son so much and wishes the best for him. Yes we want Arshi together and anybody thinking of seperating them irkes us...But we cannot discount a mother's feelings and thoughts for her child.
Yes it was indeed selfish on Aradhana's part to not want Arnav to go away from her...But a mother is allowed to be selfish atleast once in life...doesnt she?
Im glad Dadi was there to ward off Aradhana's doubts. well now the mother now feels guilty for ever having such thoughts...then again as i said...she is a mother and she couldnt help it...
The moments between Arnav and Kushi was beautiful. Poor Kushi it Hurts her juat at the thought of leaving her Arnav...
Woah...! Kushi had Arnav as her role model and grew a garden following his foot steps. Now that is something so pure and marvellous!!!
So Arnav Finally spoke out to her that he told to their fathers about them...
Waiting to see Kushi's reaction as i can never imagine how will she react because she is darn unpredictable all the time!!
Please update soon and thank you very much for the PM for this wonderful update😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
You give us such a warm story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats on new thread.
The entry was Daadi not la and the nice thing is Daadi accepted Kushi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the update minus sheetal or la.. Arhi have so much to solve themselves, no need of third person there.. awesome update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow.. Dhamaka update... loved that Aradhana & Dadi liked Khushi... and finally Arnav dropped the bomb... waiting for her reaction..
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Posted: 12 years ago
no la no shitall...it was dadi...phew...u naughty-naughty girl...awww ...my ques payal said khusi can apply mehndi somewhere else on body...where...my mind in gutterland
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Posted: 12 years ago
cute romantic one, loved the way how dadi indirectly aradhana that khushi is the right girl for arnav and glad that her insecurities have been removed.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing...they are completely in love with each other.
Waiting to know khushi' s reaction
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautifuly written. No la or sheetal, dadi's entry. N btw d raizadas r so swt. Arshi missing each othr. I love deir chori chori chupke chupke meeting. Btw accordng 2 payal, whr shd khushi apply mehendi. Wink wink. Waitng 4 nxtp update. Thanx 4 pm

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