ArShi FF:ZiNdAgI Ke RaAz #2 THREAD 3 LINK PG146 - Page 44

Amazing update 🤗

Arnav & Khushi closing their eyes in pain, on seeing Pinky's parents worried in concern for their daughter, as they both missed their parents was emotional

Oh ho Arnav is making it more difficult for both of them by introducing himself behind a different name

The line where u said that 'Arnav decided to give his logical mind a break & let his heart take the lead….' was lovely 😃

The scenes at the park were enjoyable – Khushi sketching the caramel eyes of the man who ruled her dreams, chasing the kids & tripping down, meeting Arush, their little talk, Arnav helping her & then Arnav picking up her anklet with the hope of returning it sometime they meet

Hmmm…..so Khushi learnt that he is not just Arush she met a few days back, but also that he is ASR, owner of AR but wonder when & how she'll get to know that he is Arnav, her chosen life partner……….exciting

Liked the way u said that though Khushi knew that she was married, her thoughts were no match to her stubborn heart

The thoughts of both Arnav & Khushi as to how they found peace & happiness in each other's company, Arnav not bothered much about his past coz he felt Khushi had taken over his heart & mind & that he would let God & time decide what should happen & on the other hand Khushi worried as to how she'll face her husband if he returns coz she felt that it was not just friendship between her & Arush & deciding to keep things in control was well framed 👍🏼

Arnav continuing to caress Khushi when he saw that even she was affected by him just the way he was affected by her presence & Khushi giving into his touches without stopping him was well laid down……….Arnav proposing to Khushi was totally unexpected……..wonder what would be Khushi's reaction to Arnav's proposal…..would she tell him that she is already married…..& will he learn that she is only waiting for her husband to grace his presence before her coz she has no idea of where he is????...the story is becoming more interesting

Originally posted by: Mrudsanaya

Hey v3od ,nicely writtenn and hats off 2 u actually not nice its wonderful.oh god!arshi are more than friends and they feel it...great but in the middle u wrote arnav bhaiyya??that should be arush right?? Any ways i liked it but pls who writes next update make arnav say khushi his real name...pls pls i cant read the story with arush name;-(;-(...asr's proposal is amazing:-O:-O ..and unexpected!%-):-O...arshi scenes r superb:-*...waiting for khushis reply nd hope she does not dissapoint asr%-):-|...v3od u r lithium of this collab ;-):-D:-*