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Posted: 12 years ago
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luvly nxt tym u update plz msg me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey amazing story yr...
will lyk to read further...
pm Me when u update...I will send u buddy request...

thnx for d pm vibhu...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heyyy vampuu.. New story huh?
I luved it to core...
Nd dat touch was of virat for sure... Lol
plzzz update asap
i cant wait for d next part nd thanxfor d pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's very intresting
manvi sounds intresting character
would love to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fabulous update ⭐️.. Loved the prologue.. Manvi's character is very interesting.. She is a medical student, she hates her relatives, trying to fulfill her dreams and not a very emotional person.. I loved her attitude 😃.. I guess that special touch was Virat's 😉.. Superb start.. Would love to read more.. Please pm me for your future updates.. Take care 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yet another amazing story frm ya...
Superb intro...Luvd it to bitz...specially ur style of writing..
Manvi's character z quite different but really interesting...
Plzzz cont soon n thnx a loot for the pm!!!😊
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OMGG! twino! 🐷
INTRESTINGGG!!! continuee jaldi jaldi!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Intersting start 😃
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awosome n loved the fact that it completely comprises of manvi's nature attitude n her way of seeing life basically her pov👏
manvi is like a box which is overloaded with lots of emotions n feelings
she has hided all her feelings frm the world to save her it shows her saddest past n glorious future😊
completely love the whole update it amazing🤗
plzz cont soon
n thanx for the pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u all lovely peeps for liking it continue giving ur comments it keeps me encouraging for writing fast :-) plzz hit the LIKE button and post ur reviews

ok wana make one thing clear that manvi is dammm emotional and sensitive its just she hides for not be mentioned as weak

ok enough of my bak bak here goes ur upadate and negative comments and ideas are always welcomed the wasy positive ones are love ya all <3





ahhh!! its been so hectic in past two months mann can u believe i didnt even listened to my fav songss.. oopsss sorry i didnt tell u before i loveee listening to songs specially when i cant talk to someone and i need to cry badly :-p umm but i thing im sure about it i like my new life infact i love it.. all my friends are really cute actually we become a disaster when we r together.. i mean no dont panic we love to study but when wr free we create a havoc in the canteen , class, lobby. ground no matter where we are ;-) thata the reason i love my life naa no matter how much depress i become thinkig things but God makes me smile by any other reason.. i love Him for that..
me dummbooo meine to apne friends k bare mein bataya hi nai o so here our mad gang is
ILEANA : in my words ile.. she speaks much but not as much as i do hehehe sticks to me like fevicol and my mottoo sis is really happy becaz there is someone to guard me here TWO!!
KARAN : im my words karu lol thts weird bt i love when he gets irritated listening to this karu thing he's protective or i say over protective sometimes but i love him i never had a brither but sydney have given me one <3
RIA: umm she just have three words soo i dont have the heart to make it more short lol she's a sweet heart but after our biology class she eat every one's head dont know ise medical mein addmission kisne diya ;-D
so basically we r three girls and a only guy to bear us..

IN CLASS...
our mam akansha she cute but really strict when it comes to studies thats why i love her she keeps us on our path and keeps reminding us what we r here for..

ria: manvi are u getting something i mean i dont know this genetic thing doesnt gets into my head
manvi : "ohh wow from last 15 mints ur eating my head and ur asking me am i getting it listen ria my pea sized brain just let me hear what mam is saying or i will kill u once we get outa here" manvi said grinding her teeth

it was their daily routine ria pissed off her resulting in manvi's anger and then after class mission manao manvi starts

IN CANTEEN...
manvi stromed from the class roon towards canteen stamping her feet and sat on a their table which they always did...

ria: "im sorry mannu plzz u know na how i am maff karde na " she said making a puppy face

manvi: " ria get lost ok before i punch u or something " she wasnt angry on ria but she got 89./. in her test and tht made her crazy becaz she was a above 90./. student

meanwhile karan and ileana came and sat before them

karan: "mannu forgive her kido thts ur daily stuff isnt it" he said putting his hand on her head.. amnvi always loved this gesture as it had a fathery feeling
manvi: "yeah i know but the test urghhh how could i??" she said almost on the verge of crying but as usual controlled heself as now she was an expert to control her feelings
ile: " ohh!!! dekha i told ya karan she was upset becaz of the test gosshhh mannnuu give a break to urself ur the highest achiever and still unsatisfied"

manvi: " u dont know ile how imp it is for me u just dnt know"
manvi got up from her seat to leave but karan held her hand
karan " i know relax u can make it better in the next one na"

yeahh karan was the closest to manvi in her gang as she always felt like she got her father back whom she lost when she was 12.. karan knew it was her maa's dream and moreover manvi wanted to have a happy future..
manvi smiled as she understood what he said and went towards the library to grab a few books..

while she just got hit my a hard thing but maintained her balance
" omgg was that a rock or something goshhh mu head" she said rubbing her palm on her forehead mumbling but loud enough that someone heard it.. when she opened her eyes she saw a well dressed tall and handsome man standing in front of her smirking at her comment
" lady i think ur eyes doesnt wrok properly " he said
" oh!! wow thts amazing first hit somebody so hard and them without any apology commenting on her vision " she said throwing her hands in air
" sorry" he said
manvi was stunned that he apologized so easily but maintained her expressions and said
" u better be i mean its ok but next time u should propbably say sorry before anyone asks u"
" sure will keep it in mind" he said giving a sweet smile and continued " umm whats ur name i mean ur a student here rite"
" offcourse u can see books in my hand and im not that old to look like a teacher " she said with a duhhh tone
he laughed " ya ur right but behave like one"
"what u think im a teacher.. look i dnt even know u so dnt try to pass comments or i will make u kicked out of here" she said pointing her index finger to him
" u can make a try" he smirked and left


" what a creep " manvi thought and mande her way to library

after some time ria came and told manvi that principal has called her

" now what is cooking in princi's mind hope he doenst screw mw by putting in another quiz" she thought and went towards his office


" sir may i come in" manvi said and princi nodded his head
" manvi i have an important task for u as ur one of the top ten students of this college or i should say top 5 " he said smiling but manvi was damm annoyed by his imp tasks
" sir plz i hv to prepare my presentations and i dont have time for another quiz plzz sirr" she said making a puppy face
" manvi listen to me first dear i want u to show our whole college and explain every activity going around to the trustee of our intitute"
" ohh!! ok sir as u say" she said enough excited for a fun task
"he will be here in five minutes so get ready from now onwards u have to be with him on his visits for the next week as the faculty has to be promoted"
" sure sir but mu lectures" i said a bit worried
" dont worry we cant risk your studies so u can get ur lectures and then go around with him as u dont have a hectic schedule for this onth becaz of the coming functions" he said assuring me and i nodded.

after half an hour...

" wow princi said he will be here in 10 minutes and its already 30 urghh dont make me hate u mr trustee" manvi thought

suddenly the door opened and she saw the same man standing in front of her whom she had an encounter with few hours ago

" hey mr princi isnt here so u better visit sometime else" i siad hoping for him to go
" helloo ms manvi chaudhry!! i didnt expected to be greet like this" he said raising his eyebrow

urghh i hate his eyebrow raise he looks evil and a bit handsome umm really handsome manvi get outa ur trance idiot

" what? why should i ? ohh morning greetings wrnt enough? i said giving him back my eyebrow raise
" ya i thought u were here to help the trusty dont u??

WHAT THE HELL!! rukooo omgg im soo dead dont tell me that he's the so called trystee urgh but wait isnt he dressed to cool i mean in a jacket jeans and stuff

" umm who are u?" i said hoping that i wanst that good in insulting someone i really shouldnt... REALYYY"

" my answer to your confused mind is that ur thinking rite im the so called trustee" he said and i looked at him shocked on reading my thoughts "VIRAT.. VIRAT SINGH VADHERA" he said extending his hand
i forwaded my hand with a sorry look on my face as we shooked hands i felt the same thing which i felt on the very first day
" dont worry i wont eat u up that wasnt ur fault "
" umm thnx i think i should go i have a class" i said moving my hand out of his grip
"ok but be on time tomorrow we have lots of things to do"
" offcourse sir i will be" i smiled and left

as i got into my bed started my best time pass thinking but all i could think about was the touch that made an unknown feeling enter in my heart hope it doesnt diverts me from my aim... HOPE SO



Edited by vamps1996 - 12 years ago

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