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vamps1996 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: JESMY143VIRMAN

NICE CONCEPT👏
CONTINUE SOON😊
PLZ PM ME⭐️






thnk u 😊 will pm u whn update ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: iam-in-love

its nice. intresting
want to read more
pls pm me when u update




thnk u soo mcuh will pm u as soon as possible 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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We will the 1st part be update?.
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Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

We will the 1st part be update?.


umm just wait darlingg maybe today or at midnight 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing n looks intersting
cont soon
doesnt look like that its ur first writing❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey beautiful people im here with chapter 1 of my story hope u all will like it please hit the "like" button and comment what u think about it be positive or negative. This update fully covers manvi's character soo kindly coperate there will be virman in the next updates..

chapter : 1
my first day.


SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! her scream made the whole hostle building in sydney tremble. yes ur rite im MANVI CHAUDHRY from chandigarh currently banging my head on a wall of my freakinggg boring hostle in sydney. wana know why is it so? so here it goes

"maa first u stop crying at this instant and u dumb head motto stop giving me lectures to cover ,my body properly and hayee meri jeevika di im soo gona stay away from boys no actually im gona stay away from girls too is that ok!!!!" screamed a tensed manvi. yeah it was right she was realllyyy damm tensed today was her first day of her uni not showing anybody but being an emotional fool inside she wanted some time alone with herself but her faily doesn seems to give any :-p
she quickly shut her laptop down to get a space from all this by adding the most perfectly fast byee to her tensed maa , her nerdy yet over possesive little sister aisha whom she called mottoo or ashu infact she wasnt fat from any angle but keeping her chubby cheeks in mind when she was 10 manvi had always called her this. last but surely not the least was her jeevika di who was just concerned about her mannu's feelings yeahh thats rite manvi never showed her emotions to anyone nor she made anybody realise that her past still haunted her but at the same time made her more detemined to get her DESTINATION. Its not that she didnt cried infact she cried ALOT but not in front of anyone as she believed that this will only show her weakness. her di always knew what was going in her mind but still never asked her anything keeping in mind that nothing in the WORLD can make manvi share her sorrows.she was that close yet that far from her.
close omgg reminds of the intro of another girl who had the same importance in manvi's life as her sisters had was tina. she was manvi's best friend and a hugeee nemo fan soo manvi always called her nemo. she was the one as close to manvi as jeevika was. she always knew manvi inside out but dare she asked anything to the inside emotional and outside sttuborn freak best friend of hers.

"OH SHIT.. SHIT..SHIT..!!!!! not again" amvi thought to herself as she came to remember that amother lecture was waiting for her..
singhning she went back to her laptop to see a fuming tina opppss sorry nemo in fornt of her for not recieving her video call for the last ten minutes in which manvi was trying to put her stuff in her handbag.
"nemmooo.. meri pyalliii nemoo meko pata hai tu naraz hai but sorry to say im not in a mood to listen anything becaz i had enough from the other three ladies of my life" manvi said in one breath.
still angry but realising that manvi only needed a good luck now tina just wished her luck for her first day BUT as usual ended up conveing some tips to keep her glued to her studies and her aim.
" uknow what i dont need them.. i know what i have to achieve and i will meri nemo no worriesss" saying she headed straight to take a train direct to her uni

manvi was a type of girl who was full of life but was never able to forget each and evry thing that happened in her past or should say after the demise of her father. everyone just backed off leaving a widow with her three daughters all ALONE. but pinky (manvi'd mother) never lost heart. some of her courage and some of the little property that her husband left helped her to pass the exams of life and destiny. soo much happened to them in there tries to live a peaceful life that ended up making manvi always hate her life sometimes however she always ended up loving it becaz SHE SIMPLY LOVED HER LIFE . she had always dreamt of a successfull future soo that all the jackassess that left them could come up and nothing else but feel asame of leaving their own blood like that. she was bubbly and the LIFE of everyone in her life. she had promised herslf to hold back her weakness and never showing anyone that things affected her nore than any normanl person. yes she was that SENSITIVE but to her strength she always cried alone in her washroom or any other isolated place to calm herself down and start a fresh every time she wanted..

her very own rich massi was in sydney with her three daughters but being mnavi she refused to live with her as she never wanted anybody's share in her success which she was aimed to achieve.

INSIDE HER UNI

manvi let out a deep breath as she entered the huge gates of her medical university. she had worled her ass off to get a scholarship she always dreamt of and here she was today on her way to be a future surgeon.

" relaxxx u stupid emo freak kuch nai hai once ul get to know everyone sab thek ho jaega ab insan hi to hain monters thori na k tujhe kha jaenge waise bhi ek nanhi si masoom si newbiee hai tu" she thought.. but in the next moment she realised that she was a NEWBIEE there omggg " there gona treat me nicley arent they?
a confused yet having a perfect and most beautiful smile in the world she began walking as soon as an arm brushed of hers and made her shiver like anything :-O
yeahh she never felt like that on somebosy's touch. it was abvious that there was something special in that touch as she was used to study with boys in college and often fought with some of them too but as she turned around the guy went of quickly mumbling a sorry to her.

it happened doo fast that she wanst even able to see HIM properly. brushing off her thoughts she headed straight into the principal's office as she had visited her uni the very next day she landed in sydney. she was that excited for it. getting all the info about her classes she went to take her first lecture as it was only five minutes later.

Her first day had unexpectedly come out to be GOOD. she had a nyc conversation with a few feelows of her class but one girl who was wayyy tooo excited to make manvi her friend nothing else but made manvi goo aww and accpeting her firendship. manvi was fond of friends not all of them were soo close to her as tina was but she mingled with people more easily than other girls who spend days to think that the other person is worthy of their friendship.
she was a really diffrent person becaz she had almost everything in her. happy go lucky nature umm to her LUCKY part wasnt tht suitable.. she lovedd all the people in her life like hell.. but honestly the main cause of her disappointment was that she loved and cared for her loved ones too much and on not getting the same back she ended up evetually feeling nothing else but DISAPPOINTED!!
but on the other hand she was a vampireee for those whom she hated or even disliked which mostly included her soo called relatives from her father's side , some cunning aunties and each tackyy person who eyed her anywhere :-p


getting tired of the hectic yet happy day she flung onto her bed but as usual sleep was nowhere to be seen.. it was actually her MANUFACTURING FAULT since her birth no matter how early she gets into bed she simply couldnt sleep until 12 or smtimes evn 1 am or maybe more.


P.S : if u guys want pm then please like the first post and send me buddy request... will be glad if u guys comment regularly as it keeps encouraging me to write...


Edited by vamps1996 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely 😛
interesting theme
continue soon yaar😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb writing...
Liked to knew next update...
Pm me...
Nd
thanks for this pm..
Try to regular...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow just great storylin do pm me whn u cont
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Interesting update ...
Manvi no doubt sounds one interestng character...
Very well written
Update next part soon

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