Ab Ke Jo Bicherey ~pg 28 new n note~ - Page 15

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Posted: 18 years ago
new part

Sujal was sitting in office now he considered himself in worst condition first for ria another for what happened between him and kashish "how could I do such thing " ….he slapped his hand on table then stood up and paced in his room …..then finally stopped at window , the beautiful city of London was looking like hell at the very moment. It was seem as if the city going to eat him . some one knocked at the door …."yes" …with out turning around he said "sujal" the voice he heard actually stab into his heart it was kashish his wife ….his best friend …wait now is she really because after what happened she might cursed him whole life.

Kashish came with few files in her hand she look at motion less sujal her husband …….she knew she was in love with him but he is simply not ….what ever happen was beautiful dream for her that came true but for sujal it was a "mistake". What is now difference left between akshat and sujal . the only difference was akshat left her and sujal will remain with her till his last breath as he promise she was commodity then ……is commodity now ……!

She cleared her throat sujal turned around "hi kashish have a seat " how formal they have became she thought for once " thank you sujal " she took her seat " tomorrow is first hearing of ria's case " …sujal with out any eye contact "yes I know I was thinking about that only " she smiled "at least you care for my daughter " she thought . he now look up and said "kashish " ….she looked up to and first time in last 7 minutes they made eye contact "yes " ……. "kashish I am sorry what ever happened was …….. ..i am sorry ….it was " …" not a mistake sujal " …she said coldly " it might be for you but for me it is not …..i know you don't have feelings for me but sujal today I will remain quite I love you ….from deep down heart and soul ………" …sujal " but kashish I don't love you " ……" I know …I am not asking even though when I love you I never expect that you will also love me back ……the love I have for you is enough for my whole span …….but if destiny bless me one day and I become able to get your love too …I will be blessed in true meanings" saying this she left .

Akshat making a coffee when a door bell rand he kept the cup cown and went to heck who is on the door he opened was shocked " you" ……kashish entered "yes me …." Akshat take a side kashish fully entered in house " …"akshat what you think …you can snatch ria from us …." ..akshat gave an evil smirk " I don't think so …………..become I am sure about it " ……kashish turned around "on what basis that she is your biological daughter " akshat …."yes why "……kashish smiled "you love her right "………akshat nods "true "……..kashish become angry and yelled "jhoot " …….."ur a liar u were liar and will be remain liar till ur last breath u want ria because now u are not able to become father again ……u married charu …….right and met an accident ….due to an operation u lost your reproductory parts ……and as you were are of ria now you come to take her" …akshat was shocked that kashish finally reach to deep down secret. " who told you this " ……..kashish now give him an evil grin " mr akshat shergill if you can find me why I cant reach to your reality" …….."u know sneha she run after money ……she was after angad for money now after sujal for money ……I bribed her she gave me some formal details about you …..and with the help of them I found about charu and your accident "
Akshat smiled "but u don't have proves" ……"proves can be make akshat try if u can get ria …let me try my luck too". She left stunned akshat behind.

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Posted: 18 years ago
amna dear that was justt tooo fabulous... just very nice... me liking it very much....... mujhe har baar tumhari story padna behad achcha lagtha hain... your story are always very damn interesting....... 👏
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tho ab sujal apne aap ko khos raha hain... he is very guilty with himself.. woh apne aap se bohat hi ghussa hain... he is very angered...... usse kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha hotha hain he feels that the city is going to eat him up.... he is in a lot of confusion.....dilemma......mujhe sujal pe bada ghussa aa raha hain.... his attitude is soooo bad.... 😕
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😡 😕 kashish comes to the room now... sujal & she do not look eye to eye.. kashish ke mann mein yeh baat chal rahi hain kii sujal thinks last night was a mistake par for her it was her love.... then he says he is sorry.. & is saying that it was a mistake.. par kashish usse rokh lethi hain & says it was not a mistake..she loves him..& she does not regret what has happened...sujal says he does not love her.. but kashish says that my love for you is enough for my apan..& she even says that if destiny bless her one day and she is able to get his love too then she will be blessed in true meanings.. yeh kehke woh chali gayi.. is scene pe mujhe ghussa bhi aaya..i mean when sujal said he does not love her.. par me very very very double khush that kashish ne sujal se apne pyaar ka ikraar kiya... yahoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
mere ghusse se bada meri khushi hain.... ab the scene between akshat & kashish.. this was way tooo goodd... kashish tho is scene mein poori tarah se cha gayi.. kashish has come to know that akshat cannot be a father again so he wants ria back in his life... ab akshat ke pasine choot ne lage hain.. ab aayega mazaa.. akshat is daara hua... super coollllllllll.. loved it totallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy....... ⭐️ tho kashish ne uss laalchi sneha ko paise khilvake akshat ki sachchayi bahar nikal waayi... patah nahii yeh sujal kab samjega ki sneha uska pyaar nahi... uska pyaar tho kashish hain.. yeh sneha tho bas uske paise ke peeche lagi hui hain... laalchi kahiki...uski tho main.... 😆
tho for the next parts i think sujal will be very worried about ria at one side on the other side he will be confused about his feelings for kashish.. shayad ek aisa pal aaye ki jab sujal apni beti ko court case mein nearly haar jaye to akshat... is time kashish aur sujal ek dusare ka sahara benega.. woh dono milkar akshat ko takkar denge.. aur finally sujal , kashish ko ria ki custody mil jayegi & akshat will be left with nothing... aur dusari taraf sujal bhi dheere dheere sneha ki sachchayi ko pehchaan lega.. he will realize ki his love is kashish.. aur sujal , kashish kareeb aayenge... how is my guess amna dear......😉 ab please continue soon.. me waiting for the next part very eagerly... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
he migth lose daughter or wife 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: cute_face86

he migth lose daughter or wife 😉



i think he will lose his daughter for the time being then sujal , kashish milke will get their daughter back.....😉

Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
i dont want him to loose both plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
Gr8 part 👏 & plz dont made him loose any1 coz he will not be able to live widout any 1 of them
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Posted: 18 years ago
I am sorry guys i m kind of busy these days will contd after eid 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg ewww!!!! disgustingg akshattt!!! only cuz he cant have no more kids he wants his only one!!! that nasty lil' *******!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i no ur bzy and cant continuee but i will waitttt!!!

have a great eid and new year(lil early but ur not writing for a while and eid falls on new yrs eve over here)
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Posted: 18 years ago
amna dear please jaldi continue karo... me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
is any1 continuing this fic????

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